Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Part 117


Sunday Feb 12th 2012
9:22 PM
Shaan: She hit a home run during Casa di Sogni For us (Ajmera)
Sanjay: Raam! Raam has great leadership skills!
Shaan:9 minutes Khanak (completely ignoring Sanjay)
Khanak went back to what she was doing, defiant….
She hoped her husband would punch Sanjay…. Secretly hoped….
She could hear her husband on the phone in the hallway pacing….
He walked into her cube and picked up a post it to record a number… and some specs of something
Glared at her as she stared at her monitor
S:Were you hoping to be carried to the car? (putting his caller on hold)
K:I guesss…. (she smiled innocently)
S:Call you back!
Shaan hung up… reaching for her waist
K:Don’t you dare  (hissed)
“Now what?” he asked mocking…
“Not funny Shantanu! Sanjay bahar hai”
“Shantanu?”
They looked at each other quietly
S:Lets go home Khanak…
She packed up quietly… he grabbed her lunch Thermos, it was heavy… “Not hungry?”
“Nahi” she said glumly
“Taking it all out on the food?”
“Agar aap aisa sochna chahen to” she countered
Sanjay peeked “Hey Khanak, one last thing…” “Or may be a few”
“Jee?” she asked (subservient?)
Shaan looked blandly…. Just collecting her multitude of things
Sanjay:Who Tuesday ko site visit hai na usme I am thinking
Khanak wasn’t even ready for that…
K:I still have to complete that arch thing
S:I thought who last week keh diya tha
Shaan: I will be in the car, Khanak…
Khanak looked at him pleadingly
He responded with a “If you need my help then ask for it” look
She didn’t ask…
He didn’t help
Sanjay whined for another 10 or so minutes before she went down
Shaan:Did you clash with Dad this morning? (blunt)
K: Do you want a yes or a no?
S: Dad says you are feisty… and charged
K stared out the window… the Toureg played some English songs…..
His Starbucks coffee aroma lingered…
“No SOR?”she thought
“I have to drive” he spoke aloud……
“Hmmppfff”
S:Ritu has been making your baby case with me (irritated)
K: How nice (calm)
S:She said you’ve been avoiding her
K:Since I am going to go see her soon…
He paused at an intersection and drilled holes into her head with his eyes…





Monday, April 29, 2013

Thanks all of you guys...

Work pressure has finally eased :-)
Will start posting from tonite

Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Hi!

Sorry!
Have been extremely busy at work :-(
Havent had a chance to even sit down for a half hour when I get home

I promise to update tonite definitely


Friday, April 19, 2013

Part 116


Sunday Feb 12th 2012
9:07 PM
M&D
Worli
Sanjay: You probably think I am nit picking, but I just want to make sure we don’t send anything with errors
K:Hmm.. I understand…
Sanjay: You didn’t change the column length on the last one… if you recall… I know we are working against a crazy deadline here…
K:I thought we already went over the column length issue
Sanjay:Khanak Mr Ahmadi was able to spot the difference (exasperated)
They both turned around from staring at her monitor
Khanak Gujral’s husband stood outside her cube…
Causing her heart to careen against her chest wall like a soaking whip… splatter!
She heard it
Sanjay: Hi!? (who are you?)
Shaan: Shaan GUJRAL! (firm but not impolite)
Khanak furiously calculated something on her keyboard… the images jumped erratically on screen
Sanjay:Oh! Mr Gujral! Heard so much about you!
Shaan: Shaan will do! (smiling)
He wore navy jeans and a sea green Lacoste
Sanjay:They told me you look like a movie star
Shaan:And they were not wrong I bet!
Khanak met her husband’s eyes “REALLY?” she asked with her eyes
S: Are you done? (ignoring her mockery)
Sanjay:We should be wrapping up soon, do you want to wait in the lobby?
Shaan: Nope! I was hoping she could go now?
Sanjay: This reminds me of primary school (subtle mockery because he came to fetch his wife, but Sanjay’s laughing afterwards kind of blunted the initial jab)
Shaan: I meant for it to be (cool)
Khanak: I think it will be 20 minutes
Shaan: 10.. (Don’t you DARE!” look on his face)
Sanjay: How is work?
Shaan:Couldn’t be better!
Sanjay:We are working on a challenging project (your wife is not a genius or anything)
Shaan: She hit a home run during Casa di Sogni For us (Ajmera)
Sanjay: Raam! Raam has great leadership skills!
Shaan:9 minutes Khanak (completely ignoring Sanjay)




















Thursday, April 18, 2013

Part 115


Part 115
S:Ram can find 10s of other jobs
K:YOU can too if Casa del Buena Suerte is unfinished…

They both stood on the either side of the massive bed… her earring lay on his pillow…along with her lip gloss stain…….. their passionate, fiery intimacy always left a residue…
With that comment from her, he looked about ready to explode.
S: I DON’T think I was seeking a opinion or comment on my career.
K:You dish one out on others’ (softly)
He walked around to where she stood
She still faced the bed….
S: Casa de Buena Suerte is my life, Rahat’s entire life is invested in it… I will not let it fail.
K:Look at you! (sneering) You are a DESIGN VP, not an investor
S:Who happens to be the best in his job…
She shook her head in frustration
S: I think we have said enough on this topic
K: I haven’t (as he walked away)
S:Then please continue to say something……..
She stared as he walked away in rage….
She hated everything in that moment…. The work pressure, her family obligations, inability to get through to her husband on starting afamily… and now his sabotaging of her prospective growth in career………
She sobbed weakly…leaning on the bed
He walked back in to pick up his ringing cell phone
S:What the hell is wrong Khanak?
K ignored him walking into her closet, he answered the call……….. talking cheerfully
She picked out clothes deciding to go to work…….
S:Why are you having a meltdown? (bark)
K:Its your imagination (shutting the closet door on his face)
He slammed the bedroom door and walked downstairs






Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Part 114


Mangal Kunj
Feb 12th 2012
Noonish
K:No wonder you are so relaxed you know you won…
S: I did… (laughing huskily into her neck as he pressured her into relaxing)
K: Ram doesn’t have a job I am sure you will be happy to know…
He was totally still….
She tried pushing him…
S: Hes being dramatic…
K:Ofcourse! He is so prone to that (bitter)
Her husband’s hands roved…. Under her skinny tee… grabbing, fondling….
She bit down on her moan….
S: Did you come in to fight? (tackling her arms)
K:You would do anything for your career wouldn’t you?
S set a path of fire on her belly….
S: Khanak it’s a Sunday… I am in bed… I don’t want to think about work
K: Esteem is getting a stay at Lower Parel
He stopped and let go of her… she slithered out instantly… hooking her clothing back on… pulling her tee down…
S: I DON’T own Ajmera! (biting)
K:But are hand in glove with everything that happens there!
S: That’s an assumption!
K:I AM NOT WRONG! (fervent)
S stared
K: RAHAT called Dad this morning
S:SO?
K:Dad had to take the call in the balcony!
S:They are working together on a million things
K:EHSAAN and Dad, not Rahat and Dad
S evaded eye contact
K:You are siding with something completely wrong and unethical
S:He has pumped in 5000 crores into that hole! (bark)
K: So?
K:If he is building in Mumbai, no one else can? THAT’S INSANE (teary eyed)
S: You ARE NOT on the Lower Parel Project! Quit the melodrama Khanak
K:Oh! No! I am designing, Dad’s tropical paradise in Goa!
S:Cut the sarcasm out Mrs Gujral
She quickly colored… looking away
S:It was sincere and genuine, its cheap and underhand of you to acuse Dad of slyness
K:He wanted me to be gone from M&D…
S:That’s again conjecture (sounding not very convincing)
K:I have worked for them for so long, I have a great future, I HATE Sanjay Towari, I was hoping to work with Ram on the Esteem project (venting, crying towards the end)
S:Ram can find 10s of other jobs
K:YOU can too if Casa del Buena Suerte is unfinished…
They both stood on the either side of the massive bed… her earring lay on his pillow…along with her lip gloss stain…….. their passionate, fiery intimacy always left a residue…
On that comment from her, he looked about ready to explode

















Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Part 113


Part 114
K:What?
R: Esteem is likely to receive a stay at Lower Parel… when courts open tomorrow.
Ram sounds grim…
Khanak is furious and horrified all at the same time, at a distance she can see her FIL laugh and chat, still on the same call… he gestures… looking out at the ocean
K:I am sorry Ram…
R:Its not YOUR fault Khanak…
“Its my husband and his family’s” she tells herself, ashamed…
Dadi:Aur lo beta, paneer parantha… you love it don’t you?
Khanak is physically sick now, stares at Dadi…
D:KYA hua? Sab theek? Ritu hai na?
K:Umm mmm
D:Ek to baat nahi karegi ladki
Madhavi: Her husband encourages her silence! (random)
D: Madhavi…
K: Ram…
R: Don’t worry I will be fine… its messy and nasty right now…. Esteem invited the trouble upon themselves… (defending Ajmera?)
K:Yeh kaise keh rahe hain aap.
R:OFCOURSE! 25kms from their Project, Ulwe mein who 5000 crores sink kar raha hai, he is not a fool na?
K:But this is illegal
R:Its fair in construction industry………..is your husband home or celebrating?
K:Hes asleep…(livid)
R:You shouldn’t let this come between you Khanak… please…
K:It has….. Ram…
Sunil:Beta, do you want to go meet the builder today?
Akshay:Prospective builder
Sunil: Wohi sahi hai puttar… change kaam kitha see.. for the Kapoors
Akshay: I saw the pictures…
K:I am sorry Ram…
Sunil’s ears cock up “Ram hai phone par?” (squeamish)
K doesn’t respond… appears teary eyed…
Sunil:Beta, baat suno
Akshay:Kya hua
Sunil:I think Ram told her
Akshay: Rahat was supposed to shut up until Monday Dad…
Sunil:Bachon waali gal na kar tu… Commissioner ke daftar mein khoofiya bandon ki kami hai?
Dadi:What is going on?
Khanak walks back to her room
Sunil:Ma, CM se baat karwayi Rahat ki, kal subah stay hona hai Esteem ke kaam par..
Dadi is confused
Madhavi:You don’t worry aapka BP high hoyega
Khanak realizes her FIL is an incredibly well connected man… how and in what way… she doesn’t know……..yet
She wakes her husband up…
K:Uthiye… (shakes him)
He grabs her and pins her down on the bed… climbing over……
Her anger is fueled further by his explicit arousal…….
She pushes him away as his mouth seeks……






Monday, April 15, 2013

Part 112



Sunday
Feb 12th 2012
11:10 AM
Khanak shut her art room door behind her, her husband was asleep, for a change, well.. they didn’t go to bed until after she returned from the sagai. Well past 2 AM, he woke when she was up at 9, and then went back to sleep.
Dadi:Sab neeche hain beta, tub hi aaja
K:Hmmm
D:Miya kidhar hai tera? Tennis?
K:Nahi…umm… asleep
Dadi smiles softly and walks towards the rec room
K: Sabne kha liya?
D:Kha rahe hai, maine socha tujhe dekhti hoon
Her phone rings on the coffee table, its Ritu
She smiles as she answers, Dadi gestures her to go eat
She makes a face…
Chats with her friend making her way down the stairs
Sunil’s expression changes quickly, from serious to joyous to serious again,
He gets up and hugs her
S:Bol apni saheli ko kabhi Mumbai bhi aaye
K:Jee!
K:Dad wants to see you
R:I want to see YOU, tu kab aa rahi hai?
K:Agle weekend?
R:Pati dev ko kya karegi?
K:Chhod doongi (giggling)
R: He will kill both of us, aur main marna nahi chahti
Dadi: Tujhe parantha ya poha?
K: Poha nahi… bore ho gayi
D: Tere liye muffin mangwaaoon, Towers se?
K:Ummm..mmm
Akshay:I am sure those guys are working overtime trying to squash it…
Sunil: Arey beti aayi hai, kaam ki koi baat nahi
A:I agree (nervous)
Khanak finishes her convo and hangs up…
K:Aap log kal nikal rahe hain?
A: Yep, Taiwan first and then Sao Paolo
Sunil’s phone rings, she notices its RAHAT!
Not Ehsaan….
Her stomach churns
Sunil quickly grabs it and walks away
Madz and Boo are laughing about something funny
A:Why are you waiting, eat… your husband eats like a pig..
K:I know… (smiles)
Sunil walks away as his tone increases…
Khanak stares at him
K:Koi baat hui?
A:Abt what?
K:Dad looks worried…
A:Just work…. Just work…….
Her phone rings…. Its RAM!
She grabs it quickly…
R: Hey Mrs Gujral…
K:Hi! Sunday hai to mujhe yaad kar liya?
R: Naukri nahi hai to yaad kiya
Khanak almost drops the phone in shock…
K:What?
R: Esteem is likely to receive a stay at Lower Parel… when courts open tomorrow.
Ram sounds grim…




Thursday, April 11, 2013

Part 111


Saturday
Feb 11th 2012
8:22 PM
Sunil: You look gorgeous beta!
Khanak swirls/turns
K:Dad… why are you not ready?
Sunil:Mujhe paanch minute ka abhyas de do
K:Abhyas nahi Dad, samay
Shaan:Where?
Sunil:She is my date tonite
Akshay whistles “A smoking hot date!, you look great Khanak”
Shaan:Helloo… she happens to be my wife…
Akshay winks and reaches for Khanak…
Sunil: Bus abhi aaya beta, tum chai to peeo?
HL brings her tray laden with food and tea
Her husband inspects “Aaapke liye nahi hai”
Shaan: I can see that
He creeps closer to her
K:Real Madrid waale naraaz ho jaayenge, aap jaayiye
Dadi:Sunil jao, engagement ka muhurat 7 baje ka tha
Sunil:Gosh!
He sprints
Shaan:When will you be back? (softly)
K: Don’t know (softer)
S:I will come get you…
K: Two days in a row? That would be a record…
S: If you are trying to infuriate me its working (fingering her beaded halter neck silk…
K: You are wedded to your game and to your work…
S:What happens to  you?
K: I will just have to find a man who will have me… (touched his collar)
Akshay whistles as he leaves the room…
S:Really?
K: Gujarati, with a goatee… (traces his jaw with her index finger)