Tuesday, March 12, 2013

Part 97


Part 95
Zodiac Grill
His phone throbbed incessantly
She observed him shift in his seat uncomfortably
K:You should answer the call… (offer)
S:Are you sure? Its Rahat actually (I want to)
K:Hmmm
He answered
S:Hey man!
Listened
S:No I did not get laid, she took a nap
K choked on her food, and stared at him furious…
S grinned “Seems to be!” smiling
K shook her head  resigned…
S: So did you meet him?
Listened…
K ate silently trying not to pay attention to his conversation
But…
R: Corporator and that Commissioner both are sc----g around
S: What did the Governor say?
K: I cant believe you guys! (hissing)
S: Rahat can I call you back?
He laughed out loud… “No! I mean afterwards”
They did more man talk… and her husband hung up
K: You are hoping to destroy my career and you want to get laid (very soft)
The waiter appeared…
Shaan ordered another bottle of wine
S:You urged me to answer it!
K:I knew this was cooking
They ate silently
K: Are you helping Rahat?
S:With what? (acting clueless)
K: Nevermind!
Silence…
K:Shantanu… (helpless)
S:Khanak… you have to understand…
K:We should just talk about it
The silence unnerved both of them…
She was hungry, she served herself more food…
He ate sparingly
K:Why are you not eating?
S:Not really hungry..
She looked at him… she knew he was stressed, he would rather be with Rahat now, she knew it..
It was hard for him to pretend to be having a good time when his work life had just exploded in the morning
But she was selfish too, it was a great opportunity, she wanted to enjoy the progression
K: Phir hum ghar chalet hain
S:What about that Ranbir movie
K:NOT funny!
He reached nad grabbed her left hand, felt her rings slowly
She pulled
S:Khanak…
K:I am sore from last nite… (squishing a pea to hide her embarrassment)
He ate slowly from her plate with his left hand)
S: I promise to be gentle
K:Mmm…mm
They flirted in action….
S: Rahant has too much invested in this gig Khanak
K didn’t respond…
S:600 crores I think… can you imagine?
K:I don’t want to.. what I owe is enough for me to know… (guilty flush)
S: How much is that (gently probing)
She tugged her hand…
K:I thought you knew…
S: You didn’t tell me…
She gently felt his fingers….
K:You don’t wear a wedding ring!
He smiled
S:Buy me one!
She looked up at him…
S:Are you meeting Shiv again?
K: You should just go to the Site… mera matlab meet Rahat
S: Thanks
They looked at each other quietly…. Not saying a  word
K: I hope Rahat is is not planning anything ridiculous….
S: I hope…. Not (“not” inaudible)

12 comments:

  1. wow.. they got an opportunity and Rahat spoiled it... too bad..

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  2. Time mila aur the damn phone spoiled the mood :X
    Shantanu is obsessed with his work to a point that is worrying :X
    lol! I agree! Shaan need a ring a sign to show his a married man :P
    Love them alot and hopefully both will make a decision on work/career moves with abit of rationality!
    Thank u aditeee...It was a wonderful update :)

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  3. Loved it..:) Shaan is very much stressed about the whole Esteem thing..Liked how Khanak gave him permission to talk to Rahat..:)

    Khanak is right in getting worried about her project..ShaNak talk like always is so endearing..:)

    So what is the plan to snatch Esteem project???

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update..:)

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  4. nice
    shan is so much stressed about work
    work is his life
    ooohhhh i promise tobe gentle ha ohhh i love that line
    update soon
    dont know what will happen to their lives after this whole work thing

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  5. Loved it aditee!
    At last when she says that he should be with Rahat, the 'Thanks' which he mentions, i felt it as sarcastic?
    slow and steady the drastic steps are taken..not knowing where they will end up...
    And we are waiting with baited breath...
    Update soon:))))

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  6. NICE update :)
    Waiting 4 wht hppen next.......

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  7. loved it Aditee.........iam finding the recent developments in their work lives very interesting but at the same time hoping that it doesn't complicate their relationship too much!! and yes Khanak should buy Shaan the wedding ring!!

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  8. This was wonderful.
    Shaan & his phone call. i wish khanak hide his cell again :)
    waiting for next ......Continue soon.

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  9. Finally some time for Casa....thank you Aditeee

    The PHONE and RAHAT need to go to hell for a day! URGH. Okay...spitted it out and back to the nicer and cuter things!! I love hand entwining/caressing whatever you call it! It is just romantic :D

    Both seem edgy to speak about it incase they might have to face the thunder...I’m sure they will be more cautious this time ...Although the situation right now is chaotic, if Ajmera snatches the project from Esteem we see the professional Khanak roaring and if not it’s the opposite Shantanu being the tyrant! Its the catch and miss situation

    Update SOOOOON please :D

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  10. aditeeee...update soon plzzzz :)

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