Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Truths continue...


"U will walk away in a second... the moment u think I am being unfair... U will disappear with the child" he said harshly...
"No I wont share" he said bluntly... as her jaw dropped.... at that explosive admission.
And… the thing u said earlier about not… (he paused when he heard footsteps by the front door)
The the bad joke about not having sex ever again… that’s not happening! (softly)
They both didn’t say anything for the next few minutes…. Until she looked away…
“Start scheming and plotting Mrs Gujral” he offered…
“What I want doesn’t matter to you” she said bluntly…
“That’s not true… being together is what we both want” he said pompously…
“Sure… where you work 80 hours a week and get… and get… and..”
“Make love multiple times each night?” he finished it for her…
She stood up… hiding her crimson cheeks from him…
He did too
Followed her to the window…
“u are crazy” she said… “U are crazy” she whimpered…
“I wont deny that” he said looking her straight in the eye
She leaned on the wall by her fave bedroom window, he stood in front hands placed by her head…
She suspected he meant “Crazy about you” a strange feeling of thrill slid all over inside… up and down… up and down… like like honey sliding in a bottle….
“You are as adamant and pig headed as I am… our kids are going to be out of control”
“I will want my daughter to be a virgin until 50… but as luck would have it she will find someone like me at 12” she turned red at that implication.... "and would do things to her like (I do to you)" he said and stopped... meaningfully... swallowing the last words..
His hot breath fanned her neck… she squirmed….
A man as insatiable as I am” his hand felt her bare waist…. as she buckled….there is no telling what the boy will be like… (he laughed derisively)




9 comments:

  1. he changed the mood with his words...

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  2. aye haye haye hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeee iishhh classy HOT and straight ;)

    The the bad joke about not having sex ever again… that’s not happening!
    “I will want my daughter to be a virgin until 50… but as luck would have it she will find someone like me at 12 and would do things to her like (I do to you)"

    these lines KILL me hayeee
    and the blue line hehheheee eekkss cant wait for next
    plzzzzzz update tomorrow too with a looooong update plzzzzzzzzz

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  3. ufff!! khanak never wins frm him lol!!
    he gave her a reason that she will wont able to say anything lol! but she is right too it does show he does not care about how she will feel she happy with da baby :((
    really wanna hear khanak actually give da bitter truths to him too lol she is happy but she needs to tell him not enough to make her stay wit him forever :((

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  4. Wow!!! ♥ Loved it!!! ♥ Shaan always talks straight!!! Khanak is clean bold by his admission!!! :)

    She starting to scheme..Make a solid plan Khanak..She is absolutely right in asking tht her wish doesn't matter to him..It does except baby issue for him and money issue for her..

    He is sooooo good with his words..Made her to blush.. ♥

    Oh..Ya..He is crazily in love with her.. ♥ And the way he replied..Awww..Just awesome!!! ♥

    Hope ShaNak ve twins..:) A girl like him and a boy like her!!! ;)

    Their kids will ve all their qualities..It'll be amazing to know how he'll see his daughter and keep guys out of her way!!!

    Does a guy like Shaan exist in really world??? Possessive of his wife Khanak but not in a bad way!!! Hope all get a hubby like him in real life!!! :)

    Looking forward and thank you for writing a fabulous update!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

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  5. obsessively singes every readers heart shan....his truly beyond heels crazy about her......i want khanak to spill out some of those reflective emotions too :-)

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  6. He is relentless!

    I agree, together is what both want! there is going to be the void or nagging feeling of not able to have a baby with him...What about she leaves him now? He know she's extreme and even probably dump him if she has too when she's had enough.

    I am pondering over HOW she is going to even deal with this! He seems so firm and she is not a person who is conceding either!

    The guy is smart! He has his way with words....even I was under to spell :P

    You've kept us thinking Aditee...Loved it!

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  7. Uff.......Aditee.......iam loving Shaan's truth.........and yes Khanak, you suspected it right........your husband loves you like crazy!! please continue soon..........this was a killer update!!

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  8. He is the smartest guy i love him and her always <3 <3 Superb parts love both the parts so much brilliant writing Aditee u r amazing!!
    He said everything and i agree with Shalini he changed the mood completely i want her to convince him and make him understand blue lines were super hot!!
    I am waiting for super hot pink lines :-)
    Thank u <3
    Love u always <3 <3

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  9. Aditee excellent update

    I always love Shantanu's possessiveness for Khanak but he had to look at her wish of having a baby too.
    I too agree with Shantanu that they both wanted to be together :)
    Khanak suspecting right ....... he is very crazy about her,
    Loved the way he made her blush with his words
    Blue lines are superb
    Waiting for next update

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