Friday, October 25, 2013

Part 180


March 10th Saturday
9 ish PM
The family sat around drinking and eating, Khanak was missing and so was Pradyun, her husband had entered the house momentarily and his face broke into a smile upon seeing who was visiting, Mahi… she had texted him during the day but he hadn’t paid much attention to it, she got up and ran towards him and hugged…. “Hey you” he said…
“WHERE were you? I told your Dadi he blew me off”
Shaan chuckled, he looked tired and weary but his spirit was up seeing his ex.
She had visited many times before, as “his girl”, so the family knew her well. Chachi even attended her bro’s wedding in Scotland…..
Shaan’s eyes searched for you know who… Dadi caught that “Dekho his wife is not here so he misses her”
Madhavi: He doesn’t miss her, he wants to run and hide before she gets here.
The women laugh loudly, Ujju “Dadi, you guys are too loud”
Shaan yanks her pony tail…
“They met, but she had to go to Duggals on 3rd floor”
“For what?” he asked blandly…
“U know how much Mrs Duggal adores her, being a Gujju and all herself, she had some post Holi ritual she wanted 5 married girls… singing, dancing and such”
Madhavi: Bhavna needs to shed all this nonsense…
Shaan looked at her as if he agreed…
“Mahi: No Saturday off? And wife didn’t skewer you?
Dadi:Well she went to work herself, Ambika’s son is here na so she spent the evening with him…
Shaan:HL, On the rocks please…
Mahi:He still drinks like…
Shaan: A camel?
Madhavi:It’s a Punjabi thing…
Dadi:Not worth being proud of… his wife doesn’t say anything…
Chachi:Amen! She doesn’t say much…
Mahi:Shaan doesn’t stop, and she doesn’t talk… kahan se mil gaye dono ek dosre ko?
Dadi:He pursued her…
Mahi:I know that story…
Madhavi: I had plans to bring you home!
Chachi: Bhabhi, not fair, what if Khanak hears that..
Dadi is visibly disheartened…
It doesn’t faze Shaan, “Where is Pradyun?”
DadI”Uske saath gaya hai, Ambika didn’t want to, Ujju hasn’t budged from the couch, your Mom hates Bhavna behn’s Gujarati, I couldn’t since I had to organize dinner…
Shaan was slowly simmering rising to a boil…
They chatted and laughed, he showered and returned, shaven, eyes bloodshot, looking extremely sexy in a loose black v neck tee a promo for a liqor company, with a grey shorts…
He drank some more… “My legs hurt” “So bad” he heard a familiar whine…
His wife walked in, in her sangeet outfit…. Hair in a French braid… her dupatta tied across her chest…. Sweaty and flushed…
“She looks like a Punjabi aunty” Mahi said..
“Only looks” Madhavi tried to control her disdain…
Shaan sipped and stared…
“How was it?’
“Fabulous” she said breathless…
Dadi:You haven’t seen her dance. She is a diva…
Mahi:She rocks that orange chudidaar (a lil envious)
Pradyun handed her her dandiya…
She ignored her husband and sat by Dadi… “Mahi is here” “Mahi is here” Dadi’s voice rang in her ears, when she returned from work at 4…
“MAHI?” “WHY?’ “HERE?’ She thought…
She was livid… how DARE he……
“Well shes too tired now for anything Shaan” Chachi winked… “Tu to ja kaam par”
“She is fine” Dadi defended Khanak, lest her grandson really went away and Khanak had to sleep alone again tonite….
“I am hungry” Khanak whined…
Shaan walked over and sat by Mahi…
“Ma she seems like she is going to faint of exhanustion” Chachi argued…
“Oh! Well tomorrow is a Sunday, they can sleep in” Khushboo walked in with her sister…
They all enquired why she was home early, before the end of a week, she complained she was invited for “supper” at the Towers and so didn’t want to fight the traffic so decided to choose her “sasural”
Dadi smacked her…
“Did you dance?” asked Khushboo, looking at Khanak…
“Hmmm”
“You rock that dress BTW” she conceded…
“Khanak blushed nodding a thanks… Pradyun returned after a shower…
“Dadi you invited Shaan’s ex?”
Dadi:Betaaaa! (scolding)
Mahi: Shaan did (winking)
“Oh really?” Khushboo giggled….
Shaan was on the phone… his eyes on his ex… smiling indulgently…
“Tough luck the wife showed up looking like a million bucks eh?” Khushboo asked…
“Even before she came into the picture he would only go to third base with me” said Mahi boldly watching Dadi leave for the kitchen…
Khushboo laughed out loud, Ujju was very curious… Chachi… “Khanak you need to claw Mahi’s eyes out” half serious
She looked at her husband…”Resuming the game from third base tonite? Honey?”
“Don’t you dare look at me like that, after spending the evening dancing with my cousin” was written all over his red hot eyes…
Dadi was absent, nobody heard the call for war...






26 comments:

  1. so Mahi is here to balance Prad.. too good....
    somehow didnt like how Mahi spoke abt third base and all.. lets c how K reacts if and when they are alone...

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  2. so goood! lol! It was unexpected as usual :D
    awww! madz can dream of bringing mahi as maybe prads wife instead! lol! bth can cry together of losing the best looking ppl :P
    shaan did this so he could make khanak jealous! good nw she knw how it feels to be very insecure and jealous lol!
    khanak is getting taste of her own game tchh tchh instead he wont say it to het that prad amkes him insecure he plays the similar game too lol! sach mein they are so alike
    ohhh! 3rd base!! shaan is so ready to get screwed but he knws using mahi would have been the only way she could tlk to him warna she would have cntinued to use prad
    chachi and dadi are such nice ppl, yeh madz hi asi kkyon hai! she should keep her comments to herself :x
    love the blue and pink the war is near to end or it has just started lol!
    ek aur woh bhi sooon i be waiting to knw what will happen next nw :(

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  3. Prad go for Mahi.... N leave SHANAK alone fr d game .....lol.... Game is became dengerous !!!

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  4. Loved it!!! ♥♥♥ OMG!!! Mahi is here..:O Immediately Shaan searched for Khanak..Two can play the jealous game..Right Shaan???

    Madhavi is why like this..Gosh..Always speaks like that abt Khanak..

    So Khanak went to dance..How cool!!! They compliment each other Mahi.Looks like she is still single..Dadi like always supporting her favorite grand DIL..:)

    Madhavi is too much..She never fails to show Khanak down..What was that to bring Mahi to their house..It was unnecessary..When he came to know Pradyun too went with her..He got so furious..ROFL..:D

    Khanak wore Sangeet outfit..Wow..She must look so stunning and sexy..♥♥♥ All are envious abt her dress..Khanak too equally furious when she came to know Mahi is here..She only texted him..He didn't invite he na..

    Chachi never leave any chance to pull ShaNak legs..;) ROFL..:D

    Oops..So Shaan did invite her.. Gosh..How Mahi spoke..:O Eeew!!! No manners..Looks like she still have feelings for Shaan..

    ShaNak are ready to fight..She only danced Shaan..

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update..♥♥♥

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  5. ha ha ha ha!! Your just too good aditee! :D
    Loved the update!!:))
    Shaan is frustrated with Prad and Khanak with mahi! LOL!
    I had not expected her at all..your like a santa, who brings surprises for us, each night!!<3:D Thank you so much aditee:))))
    That orange outfit, oh god! Khanak is looking star bucks than Mahi will ever look!:P
    The only thing i liked from what Mahi spoke was, Khanak's looking like punjabi!!
    Madhvi..ugghhh!! i cant understand her, sometimes she seems so nice, but sometimes..forget about it!!
    I love chachi<3 As she is on Khanak's side:D
    Dadi is also irritated..Mahi can only dream that Shaan will touch the base with her:P
    Now, i can't wait for the next one..im rubbing my hands in glee!:D
    Blue and pink lines were bang on!:D
    waiting for next one..update soon!:))
    Aditee..can we get weekend updates too??!! Please..:)

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  6. Call of war thanks for the blue and pink lines :-)
    Its exciting i agree with Shalini i too didn't like Mahi talking like that but Khanak's pink line was perfect can't wait for next update please update soon!!
    Love u always <3 <3

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  7. Can we get multiple weekend updates
    Aditee ? as always addicted to Casa!! <3<3

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  8. Ugh.
    I‘m gone ignore Madhavi and enjoy NOW instead cribbing about what she ‘thought’ it would be.

    Khanak must be VERY seriously is gorgeous! I mean she even made someone like Mahi green!

    That was hilarious! These two are like the epitome of craziness! Both are extremists going to the edge! I wish you could visually make this story; it would have been a classic!

    I knew he will play the similar game but I thought Ashwini will come back to the picture :P

    I loveeed the pink and the blue! Its got them both worked up now…Mahi has already set Khanak on fire with just her appearance and HER spending time with Prad is actually cruel to compare with!

    I WANT them alone now…cry…fight…shout whatever! But say something both of you!

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  9. MAHI ? HERE ?
    i dont like wat shit madhavi and mahi talked
    i dont like mads here this is too much i dont care about mahi but atleast mads shuld not do this to khanak now
    shan spirit was up seeing his ex :P WHY ?
    prad is cousin and sweet unlike mahi shan so stop this
    NOW i really want this game to continue i dont like wat shan is doing to make her jealous this is not the solution he always gets his way this time he has to listen to her
    waiting for next update aditee dont know kya hoga :)

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    1. chachi amd dadi are adorable chachi should be the khanak's MIL not MADS bcoz she is really mad :P

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  10. OMGGGGGG.......mahi iz here!
    you give one heck of ride to us aditee....1
    Madhvi - URghhhhhh
    dadi and chahi - tooooooo adorable
    prad n mahi.....urgghhhh....and 3rd base huhhhhh ??
    wanna know more NOW

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  11. The leads are at war but still the updates are so romantic that they made my heart race..........CASA is romance at its best!! Finally i could get to read the updates today as it was a very busy week and what should i say about the updates this week......ek se badhkar ek..........kya likhti ho tum Aditee....superb!! even if Shanak are not talking, the passion can be felt!! just Shaan watching his wife sleeping in his dadi's room was hot, the flashbacks of the moments in the car, in the tv room, his anger and jealousy on knowing that his wife was spending time with his cousin........loved every bit of it!! i love when Pradyun comes into the picture and makes Shaan insecure and jealous as it is harmless but iam not liking Mahi's entry and her talking like that in front of the couple and the family members!! now Khanak should torture Shaan all the more!! can't wait for the next part.........thanks a lot for writing such wonderful updates!! right from the first part, every single time i read an update some new aspect can be discovered......this unique quality in your writing is still there after so many updates and i love it!!

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  12. I was just abt to read casa 2 again n realised today its a year u started writing this story!
    wow! you r one writer who still keeps the magic in the story even after a long period :)
    it shows how brilliant u are :D

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    1. Wow..Its been one year..So cool!!! :)

      Aditee update soon..Missing daily update of Casa so much!!!

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  13. No update this week ah? :( As Diwali..

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  14. Hope u are Fine Aditee.

    Happy Diwali to you and family!

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  15. Happy Diwali Aditee! Loved the blue and pink lines best, awesome update!

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  16. Wishing you a very Happy Deepavali Aditee!!! :)

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  17. Happy Diwali.....

    Waiting for update...

    Take care :)

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  18. Happy Deepavali Aditee!

    Have a wonderful one and gorge as much mitaai as you can :D

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  19. happy deepavali aditee . thank u so much for giving us casa 2

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  21. Happy diwali aditee!!! Have a blast!! :D
    Congrats for completing a year! :)))))))
    Looking forward for updates! Update soon aditee! :)

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  22. Happy diwali aditee!!!
    hope you had the bestest diwali and thanks so much for casa :D

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