Thursday, April 18, 2013

Part 115


Part 115
S:Ram can find 10s of other jobs
K:YOU can too if Casa del Buena Suerte is unfinished…

They both stood on the either side of the massive bed… her earring lay on his pillow…along with her lip gloss stain…….. their passionate, fiery intimacy always left a residue…
With that comment from her, he looked about ready to explode.
S: I DON’T think I was seeking a opinion or comment on my career.
K:You dish one out on others’ (softly)
He walked around to where she stood
She still faced the bed….
S: Casa de Buena Suerte is my life, Rahat’s entire life is invested in it… I will not let it fail.
K:Look at you! (sneering) You are a DESIGN VP, not an investor
S:Who happens to be the best in his job…
She shook her head in frustration
S: I think we have said enough on this topic
K: I haven’t (as he walked away)
S:Then please continue to say something……..
She stared as he walked away in rage….
She hated everything in that moment…. The work pressure, her family obligations, inability to get through to her husband on starting afamily… and now his sabotaging of her prospective growth in career………
She sobbed weakly…leaning on the bed
He walked back in to pick up his ringing cell phone
S:What the hell is wrong Khanak?
K ignored him walking into her closet, he answered the call……….. talking cheerfully
She picked out clothes deciding to go to work…….
S:Why are you having a meltdown? (bark)
K:Its your imagination (shutting the closet door on his face)
He slammed the bedroom door and walked downstairs






9 comments:

  1. hmmm.. looks like Shaan is a bit idiotic in his logic.. anyways...

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  2. shaan is acting really mean! that was miserable :(((
    its so sad to see her cry its always about him and him!
    Me sure khanak more upset abt her career prospective and what a mess its brought to her work life she does not like sanjay and being LP meant enjoying her work again and working towards better!
    she is going to back to work! good! let her throw a tantrum and sulk... and shaan should be abit caring after seeing her cry he just doesnt want to see her POV :((
    ek aur update soon plzzzz...cant wait for the nxt!! abi tho excitement level bhi high hai :D

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  3. Shaan is so selfish..:x Poor Khanak..Awww..She cried..And he is asking what's wrong..:x

    Will she pack her bags and go to Delhi or Ahmedabad??? ShaNak need a vacation!!!

    Looking forward and thanks for writing..:)

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  4. shan is so mean here really i know he loves his work but itna selfish bhi hoga socha nahi tha shan is totally wrong here
    i want khanak to be strong and ignore shan completely tabhi shayad uski akal thikane aaye now khanak has to win this its khanak's time now not shan
    shan should feel guilty about this later but i doubt that
    lets c aage kya hota hain
    aditee u write so small updates yaar thoda size bada karona
    update soon

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  5. Oh god!! I don't know when her outburst is going to happen?
    I agree he's selfish! But that's SHAAN!!
    I guess, her week trip to her family is going to happen in the next moment:p
    Felt bad for khanak..nothing is happening as she wanted it to be:(
    Upset with shaann! Can he just listen to her patiently? He can't do any thing, but he can listen right?? Like he does sometimes..
    Waiting for next..update soon:)))))

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  6. Sorry for the late reply!
    Read the last two and it was explosive!

    He is acting such a pain in urgh! Excuse.
    He reasoning was contradicting!
    Thats the problem between them. They DONT talk AT ALL about the more important aspects!
    AND He need to be abit sensitive...I dont expect him to completely understand but his acting PLAIN arrogant...Khanak was in a awful state!
    I wait for the moment when she is ready to explode! Right now its all hibernating inside her...I so want her to retaliate in her style!
    She can sleep with Dadi OR She should go Dilli...Prad is there this will serve him some pain :P

    Thanks a ton Aditee...update soon SOON please :)

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  7. How do they come out of this now........can feel for Khanak and can understand her.........Shaan toh Shaan hai.........he acts very unreasonable sometimes.........very eager to know what happens next!!

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  8. Really felt bad for Khanak :( Shaan is acting selfish as usual.
    what will be her next step? Gosh this is making me curious she is hurt badly.
    Waiting to know whats coming next. Will she leave for Ahmadabad, Pune Or Delhi?
    Please update soon.

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