Mangal Kunj
Part 102
Water drained off the gleaming silver granite walls… he
stripped out of his towel and let the needlesspray his skin…. Eyes shut
She hit the nozzle, turning the supply off
S:Khanak!
K: Chaabi deejiye mujhe!
S: Khanak let me get done with my shower…
K:Nahi!
She stood cupping the nozzle, he pressed on it gently, that’s
all it took………… the jets sprayed them both… fair and equal………..
He stared at the water making its way down her face,
smudging first and then watering down the vermilion on her parting, it stood on
her nose tip… a lone red droplet, before leaping off….
S:Are you going to shower fully clothed?
He reminded her
She woke out of her trance….
Stepped out soaking……..
S:Khanak
K: You can go to hell… get lost! (fuming)
She stomped out…. Changed into her floral lounge capris and
a spaghetti strap tee
Tied her wet hair
Removed polish off her nails plotting her next move……… as
she sneezed heartily
Heard a clutter, he placed the keys on her chest of drawers…
K ignored him and walked out of the room
S: If all this drama is intended to avoid talking about you
going to work on weekend, its not working (bit it out)
K:We can discuss this over the phone as you will be in Ulwe
in two hours? (she checked her imaginary watch on her wrist)
S: We are 6 months into construction!
K:SO?
S:What?
K: So that gives you the privilege to be gone
indiscriminately?
They stood in her closet ready to wring each other’s neck
K:I wanted to stay at Vrunda aunty’s
He turned around furious
K: I am going to go sleep by Dadi tonite
S:Try it!
K: Tuesday, Wed, Thursday nite think about it Shantanu (I
slept ALONE, YOU never came to bed)
S:You worked last weekend, so I think that’s suitable
payback
They both stared… they knew each would go farther in order
to get revenge…..
K: In that case…. (bitter, soft)
S:Don’t you dare! (shook a finger by her face)
uff yeh dono :D
ReplyDeleteKhanak is right he is hardly home and now he is spending the nights! she is correct to throw tantrum now officially : P
he behaves illogical aur too bigheaded to admit his mistake :X woh bhi tho weekend mein kaam karta hai but she never complaint till now and khanak is having problems at work he needs to be a little generous if its she works every weekend then he can throw a tantrum too :P :P
me glad khanak finally stepping out and giving a sign it is not always how he wants it :D
thank you aditee for the lovely update :):)
oh no! water spray also didn't cool them :D
ReplyDeletei guess we can try ice cubes :P
I guess, untill she pent out all her feelings about her work, her family..He wouldn't leave her:)
Loved the update aditee..their fight intensifies our love for them:D
Hope this night will be longer;)
Waiting for next..update soon:)))))))
Loved it..:) Khanak won this time..;) Last time it was Shaan who walked away!!!
ReplyDeleteLove ShaNak fights and arguments..:)
He is hardly home..:( She is close with him and Dadi alone..So her arguments are correct!!!
He is so busy in work..She has presently too many problem to deal with..She must miss him..
Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)
love it
ReplyDeleteits ok for shan when he works on the weekends kabhi kabhi adhi raat bhi etc etc and for khanak its not ok ye kaha ka insaf hain shan
uuff hate it when they fight like this but at the same time love it too
last ka samaj me nahi aaya what khanak implied that shan said to her dont u dare
love the update plzzz update tomorrow also i want to know about the last line :)))
Wow furious fight lolzz
ReplyDeleteThis time khanak was fair wit her complain lolzz bt loved da way they fight .......
Aww poor khanak , she faces so many problem this days.
Waiting 4 how they come out with mutual understanding lolzz though its rare b2en them
Update soon!
no one should be walking out..............both of them need to be together tonight!! looking forward for the next one Aditee!!
ReplyDeleteAditee.. knock some sense please..
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