She stepped out in the 100F blazing sun.... dazed.... holding the half pink half blue folder.... She had taken a couple hours off at lunch for this one....asking the driver to return home... not taking the car...
She had had a miserable week at work... not being able to keep anything in...
She waved to an auto.... and then declined.... walking briskly to the nearby Starbucks.... entered the freezing confines.... the placed buzzed with activity... lunch crowd.... kitty crowd.... wannabe movie scripters....
She found a corner and sat down............GENTLY...
Her heart raced....
She dialled Ritu... with nervous trembling hands.....
"Hey Mystery"
"Hey.... kidhar hai?"
"At work"... "No sorry in Krit ke saath bistar mein... bol sweet"
"I AM PREGNANT" she said... her voice failing her completely
Her friend SCREAMED AT THE OTHER END.............
OMG she is pregnant how and what happened ?
ReplyDeleteHow did he agree i am happy for them but curious and excited to read about it . U made a leap Aditee was expecting the chembur night part!
Ritu screamed and the file was her report u r brilliant in writing!
Can't wait to read everything!
Please update soon!
Thank u so much i don't want weekend break lol but will wait till Monday
Love u always <3 <3
OMGGGGGGG.....!
ReplyDeletewant to see shan's reaction....
want to know the flashback part of the NIGHT....soooon
omgggggg!!
ReplyDeleteyayyy!!! he does not knw and wnt expect dis suprise or a shock for him :P
is she gonaa run away now? lol!
aditeeeee plz plz update soon this was unexpected :D
OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! Loved it so much!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ Khanak is pregnant!!! Wow!!! :D And she called Ritu first..Shaan deserve to know first though..
ReplyDeleteHow will he react??? Please update tomorrow na..
Looking forward and thank you for writing a fantabulous update!!! ♥ ♥ ♥
Oh god!
ReplyDeleteSo unexpected! You're mini shocks are the ones that keep us wanting and hooked!
He surely would not have agreed after Chembur declaration!
So many questions? Is she going to tell him or just disappear? His going to kill her either way...I want her to speak to Dadi! She is the saviour!
the clock is ticking.....wonder what she will choose to do now.....excited!!
ReplyDeleteWowie!! Awesome updates aditee!! :D
ReplyDeleteLoved all of them!!
Especially the 'truth one'
His bold declaration abt not sharing her..that sent my heart racing!
Thank u so much for all the updates! :)
Sorry for being late..I have my finals around..
Continue soon:)
OMGEEEEEEE
ReplyDeletewoh chembur ki suhani raat kab khatam huiiiii
i cant write much now dont know kya kahu
she is pregnant ? its very good thing but afraid of shan like khanak what he will say or how he will react ? :P
plz plz plzzzz i beg you to update tomorrow also plzzzzzzzzzzzz
8th june 2012 ?
ReplyDeletecan u tell aditee last update ke baad ab is update tak kitne din ho gaye bcoz i checked last few updates tumne date nahi diya
toh i want to know that day and today me kitne din huye plzzzz
wow what an update so she is finally pregnant, all of Shantanu's planning couldn't prevent that
ReplyDeleteWhat a surprising update!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteKhanak is pregnant!!!!
How did Shantanu accepted? And what happened at Chembur ?
Why she didn't tell Shantanu first? How will he react
Waiting for next update
OMG.. was waiting for this.. finally she is going to become a mom.. and she called Ritu... waiting to read more...
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