Monday, March 31, 2014

"Routine"

Sunil joined the group in a few, he was surprised to see Shaan in the lounge....
Dadi defended him ferociously "He has started coming home on time, dekha"
Sunil rolled his eyes "Ma, what did u score in statistics?"
Dadi smacked him...
Sunil:I am just sayin! You are basing your conclusion on sample data of ONE DAY.
Shaan laughed "Here we go!" he said smugly "Beat up on the baby of the house"
Sunil:IN your dreams... Amogh is younger!
Khanak blushed furiously... trying to hide the person that was little-ER than Amogh
Dadi: Kal ko iska khud ka hoyega to that would be the youngest
Shaan: Thanks Dadi! But no thanks! (firm)
Khanak looked disturbed....
Shaan:I like routine.... there is none after a baby... I see Bhabhi... and Akshay... they look like theyve been hit by a truck most mornings...
Sunil:Phir tu kaise aata?
Shaan:Too bad you made the choice Dad! (he laughed out loud)
Sunil did too at his son's brazen cockiness

Dadi tried to be the voice of reason "Its the natural succession path for any marriage beta"
Shaan:Mine seems to be just fine without the baby...
Khanak's belly churned....."Dadi" she stopped the woman feebly...
Dadi:I hope God gives you septuplets!
Shaan:Wont be "God" (he winked) 
Dadi:Thanks ab mujhe apni bedroom stories na bata, khotha! (yelling)
Madz got off the phone

Madz: He must not want any Mom!
Dadi:What about what she wants?
Madz squirmed....
Khanak played with Amogh... Maria went in to grab Amogh's sippy cup
Dadi: YOU wanted a second one... Sunil ne mana kiya kya?
Sunil: Oh! boy! That was something...
Madz:Not funny Sunil
Madz: Life just turns upside down Ma, Shaan is very ambitious...
Dadi:More than Sunil? More than Akki?
Dadi was very passionate today... her words were shrill... she didnt want her daughter in law to win... Khanak's victory would mean, she would go into hiding... that wont be good... all around....
Sunil:Relax Ma! Things will turn around....
Dadi: He abs refuses to talk about it... that annoys me
Shaan was on the phone... her "blingy" one
He leaned while he was on hold "We just need to go up... all this baby talk is making me -----" he chuckled in her ear
She squirmed... "I am already pregnant" she wanted to blurt...
He lingered on her ear....his stubbly... breath disturbing her already fragile sanity
"I need to ask the Doc if women have higher libido when pregnant" she made a note to herself....
"Mmm..mmm" she said weakly
"Thats what I heard through the honeymoon from you" he barked in her ear...
Maria: Maam, iska grape juice...
Amogh slanted it al over Shaan letting the gold liquid spray over....
"You lil...devil" Shaan picked him up and threw him in the air
"Kakeeee" he yelled
"Shaan please" Khanak pleaded...
Amogh reached for his sippy in Khanak's hand now... "I have another beverage for you" he chuckled... reaching for his chilled mug...
Amogh was ready for ANY drink...
"You are so bad!" Khanak fumed...
"Then lets go upstairs" he muttered softly...
Sunil: Grooming an alchoholic there?
Dadi:You guys are terrible...
Shaan laughed in joyed...
Dadi:I hope you have three girls... and all of them fall in love with a guy like you!
Dadi helped yank Amogh from Shaan's arms and handed him to Khanak...
Dadi:You should have run away... gone back to Ahmedabad... ekdum chup chaap... you should have let him burn and stew (in Punjabi)
Khanak turned red....
Shaan was expressionless... he didnt say anything
Both him and Khanak knew they would have sought each other out....
Dadi:Dhoondta rehda si... deewana (Dadi cursed her grandson fondly)
He spoke on his phone.... staring at the two women....
Dadi:You are too nice to him puttar

Khanak:I know (quick)
Shaan put his call on hold "Thanks Dadi... love you too" (snarky)
Dadi:She puts up with you! You are arrogant and selfish...
Shaan:Dont put words in her mouth! Call you back" he said to the caller... hanging up...
Dadi: You must be hungry beta... let me get you something to eat, urging Khanak to go with her...
Khanak started to get up
Shaan: What about me?
Dadi:Get your own food.. you carnivore...
Shaan laughed...latching on to his wife bangles...
Khanak:I have to go!
Shaan: Nahi (firmly)

9 comments:

  1. omg!!! missed casa so much!!! aditee thanks so much :))))
    it was so briilant and wonderful to read casa lol! i really loved dadi she is such a awesome and helpful character
    awwww!! dadi jaise kio nahi i really appreciate her strong support for khanak n nw she knows too shaan wont be happy abt the baby :((
    shaans reasons are very strong n it seems like no one is able to change his mind as he is so stubborn on what he wants :((
    hayyyeee amogh can say Kakee now lol! how cute! he loves amogh so much but jst doesnt want any responsibility of children lol! he has a funny logic lol!
    loved their conversation between them he wont let her go and she will go it looks like and i think dadi will have to agree too after his reaction this time :((

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  2. how cute Amogh can say Kakee now, Shantanu still doesn't know, can't wait for his reaction

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  3. missed reading casa......thank you aditi.........shaan is more vocal about the no child policy than before.....seems Dadi even got to know her favourite grandsons explicit rejection of the idea.......we are heading for a separation....the pink and blue seems like its a reflection of what is coming.....enjoyed it tremendously....

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  4. OMG dadi is a rockstar :)
    she is so right she cant let khanak win otherwise she will be gone without informing dadi too :(
    but shan is sooo adamant at the end he is the father and he is more important he has to know
    i m worried shan is still adamant about baby wen khanak will reveal what will be his reaction :P
    hehehheheeee he is sooooo selfish baby talk is making him ........ lol so he wants to go upstairs with khanak does he need reason for that hehhehehehheeee
    awww amogh is sooooo cute
    go dadi i m with you not with khanak nor with shan :(
    aditee thanks for long update
    plzzz next update me khanak reveal kare but before that little romance will do ;)
    update soon:)

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  5. Loved it!!! ♥ Dadi never misses chance to praise Shaan..All are unaware that a younger offspring is growing in Khanak except her and dadi..Gosh..How will Shaan react to this news? #Sigh

    Shaan is so blunt and open..lol..Hope ShaNak ve twins..♥

    Dadi trying her best to convince him and everyone..But all are sticking to their views on baby..

    Amogh is too cute..Separation is in cards..Poor Shaan!!!

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!! ♥

    P.S: Missed Casa a lot!!! Please daily update Aditee!!! :)

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  6. Loved it Aditee <3 <3
    Missed Casa but happy we got an update :-)
    He doesn't want baby now he has told many times but now it happened and he doesn't know i want to know his mind thoughts and what happened in Chembur eagerly waiting to read the future parts :-)
    Dadi is trying her best will Khanak tell him and convince him or will she leave without telling ?
    Thank u for the lovely update!
    Love u loads <3 <3

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  7. Aditee superb update
    Missed Casa so much and glad you have updated

    Except Dadi no one knows youngest one is growing in Khanak

    Dadi rocked this update. She tried to convince all but everyone stick to their words and she don't want Khanak to win and go away hiding and loved the way she supports Khanak

    Shantanu was adamant on no baby policy and dadi wished septuplets for him :)

    Wow Amogh called Khanak as Khakhee ................ so cute :)
    Shantanu loves Amogh but he didn't want his any

    Waiting for Shantanu's reaction after knowing Khanak's news or she will go away from him without telling him.

    Waiting for next update

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  8. Thanks Aditee!

    Loved it!
    Urgh ughh! He is such a passionate illogical and sigh worthy guy! Khanak is correct…it is hard to let go and also not to be MAD or angry at him!

    He seems so determine NOT change anything about his life right now. He doesn’t want any extra commitment…Gosh! He isn’t aware his life is going to take a u-turn! Cant wait!

    I think Dadi will eventually give in to Khanaks plan or secretly plot to make him suffer…She seems quite disturbed with Shantanu’s stance on no baby!

    Khanak’s silence is definitely reflecting she has gave up on him…She knows Dadis rants are useless…I feel so sorry for her! She is at a junction where she will lose and gain…

    The blue… He used her line! I think she will eventually let go…Gosh! Cant wait to see longing and suffering…its one

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  9. it was a fabulous update Aditee.......i think that when Shaan actually comes to know the news his views might not be so rigid about not having a baby.........he loves his wife so much.........dadi is trying her best to reason with her grandson..........and poor Khanak, she has to choose between her husband and the baby...........waiting for the next update very eagerly!!

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