Mangal Kunj
Feb 12th 2012
Noonish
K:No wonder you are so relaxed you know you won…
S: I did… (laughing huskily into her neck as he pressured
her into relaxing)
K: Ram doesn’t have a job I am sure you will be happy to
know…
He was totally still….
She tried pushing him…
S: Hes being dramatic…
K:Ofcourse! He is so prone to that (bitter)
Her husband’s hands roved…. Under her skinny tee… grabbing,
fondling….
She bit down on her moan….
S: Did you come in to fight? (tackling her arms)
K:You would do anything for your career wouldn’t you?
S set a path of fire on her belly….
S: Khanak it’s a Sunday… I am in bed… I don’t want to think
about work
K: Esteem is getting a stay at Lower Parel
He stopped and let go of her… she slithered out instantly…
hooking her clothing back on… pulling her tee down…
S: I DON’T own Ajmera! (biting)
K:But are hand in glove with everything that happens there!
S: That’s an assumption!
K:I AM NOT WRONG! (fervent)
S stared
K: RAHAT called Dad this morning
S:SO?
K:Dad had to take the call in the balcony!
S:They are working together on a million things
K:EHSAAN and Dad, not Rahat and Dad
S evaded eye contact
K:You are siding with something completely wrong and
unethical
S:He has pumped in 5000 crores into that hole! (bark)
K: So?
K:If he is building in Mumbai, no one else can? THAT’S INSANE
(teary eyed)
S: You ARE NOT on the Lower Parel Project! Quit the
melodrama Khanak
K:Oh! No! I am designing, Dad’s tropical paradise in Goa!
S:Cut the sarcasm out Mrs Gujral
She quickly colored… looking away
S:It was sincere and genuine, its cheap and underhand of you
to acuse Dad of slyness
K:He wanted me to be gone from M&D…
S:That’s again conjecture (sounding not very convincing)
K:I have worked for them for so long, I have a great future,
I HATE Sanjay Towari, I was hoping to work with Ram on the Esteem project
(venting, crying towards the end)
S:Ram can find 10s of other jobs
K:YOU can too if Casa del Buena Suerte is unfinished…
They both stood on the either side of the massive bed… her
earring lay on his pillow…along with her lip gloss stain…….. their passionate,
fiery intimacy always left a residue…
On that comment from her, he looked about ready to explode
oohhh heated argument between shanak and heated romance too wooww what a deadly combination :D
ReplyDeletecan understand about shan but i dont know what to say about sunil i think there is still more to come to go into depth of this
when sunil and khanak will talk about it face to face tab pata chalega bcoz its always between shanak but ab situation alag hain shanak ke saath sunil bhi hain
want to know more of it
thanks 4 long update aditee :) update soon :)))
wow!!! fabulous!! loved it!!
ReplyDeletelol!! knew it he was relaxed abt work becz he knew abt LP aur upar se himmat dekho wants to romance :P
khanak is correct in her stance she was looking forward to LP for her career and also able to get rid of Sanjay :(
I feel so sorry for her its always about shaan, his work and him winning the reaction from her was justiified and upar se he is avoiding speaking about his involvement! hope he can understand why khanak is taking this harshly and be abit nice :) :)
ummmm now that sunil was involved is she going to be upset with him?
thank u aditee for such a explosive update enjoyed it very much :D
oh god! Father of all the fights!:p
ReplyDeleteLoved their battering! their arguments were flawless..!
Ok..i don't know whom to blame, Gujral's are influential, and as Shaan had said, he played dirty!
Waiting to know, what this fight will lead too..
She's already shedding her salty water, and he's reached to his atmost rage..
Nothing will be easy..Waiting to see, how they'll move out of this..
continue soon aditee..im on my edge! :P
this was a solid one.....dhamakedaar........loved each and every argument from both the sides..........please don't stop Aditee.......will be waiting for the next one!!
ReplyDeleteLoved it..:) Shaan is blaming Khanak for accusing Sunil..He very well know they ve a big role in the stay..But still..Khanak is not a child to buy it..lol..:D
ReplyDeleteAwww..She breaks down..Didn't expect that..
So the big show down is gonna being!!!
Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)
All parts 111-114 are nice :)
ReplyDeleteWaiting 4 next update.............
wow what an update, Khanak really expressed her feelings this time
ReplyDeleteFights :( that was one heated & last line suggested more to come its not end, Shaan didn't like Khanak accusing Sunil for his involvement but truth is he was very well aware of their every move, I feel for Ram & Khanak :( they were working at M & D since a long time. Both had worked on brilliant projects, But just this one thing :( God this is going to be thrilling.
ReplyDeletewaiting for next. thanks for such regular updates Aditee.
Shaan knows everything and accuses Khanak.. not fair.. Khanak was correct in her questions... 25 KMs is too long a distance.. i dont think that should be the matter..
ReplyDeleteanyway, lets c how she interacts with the family now including Shaan & Dadi...