Friday, June 14, 2013

Part 140


Ujjwala stormed past him, inside, Bhaeee moveeeee” she squealed.
Khanak turned around startled, her husband stood in the bedroom’s lounge area…
It was back to being like when she worked on Casa di Sogni, the sexual tension palpable yet both not making ONE move to assuage it…
Ujju:Hey Bhabs… did you meet, Sunanda? She is home now…
Sunanda was a tall, girl wearing glasses, that looked at Khanak curiously
“Bhabhi hi” Ujju screams a lot” Su said
Khanak smiled, her husband stood and watched…
K: I have some of your fave mirror work pouches
Ujju:HOW MANY?  Yess yess yess yess!
K:Shhhhhhh! Ujju
U:Bhabhee u are the best… I am taking you home with me!
K looked at her husband…
“I invite you to try that Khanak” his eyes told her
“For how long?” Khanak asked Ujju
“FOREVER Bhabhee, YOU are my fave”
“There! For ever!” she told her hubby
He approached
“No Shantanu” her mind warned…
He stood by her without saying a word….
“I am an idiot! I am weak in my knees. The guy basically abandoned me, didn’t give a rat’s ass, let me go, didn’t go with me” she fumed… to herself
She walked to her closet, the girls followed giggling, and stretched her hair… the braid stretched for over two feet…. Her husband pulled off the lil tinkling bell of s scuncie at the end….. just as she yanked the rope of a braid back… as her hair exploded into a silky mess……..
“Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh” said the girls….
Her husband walked away answering a call

10 comments:

  1. Awww..... Shanak still nt talking....

    Eyes talking... Passionate....

    Waiting fr d word war now... LOL

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  2. Oh wow!! Thanks a lot aditee:D
    Loving it very much:)
    He very much needed this:p
    I wanted to tell this in the previous one, I like ujjwala's name, its just unique I guess..:)
    Aww!! The eyes n brains talk a lot..Im waiting for the heart one..!!LOL!:P
    Her braid!! Sigh!! He just loves het hair very much..
    Still more into the night I guess..
    She accusing him, can he be guilty? And ofcourse his passion, possessiveness..everything to just add the correct spice!:p
    Continue soon aditee:)))

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  3. eeeeeee!!
    shaan is likeeeeeeeeeeee so adorable his def not goin to get what he wants dis time :P
    gosh!! khanak must be gorgeous as i imagine in my head lol!!
    i want shaan to follow khanak dis tym and her not givin up yet as she is kinda fair on even not phoning her lol!
    thanks aditeee! loving casa so mucccccccch and update soon!

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  4. Hayee beautiful update.....
    Loving the Eye Talk....
    Lol khanak should try avoiding him....
    Awaiting shanak's word talk.....

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  5. Loved it..:) Ujju is too cute..She wants to take Khanak forever with her..lol..:D

    ShaNak yet to talk with each other..But spoke volumes through their eyes!!!

    Khanak didn't cut her hair..Shaan is possessive about it!!!

    He walked away talking..Awww!!!

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update..:)

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  6. The hair tugging!! How adorable!
    Sigh! Eye talking and sexual tension makes such a heady combination.
    He has his own adventure going on his mind! Lets see who gives up the argument first!
    Khanak is justified but even if HE asked her not to go, she still would have as much as I know Khanak!
    I love the name Ujjwala! Very orginal!

    Can this argument carry on for abit long? I'm loving it :)
    Update SOOON and Thanks so much!

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  7. awww the hair tugging hahahhaa shan ko kajal pasand hain, hair, earings aur kya pasand hain woh bhi ek ladki ke lol!!!!
    loved it
    what the hell man when they will talk or atleast say hiiii ujjuuuu i know u love ur bhabhi and we love u too but plzzzz apne bhabhi ko thoda akela chod do plzzz
    update soon

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  8. love it! liked how Khanak compared to when they first met, loved the update Aditee!

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  9. Aditee those were two fabulous updates............i love the way you write about them when his cousins and his relatives are all around.......just looking at each other and communicating mentally.........very excited about the next part!!

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