Friday, June 7, 2013

Part 137


Cement mixers roared and whirred within ear shot, there were a dozen trailers parked all over the site, the airconditioning on full blast, he was looking at multiple screens, wearing a hard hat, there were two men peering over the screen, wherever he pointed, Nachiket and Basil stood in a corner chatting…
“No, this…. Is a 4feet column… I am actually talking about the truss on the back…”
Guy 1: Gujral, I told you the Project supe didn’t want us to move this thing all the way back…
Guy 2: Mere notes mein bhi yahi hai (consults his ipad)
Gujral was irritated (for other reasons ofcourse) “I told you I will have a word with him you guys! Lets just FOCUS? PLEASE?” he snapped…
“We cant go back and redo it all, just so you know”
People walked in and out of the trailer, trucks dropped off long iron beams and girders…. Work was on full swing… Rahat was expected for a walkthrough in a week or two…
Nachiket:Gujral, what was the name of the junior partner again?
Gujral: We have a dozen firms on this project which one Apte?
N:Oh! The ones on the villa style town homes… arey tujhe subah jo keh raha tha main
Gujral:Gunjan
Nachiket:Haan… Gunjan, Gujral
Basil laughed… Nachiket chuckled…
N:Quit giving him grief… shaadi shuda hai banda… jaldi hi he will be a Dad..
G:Really? (pissed)
Basil:We need humor man!
Gujral:I can suplly unlimited…
Guy 1:So 4 feet columns? (still not convinced)
Gujral:3.976 feet actually…
The two guys walk away… Shaan checks his phone…
Nachiket:How is that gorgeous girl?
Shaan:Which one?
Nachiket:That Gujju chick you married…
Shaan shrugged carelessly “Wait until I see you Mrs Gujral” he hissed in his mind…
Basil’s phone rings…
Nachiket: I recall how she used to look at you during Casa diSogni… you terrified her…
Shaan looked up at Nachiket, suddenly wanting to relive every moment of courtship and pursuit…
Nachiket:You acted as if you would devour her if she would give you a nod…
Shaan smiled a small half smile…
Nachiket:She is afraid of you isn’t she?
Shaan:NO! She is strong! (clenching his jaw)
Nachiket:I meant in bed… man!
Shaan looked at Nachiket, not revealing anything from his private life…
“Rahat texted me about that Maharashtra Road Transport Authority Commissioner that approved that Jogeshwari Vikhroli link project , he might know a guy that can get us the Ulwe –Wahal, Ulwe Padeghal road project…”
“Its funny you would call it a “Project” Gujral” Nachiket laughed
“I know its not even on paper” Shaan admitted…
Both men looked pensive… “When we hand this over… connectivity is a bitch…”
Shaan said
“It took me an hour and 20 minutes to get here on the Vashi brudge, getting to the goddamn site took me 40 minutes”
“We can only hope” said Shaan looking faraway..
Noonish
Mansa
Dheeraj:Bhabhiji aapko paani? (in Gujarati)
K:Mmmm…mmm
Real Est Agent:So you are married again? (looked up and down her form… like she was a biological specimen)
Khanak looked away:Hmmm
Real:Dheeraj said, they are Punjabi
Khanak was FURIOUS “What the hell” “I have NO idea who you are, WHY do you care”
Aada: How much longer should we wait?
RE Agent:Mr Vaishnav has gone to get the local municipality officer
Khanak squirmed… it was hot and crowded… the conversation was distasteful..
Dheeraj:Bhabhiji your new var… I hear he has many cars?
K:Not many…
Dheeraj: Bai said he looks like a movie star!
Kthinks”Your Bai should mind her own biz”
Aada: Beta can you go check where your Bappaji went?
Dheeraj doesn’t move
REAgent:Malabar Hill? There the homes are worth 100s of crores.. are you renting?
K:I DON’T know (“Please leave me alone” plea)
She wondered if the Vaishnavs would have built here in Mansa if Sooraj were alive… if they would have moved here… how big would the house have been?
“Would they live together?”
“Punjabis are big on joint families” Sooraj’s Mom never insisted they live together, though she may have held a grudge”
“You need to behave yourself we live in a joint family” she would hiss fighting his roving hands on the rec room couch…
“I am very careful, I haven’t undressed you”…. “yet” he would chuckle… easily victorious…
“I can hear Dadi’s footsteps Shantanu” she would plead hoarsely..pulling her clothes down, over his roving hand…
“I can hear your pounding heart Khanak” he would counter… feeling it in the process







9 comments:

  1. Loved it..:) So Shaan didn't call and got immersed in his work!!!

    Shaan's working style is always intriguing and stylish..:) His colleges are pulling his legs!!! ROFL..:D Even they started asking him about his "not so favorite" topic of becoming a dad!!! And of course about Khanak!!! <3

    Awww..He is so private about his private life!!! :)

    What's wrong with that real estate agent and Dheeraj??? So eager to know about other people personal life..:x

    Awww..Khanak reminiscent about their moments when she said about joint family!!!

    Loved the pink and blue lines!!! :)

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update!!! :)

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  2. lol! shaan frustration is roaring :)))
    awwwww everyone could see the crackling chemistry btw both before the marriage :D :D
    i wonder what he will do to mrs gujral nw wen shes home :P
    ufff!! kitne annoying hai the dheeraj! but there is sooooo much difference bwt her ex inlaws and now but happy khanak didnt pay any attention all her mind is back to her husband :D :D
    killer blue and pink aditee amazing haiiii!

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  3. Awesome aditee! :D
    As usual the guy is at the site! Now, im damn sure he's going to chew her up when she returns!:P
    loved it when he hisses in his mind!
    The best pursuit ever! sigh!:D
    Khanak and her father are so much pissed off!
    Even i was irritated, what the hell does that real agent has to got to do with her husband?! Disgusting!
    Not liking Dheeraj either..
    aww! the flashback..
    Loved the pink and blue lines:D
    Waiting for her to return back..continue soon:))

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  4. Awww... Thy hvnt talkd to each othr yet...

    Shan tryng to FOCUS... LOL...

    Whos Gunjan now ?

    Hz hoping !!

    Khanak nt in good mood either... Awww... Whole world wants to know abt hw wealthy her husband is....

    D flash back scene...hayee...


    Shanak...meet soon guys !!!

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  5. The most classic and bestest pursuit ever! I want to savour it again and again…don’t mind can we have them talking about what both noticed during a pursuit, just a normal convo relieving some of the moments :D

    It was cringe worthy for even me loaded with person questions from her ex-in laws! But she was compose...crediting her endurance!

    loving blue and pinks...super adorable!


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  6. oh my my myyyyyyyyyyy shan is disturbed bcoz of morning conv with his dad wow i m loving it
    lol!!!! OMG i love nachiket's tease how shan's mood changes in an instant even in slighest mention of romance with his wife hayeeeeeeeee
    and here even khanak is in bad mood
    cant wait for her return
    OMGgggg the blue line ayeeee hayeee very intense main mar gayi totally dead
    update soon aditee plzzz :)))

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  7. wow awesome update......
    Loved it......
    shaan is so much disturbed........trying hard to FOCUS....
    On the other hand khanak was posed to many questions from the real estate manager and her Ex-inlaws......
    loved the update.....
    waiting for the next.....

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  8. superb update Aditee.........loved reading about Shaan and Khanak.........both of them are disturbed and unhappy away from each other............and as always the flashback was awesome!! awaiting the next one!!

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  9. love the update! Really well done Aditee!

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