9:48 pm
Mangal Kunj
She walked in tired and sleepy, the house was full, Maasi
Pradyun, Ray, Aada, Fa, Sonali, visiting family added to the chaos, men were
drinking, Aada and Fa were speaking with Bhayya, not many noticed her entry,
her husband and Dadi did at first…
She gently removed her brace from her wrist… decided to take
her stuff upstairs, HL grabbed her lunch bag and her laptop bag…
He husband walked towards her drink in hand….
S:Did you get you phone?
K:I texted u! (shock)(
D:I was kidding.. (he smiled)
S:What took you so long?
K:Dadi said you were going to be home late
He sipped, slowly staring…. His eyes told her what was going
through his mind…
K:Did you ask Shiv? ? Shiv to contact me?
“Hmmm” he acknowledged lazily letting his eyes carress her
K:Well.. I… mujhe…
He waited…
K:I.. I don’t know him… I don’t…
S:You don’t have to… marry him
She met his eyes, startled…
K:Not funny
S smiled… took a step forward
K:You are drinking…
Pradyun:I thought I will have to come ambush you at work
S stepped back and continued to stare
K:Why didn’t you?
P:Kanak I leave at 5 AM… Mom and Ray at 3 AM
K:Ray?
Ray turned around squealing, ran to give her a hug, knocked
S’s glass over sloshing his SOR, as it splattered over Khanak…HL grabbed the
glass, and went off to get a towel
Aada noticed it… “Oh great! Now he knows my husband bathes
me in alchahol
A:Beta…
K:Aada aap kab aaye? (in Gujarati)
Pradyun:THAT! THAT’S how fluent I want to be
Sonali: Mujhe Punjabi seekhni hai…
Ray:Lets make a deal, we both can teach each other?
(laughing)
Sonali doesn’t have a clue what she just said… with the
British accent and all
Sunil hugs Khanak as she tries to sit “Isne ne to sharaab mein nehla diya, jaakar
change kar lo beta”
Shaan hands her a towel, after wiping his hands with it, and
grabs the next drink, Aada watches him with concern….
Pradyun sits by her…
K:You spilled it… (pointedly at her husband, without taking
the towel “you wipe it for me”)
“HERE?” his eyes asked… “I can do it Khanak, but I don’t need
a towel, I will use my l…”
She looked away…
Pradyun bristled at that unspoken yet obviously intimate
exchange between the couple….
P:I am back for Holi!
K:Holi is so much better in Delhi
Sonali:Dee Dilli chalen Holi ke liye
Pradyun ignored Sonali completely…
K: Is baar Saturday ko hai
Dadi:Lo jee aa gayi meri soni kudi.
Madz: She doesn’t talk yet has the most people surrounding her!
(mocking)
She let Shaan place the towel on the arm rest… she wasn’t going
to sponge off the liqor from her dress…the tiny battles occurred and prevailed
through the family chatter….
K:Haath dhoya nahi (softly, as Dadi offered her a plate over
flowing with snack)
She returned in a moment to find Sonali seated in her chair,
Fa and Aada stood talking in Gujarati…..
The liqor stain smeared golden across her belly….
A: Naha lo beta (trying not to be disdainful)
“I will Aada after my husband wipes it off” she told herself…
but said “Hmmm” Sunil was chating animatedly with Fa
A:Does he drink so much routinely (in Gujarati, in a
whisper)
K’s eyes sought her husband…he was deep in convo with Bhayya
“I don’t know Aada” she said in Gujarati… just staring at
him…
“All I know is when I see him… I feel strange, he doesn’t even
have to touch me” her insides churned in arousal…
A:Kaki said you left your dupatta there, she sent it with me…
K:Hmmm,(taking the plate from HL)
She nibbled…
A: Kitna maas hai beta (worried)
K:I don’t eat any (reassuring)
A: Tum… tumhe… banaane ko kehte hain? (hesitant)
K:Never!
Just as her husband’s eyes met her across the room…as both
their minds conjured up an image of him kissing her belly while she was fully
clothed….. he would do it… she would make him……
Dadi: Mistryji aapka khaana sucha banwaya maine, dining
table par hai…
Aada smiles in gratitude
D:Is ghar mein sabko maas ke bina din shuru nahi hota, I am
sorry..
A: That’s OK (disappointed)
D:I always scold Shaan (proudly)
“and he never listens”
forms in her mind…
D:He keeps her happy (proud)
A:Good! Good!
D:Us Punjabis love our meat, alchohol…
Sunil:”And our woman”… K blushes furiously, as her father in
law captures her husband’s obsession succinctly…
Shaan enquires about Aada’s train schedule…
Dadi: Do you want to change beta? (concerened)
K:Nahii (firmly)
Her husband registers that vehemence in the tone, and closes
the gap between them…., he realized that she will not give in to Shiv’s
recommendation without a big show down…he was unwilling to take no for an
answer, if she was going to be reckless, it had to be under his “supervision”
He knew he was fighting an uphill battle, her will power and
self respect was stronger than he ever imagined…. She could fight single
handedly… and keep going with lil or no support…..
Amogh leaps from Maria’s arms….
Khanak sets her plate on the coffee table and grabs him
Her husband begins eating from it……
They hug and coo…..
Pradyun takes pictures… Sonali plays hide and seek with the
baby…
Amogh looks at Shaan cooing “Ki”, Shaan looks at him like “I
know what you want but shes mine”
S:Get a grip! Bud… I can see shes here (dryly, without making
any attempts to grab the lil guy)
K:You ignore him beta, he loves his Scotch too much to hold
you… mean Kaka!
Amogh lunged for his Scotch… “get your own” smirked Shaan
grinning….
“Apple juice” said Khanak to Maria…she nods
“This tastes awful bebu… yuck… we don’t want this, apple --jooos”(softly, pointing/placing her left hand on her husband's drink, he gently made room for her fingers on the glass's real estate, building a fortress with his thumb ........tight)
They stood holding hands around his glass......
Sonali: Dee aapne SCOTCH peya hai?
Shaan ignores that……Dadi knows what her bahu meant…
Khanak: Sonali are you packed
S:Dee main Friday ko jaaoon? Ya MONDAY, pakka?
K:Nope! Sorry!
Maria:Bhabhi main iska khaana laaoon aap pakdogey?
K:Hmmm
A: She loves babies…
D: Kitna zyaada? Ghar rehti hai to bus isi ke saath…
Pradyun: He adores you kanak
K:I think so too…(squeezes him to her chest, shutting her
eyes dreamily)
P: Lucky guy! (mutters under his breath)
S:Suck up! (aloud)
(Only Shantanu and Khanak knew whether the reference was towards the baby or Pradyun)
Awesome update :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it.....
The blue n pink line r nice!
Update soon......
Aditee,
ReplyDeleteBeautiful update. enjoyed each and every line. So shaan know's khanak won't easily accept his help rel to shiv. will they fight. so liked the way u describe abt the drink falling on khanak. also their looks, ada's concern. totally loved it. finally the blue line is superb. thanks for updating on weekend. hope to get updates regularly
Wow!!! Loved it so much..This Sonali is doing too much..>:O Khanak' Aada is worried about Shaan on how much he drinks..His concern are not misplaced..
ReplyDeleteKhanak is so stubborn that Shaan only has to wipe the SOR stain..He'll willingly..:P
Lol..Pradyun never changes..Poor guy..Wish he finds a girl soon..But really hope that he don't look for Khanak in that girl..Coz no one can be like her..She is unique and only belongs to Shaan..:D Pradyun infuriates Shaan like no other..:D
Looking forward and thank you so much for writing a fabulous update and updating daily..:)
OMG! Update was a treat, like always! :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it Aditee! Things about Casa never fails to mesmerize me! They're simple! Yet, delightful! I dont think I can ever can enough of Casa! (:
Shantanu-Khanak! Sigh! You make me fall for them over and over again! I love it, how their eyes stays connected even in the middle of a crowd! It shows a feeling of some sort of priority, how in a crowd that one person's presence matters the most, or an attraction..thats intact! :) Lovely!
Sonali! God damn! -_- More than Khanak or anybody else, I feel the urge to kick her out of the house! :P Utterly irritating! -_- GLAD Pradyun is paying her NO attention! :P xD
'She is mine'! Hayeee! He says that, or does things to prove that each time..I cant help, but grin ear to ear like an idiot! ^_^
Final part! LOL! Pradyun! kya karoon main iska?? :P Uff! He is just TOO badly smitten by her! Uske sir se utar he nahi hara! :P Crazy soul! Is he not so hopelessly hopeful? :P
Thank you Aditee! And cont. sooooon! :D
HEYYY!!
DeleteHow have youuuu been?
Hope to see you around MORE :D
LOL! I agree on Prad, I'm starting to actually feel sorry for him, he is such a dork! I'm sure he'll come in to terms soon :)
Hey Sonam! :D How are you??
DeleteExams! :'( Living a busy schedule! But I hope to come here more often! :D
I know! I mean, he has to do something about it! Nothing has changed, except he growing more fond of her! He needs to stop day dreaming, and move on!
LOVED the update Aditee...was amazing to see the surroundings around the family after a long time :)
ReplyDeleteAada needs a hug!! Poor guy...it was not a piece of cake for Khanak either to adjust and understand it all!
Shantanu’s sense of humour is wicked! That was definitely for Prad :D love this guy more, like Khanak said just seeing him makes her feel strange! He just oozes this casual sex appeal very effortless in the way he handles everything. SIghhhhhhhhh!
Awwwwwwwwieee! I <3 the threesome! I mean Amogh and the couple...there is just something endearing about both having a banter around the baby, I also see the another reason why he won’t like a baby at this stage...his head over heels mad about her, he won’t digest his own baby will take up her time which he wants to himself :D
Is Prad going to disappear soon? Its time he moves on...bechaara is wasting his time and the world is full of love! I have to say this ALL this time I was freaking out of the chances between Sonali-Prad but I was like ‘phewww! This is CASA no chance of melodramatic storyline’ :D
More than anything am excited about the financial planner issue... the idea of ‘under his supervision’...I so understand where he is coming from! She is careless about herself but there has to be someone caring about her and that is HIM. I wish she acknowledged the fact she is not alone, there is someone for her now who endlessly looks out for her.
THANK YOU so much :)
glad he cares so much for her, he doesn't smother her but gives her space enough, Shantanu is a decent guy at heart, but the issue is here is that one wants a baby and other doesn't
ReplyDeleteboth the updates were awesome Aditee!! loving the way Shaan is trying to take care of his wife........each and every development, each and every situation and each and every interaction in the updates was just superb!! your writing is extraordinary!!
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