Monday, April 15, 2013

Part 112



Sunday
Feb 12th 2012
11:10 AM
Khanak shut her art room door behind her, her husband was asleep, for a change, well.. they didn’t go to bed until after she returned from the sagai. Well past 2 AM, he woke when she was up at 9, and then went back to sleep.
Dadi:Sab neeche hain beta, tub hi aaja
K:Hmmm
D:Miya kidhar hai tera? Tennis?
K:Nahi…umm… asleep
Dadi smiles softly and walks towards the rec room
K: Sabne kha liya?
D:Kha rahe hai, maine socha tujhe dekhti hoon
Her phone rings on the coffee table, its Ritu
She smiles as she answers, Dadi gestures her to go eat
She makes a face…
Chats with her friend making her way down the stairs
Sunil’s expression changes quickly, from serious to joyous to serious again,
He gets up and hugs her
S:Bol apni saheli ko kabhi Mumbai bhi aaye
K:Jee!
K:Dad wants to see you
R:I want to see YOU, tu kab aa rahi hai?
K:Agle weekend?
R:Pati dev ko kya karegi?
K:Chhod doongi (giggling)
R: He will kill both of us, aur main marna nahi chahti
Dadi: Tujhe parantha ya poha?
K: Poha nahi… bore ho gayi
D: Tere liye muffin mangwaaoon, Towers se?
K:Ummm..mmm
Akshay:I am sure those guys are working overtime trying to squash it…
Sunil: Arey beti aayi hai, kaam ki koi baat nahi
A:I agree (nervous)
Khanak finishes her convo and hangs up…
K:Aap log kal nikal rahe hain?
A: Yep, Taiwan first and then Sao Paolo
Sunil’s phone rings, she notices its RAHAT!
Not Ehsaan….
Her stomach churns
Sunil quickly grabs it and walks away
Madz and Boo are laughing about something funny
A:Why are you waiting, eat… your husband eats like a pig..
K:I know… (smiles)
Sunil walks away as his tone increases…
Khanak stares at him
K:Koi baat hui?
A:Abt what?
K:Dad looks worried…
A:Just work…. Just work…….
Her phone rings…. Its RAM!
She grabs it quickly…
R: Hey Mrs Gujral…
K:Hi! Sunday hai to mujhe yaad kar liya?
R: Naukri nahi hai to yaad kiya
Khanak almost drops the phone in shock…
K:What?
R: Esteem is likely to receive a stay at Lower Parel… when courts open tomorrow.
Ram sounds grim…




5 comments:

  1. You ve posted the same update again..Double posting!!!

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  2. Double posting with different heading Adi..

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  3. i was happy when i saw two two updates, but then realized that you have posted one update twice:(
    Thank you so much for updating:D
    I was shocked when i read Shaan was asleep and Khanak was up:P
    Ok..serious stuff is here..
    OH NO! not sure how Khanak will handle this..
    Her work life has gone down the hill, hope she finds another project sooner or may be a project with Shaan itself?!
    Waiting for next update..do continue soon:))

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  4. This is cheating Aditee. :P I was so happy when i read 113 I thought yaay two updates but its just a copy of 112.
    Loved Ritu khanak chat. they are always adorable. But the call from ram. don't know how khanak is going to handle this. I hope this doesn't creates fights in Miya Biwi as Sunil is clearly involve too. Please make her work with Shaan on his project, it would be awesomest to read it. those little arguments, eyeing each other, fights, everything will be back. & i love them.
    waiting for next.
    Continue soon.

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  5. loved the update.......eager to know how this new development affects the couple!!

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