Monday, March 17, 2014

Straight talk

"I could send you away for a week or two to my extended family in Almora Himachal. But it will be impossible to hide from him"
Khanak shifted uncomfortably, quickly getting up to go retch
Dadi stared out the window, at the challenge she had been entrusted to handle for the girl. She would do anything for her in a heartbeat.
The stoic image of her with the faraway look in her eyes, when she met her at Pune at the Foundation office tore her heart.

She hadnt seen that look ONCE... since her grandson started pursuing her.
Infact it was replaced by a soft, self conscious, embarrassed acknowledgement of the attention he paid her...
"Dadi is here" she had heard the young girl whisper many times, as she entered the rec room or their suite..The frustration and and thrill in her voice unmistakeable... frustration at having to constantly fight his advances... and thrill at being aroused by it...
Khushboo and Akshay were different... they obviously dug each other a lot... but Shaan and Khanak shared a very electric chemistry...
"Dadi" she would complain... in ONE word... at the breakfast table many mornings... not saying anything more...
At being late for an appointment or missing one or missing dinner or failing to show up at an event...
He would have whisked her away for something fun or kept her in the room..
She still spoke very less when the family was around... she would point to things in a magazine or the TV and comment to him softly...
Smile at something he would point...or she would give him a look of "U have to be kidding" "NO, NOT NOW" "I am not leaving the room with you"
Her face would turn red trying to free her hand from his, under the plush velor throw...he would drink and eat with his left or maker her do it with her left until Sunil would notice and publicly embarrass them...
"Hes not letting go" she would blame him hissing... Sunil and Janaki would exchange a knowing happy look...
Extremely shy... she would avoid going anywhere near him most evenings....if he was late to the family "hang out" as he almost always was, she would make sure she seated BY someone... so the spot next to her was taken...
He would ASK to sit by her and start getting frisky....
She returned... tired...
"We cannot have you disappear to someplace where there is little or no medical arrangements. He will KILL me if we risked your or the baby's life"
He doesnt want the baby" she croaked.
That doesnt mean he would destroy its life" Dadi spoke to her as if Khanak was an idiot.
Khanak leaned back and closed her eyes...
Sleep knocked her eyelids shut...
Sonali, Kaka her finances all melted away...
"You could be at your parents for a month"
"If you quit your job it might make it easier"
Dadi's plot ideas were deliberately grandiose...
"I cant quit Dadi... Sanjay has agreed to "give me time off until I get better" Thats it.
Your committments to your family HAVE TO BE ADDRESSED beta Dadi appeared distressed
"Because I am having a baby I cannot stop helping them... they are not THEM.. they are mine" Khanak opened her eyes to look at Dadi with a guilty plea.


13 comments:

  1. Loved it!!! ♥ Dadi is very good in planning..Khanak in Himachal..Shaan wont guess it..

    And all those thoughts..Sigh..None can romance like ShaNak!!! Period!!! ♥

    Shaan filled Khanak's life with all colors..:)

    He obviously will care for their baby..

    She cant quit her job..She can go to her house tho..But he'll find her..

    Love her attachment to her family..Tho except her parents all are selfish..

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!! ♥

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  2. Wow lovely update Dadi is helping her to go to Himachal mountains, snow and good rest is what she needs along with Shantanu he will find out quickly they can't trick him!
    Loved the pink lines she can't be without helping her family she can't quit she can take a break or maternity leave!
    Thanks eagerly waiting for next update!
    Love u always <3 <3

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  3. i m very happy dadi knows about her pregnancy
    bcoz even if she is helping khanak to disappear which is so sweet of her otherwise koi aur hota toh wouldnt hv agreed to this
    so dadi knows where she will be, keep an eye on her and most importantly bring her back SOON :)
    when will shan know ? when she will disappear tab ? :P
    well then disappear her asap hehehhee bcoz i want to know shan's reaction :)
    update soon :)

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  4. i knew her obligations to work and her own family will not be kept her disappeared for long.........but i think she just fears what his reaction will be if he finds out.......dadi is right he wont be thrilled but he wont be crude to tell her to abort the baby........enjoyed their flashback.......his is insanely mad about her.........the pink seems like khanak wont able to change at all with her family commitments......thank you :-)

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  5. awwww dadi bechari inn dono mein stuck hai abb :((
    i like the idea for going away n dadi can tell shaan she needed some time and space or lie it was for work lol!
    yaar the flashbacks are so amazing i love their little romance in between its soo cute like holding hands n sharin food lol!
    chalo she tld dadi already her helping to family wont change i knew it and proud of it too as its something u cannt change wen she is doin it for som any years :((
    i want shantanu now lol! his reaction and how she disappears lol! i think staying with her family wnt be good so dadi will send her somewhere else for sure cant wait :D

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  6. where is the brat?? waiting for him now.. hahaha..
    loved Dadi's talks...

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  7. aditee nice update
    Dadi said to Khanak she can send her to her extended fmily in Himachal Pradesh for one or two weeks but it is impossible to hide it from Shantanue ...... its true.
    Loved Shank flashback and no one can romance like Shantanu and Khanak and he is so mad for her.
    Why Dadi wants to help Khanak and why Khanak want to run away. I think Shantnu wouldn't be happy but neither he will ask her to abort baby.
    She can't quit her job as she feels responsibility for them and she don't want to stop helping her family because she is having baby,
    Waiting for next update

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  8. its really nice that dadi is involved in the plans..........and its always a pleasure reading about the couple....their romance always unfailingly makes my heart race.......you write it so brilliantly Aditee!! what is this girl going to do and can't wait for Shaan's reactions!!

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  9. I think more than her fear of his reaction....She doesnt want to burden him, as she knows he wont been too keen about her pregnancy!

    From my perspective...I think she is choosing to disappear more on the basis she doesnt want him to unwillingly just ACCEPT she is pregnant and be sulking about it...She chooses to free him!

    Sighhh! I see why he just wants her. He is not over her yet! Still charmed by her nature and beauty...Lovely flashbacks!

    Bless Dadi! I'm liking the Himachal idea or her residing somewhere along...I wonder who WILL he take this upon him...Waiting for the guy himself :)

    I think with the pink line...I have accepted she cannot change, its within her to help her family and something she always will do. But I do hope as Dadi said it needs to be ASSESSED on how much she must do...

    Thanks so much Aditee! Update soon :)

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  10. can't wait for Shantanu's reaction and how he will handle all this, Dadi is right, Khanak can't spoon feed her fui's family the rest of her life, she needs to go live for herself somewhat too, yes she has a baby coming in due time, so she needs to take care of herself now

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  11. hope khanak doesnt jeoperdize her or baby's health for helping her (kaka, foi etc)family.

    want to see how far she can go.....neglect shaan and her own gujaral family.

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  12. Dieing to read the nxt update plz do it soon plz plz plz

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