Tuesday, April 9, 2013

110


S’s phone rings….
He goes to grab it, she snatches the remote and sprints
S:Basil?
Listens…. “Khanak I am not done yet”
K:I AM… you probably must go back to work, Man U wins or Real Madrid that’s not important (sneering)
S:Shamim, ya…. Right…
K goes to his room, locks the bathroom door, places the remote in the bath drawer and showers slowly…. Changes into a lovely orange salwar suit with a flowing kurta and sequins around the halter neck…. Wears sparkling diamond studs in her ears….. massages lotion gently all over before wearing clothes….hides the remote in her closet
Walks back to the rec room with a smile
Her husband is increasing the volume with the exact same remote she hid a half hour ago!
K:Yeh kaise mila aapko

She looks at him incredulously……..
S whistles…. “have mercy!” chuckles
K:HOW did you get the remote?
S:We have identical ones preprogrammed Khanak…….
Makes her livid…….. “its half an hour since I went away, aapka game khatam nahi hua?”
S:Oh that one… ya, I am watching another league now!
K:Great! Main ja rahi hoon
He jumps out of his seat….. “Abhi?”
K:Haan ABHI aur raat ko Chembur ja rahi hoon, no don’t worry I have Pradeep. I don’t want to ruin my clothes
S: Khanak…
K:Nahi…………..
He pulls her arm stretching his…….. she lets him touch……..
K:You are a bum Shantanu! (hoarse)
S:Cancel it…….
K: Anything for you… sweetheart! (scoffs)
He stares as his jaw drops!















9 comments:

  1. Loved it..:) Ha..Ha..:D Khanak hid the remote..lol..:D I remember how she hid his mobile in their HM..;) He makes her so livid..lol..:D

    She must ve joked of cancelling her visit to the engagement!!!

    Its so short but neverthless happy as we got an update..:)

    Looking forward and thanks for writing a super cute part..:)

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  2. lol! these two are rebellious! just want to get back at each other in one way or another bohouutt adorable hain :D :D
    aab Shaan ki bhari thi for the spasm attack!! lol! the sweetheart was unlike khanak...she is a tease :P :P
    he hates chembur so probably he'll have his way again by making her not going :P
    thank you aditeeeee for such a brilliant update...really enjoying when both are throwing childish fits or seriously fighting it makes this story more entertaining :P :D

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  3. He is a adorable bum. Sigh!
    They are too too cute. Sigh!

    Their juvenile retorts are too lovable...they don’t even seem married more like two children constantly bickering :P

    he won’t go I think...he is every time uncomfortable and when it is her socialising occasions he avoids them

    Anyhow loved it Aditee :)

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  4. lol!!! khanak hid it in bathroom hhahahaa
    i knew it shan ko milega
    ooh i love the whistle :)
    hahaha khanak ne jaise hi bola ki i m going shan kaise bhaga chala aaya love it
    oohhh sweetheart OMG aaj toh khanak mithi churi lag rahi hain *wink* ohh i love this khanak
    haahaaha shan ka muh khula ka khula hehee
    oh two back to back lovely updates love shanak love u aditee thanks for this :)))

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  5. Wonderful update loved it :D
    U r killing me by ur shocking update lolzz
    Awesome!!!
    Waiting 4 next part egarly............

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  6. pre-programmed remote.. i shuld try it @ home.. but loved the update.. lets c if she cancels or he..

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  7. lovely part......eager to know what happens next!!

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  8. Sweetheart!! Seriously?! ROFL!!!
    Khanak rocked this!!!:D
    First hiding the remote..then went charging behind him!! LOL!!:p
    Have mercy!! Have mercy on us also aditee..don't kill us like this..please update the next part soon...
    Eager to know whether she'll attend or not?!:D

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