Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Part 173 Continued...


He stood in the balcony talking football, if he knew she was puttering around in the room, he acted like he didn’t see it, he didn’t follow her and try to flirt as she worked on something… cleaning up, looking through her sketch book, or trying to sharpen pencils… she changed channels on the surround sound… he would change it back… she would turn the volume down, he would flip it back up…
She would say something in between giggles…. He would mute his call and respond to her… pinning her on the wall… she would feel his neck and the creases on his cheek… he would smile deeper allowing her finger access into the cavity….
“Call” she would whisper… when the caller would repeat his name…
He would bind her to the wall and take his call… she would stay there… nuzzling and being nuzzled… for even 30 minutes… he would tuck the phone in his pocket and make love after he was done…
Nothing of that sort happened…. He saw water dripping from her hair when she picked up things to go down for breakfast… it soaked her shirt… her locket on her chain would be lopsided… her dupatta would trail on the floor… he ignored it all…. She was quiet anyway… the silence didn’t bother her… the treatment did!
She went to the hospital again in the evening, Dadi’s driver brought them home… Dadi mumbled all the way about how cruel Avaya is… Khanak was ashamed of putting Dadi through the exact similar situation last year when Shaan and her separated……..
Dadi would be devastated if we choose to end our relationship” Khanak thought starting out the window…
“Chachi aa gayi Shridi se?”
“Nahi puttar not until Sunday, 10th ko”
The wealthy travelled to Shirdi frequently.. she took Ujju with her since Sonali was gone… Sonali hadn’t texted her once since…
With 25k in her pocket Khanak wont be needed for a few months… next year’s fee was due late July… over 1 lakh… Khanak stared down at her phone… an image of birds Shaan had shot from Serendipity was her home screen image…
“Toone abhi tak mujhe apni honeymoon ke photos nahi dikhayi”
“Its over two years old” Khanak smiled indulgently…
“Not OVER” Dadi corrected her…
“I feel old” Khanak argued…
“We need to do something about that… batati hoon Shaan ko”
“No Dadi” Khanak immediately… shot back…
Dadi laughed out loud… Khanak smiled quietly…
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“Shantanu” she began when he hung up on his call
He realized she must have waited for him to end the call… gave her a impassive cold look and walked out of the room…
Khanak tried to bury the lump in her throat…. Fighting it… as her eyes filled up with tears..







11 comments:

  1. stubborn Shaan.. waiting to c what will make him talk to Khanak....

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  2. Awww..... Hz still not responding to her.... Shz feeling bad bt still same stubborn as he is... Wont sign fr d ownership....

    Feeling bad fr shanak.... Hope khanak make him talk.... Both need each othr.....

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  3. Loved it!!! ♥ So the silent treatment continues!!! :( Khanak must be missing all those things terribly!!!

    Oh..No..Why she is taking about the separation..:O Good..Sonali is gone for now..:x

    Awww..Dadi wanna see the pictures..She feels old..Shaan will laugh and make her to think otherwise..;) ♥

    She called him Shantanu..But he is so stubborn didn't acknowledge..:( She broke down..:(

    It'll be interesting how ShaNak resolve it this time around???

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update!!! ♥

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  4. awww now i m feeling bad for khanak just bcoz shan is behaving woth her like that
    i think ab bahut hua if he continues to do like this toh dono baat kaise karenge and sort this out
    he complains she dont tlk ab kar rahi hain toh khud hi.............
    in between the flashback of their make out was hot ;)
    thank u 4 updating
    update soon :)))

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  5. Awww! khanak is cryin nw :((
    The flashbacks were soooo cute! Lol :D
    she cant tell dadi either that means bth will have to tlk or solve this on their own :((
    it looks like he is going to harsh with her till something happens lol!
    wanna read how khanak will react after this encounter she looks like shes not liking this treatment :((
    thanks so much aaditeee for such a fab update

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  6. SIGHHHHH! The flashbacks! How adorable...his cleft is like her addiction!

    One thing is for sure this cool, distant and defenceless person becomes vulnerable when he is aloof with her...She should know how it feels now!

    This is the last straw for Khanak...She'll either will be aloof again or will outburst or something just has to come up he'll relent...maybe she can feign being sick! It always works :P

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  7. Aditee iam seriously getting worried for them this time.........both of them have their reasons.........Khanak trying to reach out to Shaan is making me very emotional........loved the flashback........just wondering how this fight of theirs will end this time........the situation seems like a deadlock !! will be thinking about their fights and the end to each one of them till the next update........each one of them was lovely, amazing, awesome!! thanks for the last two fabulous parts!!

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  8. Aww!! I miss their fights..can't bear this silent treatment:((
    I don't have any words for the flashback part..:)
    They both are just awesome when they are together! <3:D
    When will Shaan speak up?? same way, when will she break down??
    Sonali! why will she text Khanak?!:P we'll see whether Khanak will pay her fees or not?
    Continue soon Aditee!! waiting very eagerly to know how they are going to come out of it!:)


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  9. Hi Aditee,

    I am an ardent Casa fan since begining but couldn't comment much because of my work timings. I soooooo wanted to comment on this blog since long but didn't know how to do it....finally found a way...!

    First of all, thanks a lot for creating this magical tale. Your tale and characters are so intriguing that i cant stop thinking about them day and night. Confession : I open your blog atleast 35-40 times a day in anticipation of your mind blowing updates.

    please keep writing for many silent readers like me. And pardon me for not commenting on every updates. I will try my best though.

    lots of love.

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  10. Update soon Aditee..Busy ah??? With Navratri Golu..

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