Mangal Kunj
Feb 11th
Saturday 9:08 AM
Dadi served breakfast, Sunil and Akshay flipped through
newspapers, Khanak cuddled the baby…
Sunil: How is your job beta
K didn’t realize the Q was directed at her, she fed the baby
a spoon of apple sauce
Sunil: Khanak puttar…
K:Oh! Dad… theek
S:Bus theek
K:I love it… (not meeting his eyes)
Akshay: Shes been working for what 4 5 years now, must be a
star employee, the only woman in the rom
K:There are a couple bhayya, but not as many females as I
would like for it to be…
A:Its still a male dominated profession is it not?
S: Our quiet, reticent daughter just rocks the industry
(happy)
D:She must not be quiet at work, or atleast her work must
not be
Khanak is embarrassed….
S: How do you think you will like to design for me?
K:AAPKE LIYE?
Khanak looked around the palatial penthouse apartment… she
could still smell the fresh paint… or so she wondered….. “Yeh to sab naya hai
na?”
Sunil: We just bought a ocean front in Goa beta..
K:Oh really? Kab? (calm, unfazed)
Sunil:Madhavi aaj final rahi hogi, bataya nahi Shaan ne
K colored immediately “No we fight or we make love, we
actually don’t talk about family…… it is as ridiculous as it sounds Dad, but it’s
the truth” she answered her FIL in her mind… but said aloud “Umm nahi… Dad”
Sunil: Ghar nahi rehta, baat nahi batata, WHAT is this Ma?
Dadi squirmed…. “Shhh” she suppressed Sunil’s anger
Sunil:WHERE is he?”
K was quiet
Sunil: He is working towards yet another separation? (blunt)
Dadi scolded her son in Punjabi
Khanak looked startled
D:Who yoon hi chhod dega isko?
Sunil: Kaam tey saare… (he seems to be)
Dadi: Its different now
Sunil:Haan bacha bhi ho gaya, Khanak bhi khush hai
(sarcastic)
Dadi:SUNIL!
Khanak ate quietly, Maria took the baby from her
Akshay and Khushboo were giving instructions to the lawn
care guy by the front door
Sunil:Text karo usko aur kaho ghar aaye! (stern)
K hesitates…
D:Isko jaana hai aaj kaam par, iske bina ek pal ghar par
nahi rukega who
Sunil: Thanks for lying Ma
D:Pooch isko, kal Chembur gayi thi, le aaya usko raat ko
Khanak blushes gloriously
S:She should go to her parents house for a month!
D:Tu kyon lada raha hai dono ko?
S:My son… he needs to be
K:Dad, where is the house?
S:Oh! Sorry! Panjim beta!
She knew it must be a 50 crore or 60 crore deal….
Sunil:Will you design for me? For remodeling it?
K:Really?
Sunil:Haan, main tere miya ki tarah nahi… kabhi jhoot nahi
bolta
She had accused him of the exact thing last nite moaning in
pleasure… as he raided and ransacked her senses and being……. “You hate my guts”
he had chuckled, nipping her…
“You are a liar!” she had complained…
“True..” he admitted, imprisoning her arms…
Khanak wondered why her FIL sounded rushed… Sunil assessed
her face for a reaction, Akshay returned and they exchanged a look……
Loved it!!! Khanak gonna redesign the house that too in Goa!!! Cool!!! Shaan must be more than happy..;) I guess Esteem is stalled with the help from Sunil so he is trying to divert her to some other work..Of course he lies..Rofl..:D
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)
Tomorrow is 3rd #OdhaniAnniversary..So please update!!!
thanks for the update aditee :) :)
ReplyDeleteufffff!! sunil is right, khanak should be aware about the home and! par it isn't their fault either they only get limited time for each other :((
this time I liked sunil ranting sari points valid thi uski aur dadi bhi needs to step up now! really liked sunil conversation about the 'brat' :P
oh goa house!! nice.....but wondering why sunil wants khanak to do it? lagta hai he wants her to stay away from esteem and he knows shaan too he wont give up either :(
shaan is definitely a liar :P and he needs a curfew!
no update today :'(
DeleteUpdate sooon aditeeee plzzz :)
ohh toh sunil is happy bcoz of this very nice
ReplyDeleteand i like it that he wants it to be designed by his fav bahu
like poo said mujhe bhi yahi lagta hain ke sunil ne aisa kuck kiya hoga but nahi bhi kiya ho toh i m sure woh ye design karne ke liye khanak ko hi kehta
plzz update tomorrow also aditee and a shanaklious update :)))
Why was dadi trying to hibernate the problems within this couple? Ignoring them wont do its like sailing a boat without a destination! I rather have Dadi abit stern with both :)
ReplyDeleteBOTH need an drabbing! HOW LONG! Both are inanely busy with work! They hardly actually talk...communication is a issue or seriously will become one!
Sunil rant was refreshing for once...Finally someone is hinting at the major problems with this couple, he is sure Esteem/Lower Parel will effect them gloriously, maybe this is the reason he is talking around the Goa home project to keep her away and maybe she'll give a nod to it considering the amount of misery Sanjay is right now! But I don't want her to...I like the idea of this war brewing between them.
The hint of 'working towards separation has been interplayed in the last two updates...do I take it as a hint the problems arising between this couple will be explosive? I'll love it :D
Thank you Aditee :)
105-108 all parts r awesome :) loved every part!
ReplyDeleteWaiting 4 next update............
Loved it aditee:))
ReplyDeleteLoved their conversation..
Same doubt...I too guess a big fight is awaiting:p
Sunil is too cute...:D
Waiting for next..update soon..:)))
hmm.. Sunil is always in Khanak's side.. he is so blunt... loved the fight mom & son is having because of the G-son... waiting for Khanak to go to Goa and redesign... let Shaan be sulking in Mumbai..
ReplyDeletesuperb update Aditee............Sunil is the sweetest FIL.......always concerned about his DIL!! also loved Dadi's arguments and i wish that her words about Shanak's relationship being in a different phase comes true........well......they can fight as much as they want to but staying away from each other should not be an option!!
ReplyDeleteSunil is the best he supports his daughter-in-law more than his son, this is gonna be awesome then Shantanu will have to take time off to go see her there, if not Europe , Goa will do!
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