Dadi and Chachi laughed out loud…
Ujju “Bhabhee he is a dork” looking up from her ipad game…
“No he is not” said Khanak in defense.. firmly…
“There!” Pradyun preened proudly!
Shaan looked at his juvenile antics incredulously, as he
followed his wife faithfully like a puppy dog…
“She is a sweetheart” Chachi beamed…
“Not everyone thinks so” Dadi winked, looking at Shaan, he
gulped almost the remaining 1/4th down and grunted… furious…
The women started chatting about Mrs Sood… Ujju did face
time with Sonali, Sonali didn’t have an ipad but borrowed a room mate’s… Sonali
didn’t speak much English, Ujju spoke some Punjabi but no Gujarati… the
friendship thrived despite that…
Shaan’s phone rang non stop… “Dad ne kiya phone?” Dadi
enquired…
“Ya why?” he asked carelessly..
“He needs to slow down he is burnt out” Dadi declared…
“Anil and him have planned a getaway” Chachi announced…
Dadi looked enquiringly “Scottish valley”
“Madhavi?”
“Just MEN” Chachi giggled.
“These two have NO time, whenever they do, they fight”
Shaan stood up as if Dadi cracked a whip..
“See he doesn’t want to be around when I start talking about
his adamant nature”
Dadi complained in Punjabi…
“Your gran daughter in law is the definition of obstinate”
Shaan offered mercilessly…in Punjabi…
Dadi didn’t appreciate that criticism…
Shaan went back on the phone “Nachiket ko bulao aap phone
par, sham ko do structural engineers hain duty par who kidhar hain?”
“What was the name again?” he barked, waving to HL, with his
empty mug… quietly tasting his wife’s leftover samosa… she had abandoned it as
it was a lil too spicy today….
HL appeared with another mug of chilled beer…
“Apne in laws ke saamne bhi peeya yeh” Dadi worried…
“They are so religious” Chachi squirmed…
“He has no shame”
Shaan didn’t hear the rest… he just smirked and walked up to
his room, he heard Pradyun whiny voice from his wife’s art room, he had noticed
her new charcoal sketches, as it lay against a wall when the door was open,
since they were at war, he wouldn’t get to see them any time… Pradyun was an
unexpected visitor… he was sending a message to his wife fair and square by
ignoring her attempts to patch up… but the twerp’s entry was about to ruin his
life in more ways than one…
“Four kinds” he heard his wife say, by the door, the
structural engineer came on the line, he walked to his laptop in the lounge
seating area, the master bedroom has multiple seating areas… the place looked
like a dump… his camera, telescope things… his drawings… some civil engg docs…
stuff strewn all over…
The wet towels were gone from the bed… he hadn’t shared it
since Holi…
He ached for her… after seeing her in that saree his hunger
grew…
“Khanak” he said,muting the phone.... his insecurity over Pradyun was making him forget his anger over her actions.... briefly albeit... but yes... he wanted to say her name....… she acted like he didn’t
exist…
She looked for something in the huge chest of drawer in the
bedroom area… “her” side… he listened to the structural engineer, walked up to
her and placed the freezing mug on her bare waist, she shrieked and turned
around…her eyes big accusing pools…he wasnt willing to give her the time of day
until Pradyun arrived… until he saw her in the saree… now he wanted her..he set
his mug on the chest… she gave him a equally cold look, wiped off the droplets
from her waist… he caught the hand… and they struggled… she not wanting to
talk… him on the phone listening to the Engr…he shoved her slowly against the
wall… she had a bunch of some pencils in her hand… she waved it threateningly…
without talking, he let go of her hand.. and caressed her waist… she buckled…
aroused… “Stop it” she hissed…. The goatee was smooth now, but the face was
stubbly… he hadn’t had his evening shave…
“Subah ki reports dekho aap” he barked into the phone,
holding his wife prisoner…her breathing was audible, heavy and hot….the front
door was open…
“Nachiket hain wahan, unko deejiye phone” he sounded annoyed….she
moved her face from side to side to avoid his descending head…
She reached for his phone with her free left hand…but his
hand was bigger and his phone secure….”I am going to scream for help” she
hissed…
They both didn’t smile… aroused and hungry but not amused…
his thumb was on her exposed semi circle of the navel….. her groan was
unconcealed…she held his wrist… on her belly stopping him…tried to capture his
thumb….”Pull them out of the block C roofing and get them to fix this mess”
Shaan argued with his boss…
He swore as Khanak refused to let go of his wrist…. She lay
against the wall trembling…his face was close enough that she could feel the
prickly beard all over her ear and cheek… but it didn’t bruise her yet….
He smelled like some cologne… the flat black bottle… she
thought… and the beer….he was brazen… he would take her right there against the
wall if she let him…
“Bhabhee, did you do this?” Ujju squealed… from 30 feet
away, from the hallway.. near the art room…
Shaan steadied her… as she slid on the wall… straightening
himself…
“I was going to go see Rahat” he argued…
She slithered from under him and took off… flushed and
unsatiated..
Lovely update :)))))
ReplyDeletethat was so good aditeeee :D
ReplyDeleteloved how prad brings shawn emotions to the fore lol! he knows how smitten he is with khanak n cnt tolerate this :))
loved the 'khanak' after ages! he wanted her and nw she is going to play hard to get lol! but i wonder even if prad wasnt there what was shaan trying to prove from his silence that his not going to take her stubborness any more :P lol
these two are like the first people who ive seen so stubborn with each other but dont even let go of each other sighhhh!
hehehehe! last line was for nachiket i think but she run off and me sure she has plan to burn and stew him till he just hog her :D
thanks aditeee :)
Awww.... Aftr so long finally d silence broke....
ReplyDeleteHe cnt tk prad fr nythng !!!
Shanak aching fr each othr ... Hz nt hvng good time at work either !!
Waiting fr next...
oooohhh that was hot ;)
ReplyDeleteawesome :)
wish pradyun yahi rahe bcoz shanak fight so much and he bothers shan toh maja aaye
shan is so jelaous and insecure thsi time heheehhehe love it
plz update soon :)
Wow!!! Loved it so much!!! ♥♥♥ What a freaking hot update!!! ♥ Pradyun is following Khanak like a puppy dog..Awww!!! He is such a cute guy..:)
ReplyDeleteYep..Khanak is a sweetheart..♥ Ujju and Sonali are friends..:O How Ujju is tolerating her??? Sunil and his bro gonna take time off..Nice..When will ShaNak???
Fighting is one of ShaNak passion..LOL..:D Come on Shaan..You too are a obstinate..Why pointing fingers at your wife alone??? He ate her samosa..How sweet and cute!!! ♥
All it takes to resolve fight this time is Pradyun and Khanak knows it very well..LOL..:D
He is so insecure of Pradyun..Poor Shaan..He called her out but she didn't care..She is giving back your own treatment Shaan..How it taste now??? ;)
OMG..He kept her mug there..*blush* She is right to be angry on him too..He doing all sort of things with her while talking in phone..
The romance part was sizzling hot!!! ♥♥♥
OMG!!! Ujju disturbed..What a timing!!!
Looking forward and thank you for writing a fantabulous and smoking hot update!!!♥♥♥
Gosh!
ReplyDeleteI love how both are artistic in their own way! Very unique!
she is in a simple saree and he wants her. I wonder sometime how gorgeous Khanak must be
I love his HANDS! I might sound like an idiot…but there is just something about the way he says her name ‘khanak’ although it’s all in my imagination.
I wonder if there will be time where they both won’t need Dadi or Prad to break their fights. When one is relenting the other gives a cold shoulder! I agree with Ritu. I do feel sorry for their kids :P
One thing is sure! His not going to leave her with the ‘twerp’ over the weekend! I want him to boil to a simmering point!
Also I want them to talk this out…I want him to just clearly cut it out to her or vica versa!I mean how long will they go back to square one…there has to be a borderline point somewhere.
Ermmm….work crisis? I wonder if the Ulwe problem will suffice again I really want to know if Gujrals are involved more way than one
Uff.....that was sizzling hot!! enjoyed reading the little details of the blazing encounter........thanks a lot for the wonderful update Aditee........and i love Pradyun for what he does to the confident Shantanu Gujral!!
ReplyDeleteawsome update.....! these two has their own language and i love the way you describe that!
ReplyDeleteare you planning something big with ujju and sonali friendship growing ? or dadi's views on sonali thingy would also help.
Its about time that khanak accepts that she is a gujaral.....but that security only he can give to her. loved it when sunil asks khanak that are you feared that shaan tumhe chod dega.
casa is a emotional roller coaster ride for me.
finally Prad made him bend.. loved it... now its Khanak's turn to ignore him...
ReplyDeleteUpdate soon Aditee..:)
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