Thursday, March 20, 2014

Clues?

Oh! You know I was in the vicinity and so called her, she agreed to buy me coffee and brownie at Starbucks.
I mean we ate 5 between the two of us" Dadi explained without batting an eyelid.

Khanak felt fresh and cheery, like her nausea was gone for good.
"She sent Pradeep home" "Why did you?" he asked his wife, pulling on one of her gold like fine bangles, she wore three dozen on her left wrist...
A gold and copper crinkle form fitting skirt and a black almost sleeveless blouse...
He didnit know HOW many pairs of skirts she had... each one seemed hotter to him...
This one especially with its plunging neckline...
"Unko bhi break chahiye" Khanak answered...
"NOT while he is driving you around on a week day" Did you have to take a cab to your construction site?"
"No the draftsman for the annexe didnt show up, mujhe aaj jaana nahi tha, I still have to review the design tonite" she made a face.

Madz sauntered in "Oh my! The three best friends?" she mocked
"No, 4! You just arrived" Dadi mocked back... without malice...
"If Khanak and I were in the same class she wouldnt talk to me, I know" assigning some "posh image to her"
Khanak smiled, not responding...
"But you know... she is very dear to me" Madz hugged her
"You smell like roses" she commented
"REALLY?' Shaan mocked...
Khanak chuckled softly at his private joke...
"Whats the occasion... sab log aaj jaldi ghar?"
"Khanak bought me a coffee we shopped later and were so tired" Dadi lied again.
"What did you buy? Taj Mahal has new Fendi bags, Sunanda sent me the link" Madz checked her phone
Shaan went on his phone..swore... "Hey can I use your phone?"
He asked his wife
"Only if you swear more colorfully" she responded smiling softly
"Like I do in bed?"
"Ummm... maybe" she giggled...
She fished for it in her purse... and handed it to him...her password was the combination of numbers he kissed her first in the rec room... the day month and year...
"Whatt?' he asked starying at her keypad trying to figure the combination...
"Its private" she said coyly...
He rolled his eyes... taking the sparkly gold/copper case from her...
"Is it supposed to match your outfit?'
"If its going to be an inquiry I want my phone back please" she argued...
He held it out of reach
He grinned... she leaned....she lay over his chest...
Held his ribs with one hand as she fought to get it back...
"HL mere liye chai, Khanak ke liye chamomile chai... aur crackers lao"
Shaan busy being playful with his wife, didnt hear that instruction, Madz on the phone with Sunanda, his hand on her bare waist, his thumb sliding slowly... closer to its dream destination.. she pulled her skinny black tee frantically over his hand... hiding it within...

"I swear I have to make an important call" he begged...
"Use urs... you have 7 back up juicers last I counted" she said
He laughed out loud.. she was sharp as a tack...
"I need sunglasses"he said choking on his laugh, turning the phone around to stare at the sparkly back...
"Shantanu" she muttered...offended at being made fun of..
"One call pleasee?" "I am sorry this phone is not blingy at all" he said holding his laughter
Sliding off underneath her... standing up
She lay on the arm rest hissing...as he left her... dropping his dead phone on her belly as he walked away... dialling...

10 comments:

  1. Loved it!!! ♥ Dadi fib so well..Shaan is always right like what he said for Pradeep..

    Madz doesnt leave a chance to mock at Khanak..

    Shaan wants her phone..And her password..How cute!!! She never forget important dates when its about them..

    Shaan missed the clue when Dadi talked abt food..Awww..

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!! ♥

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  2. sighhh!! hayeee!! these two are super so adorable n shaan is soooo hot when he is with her :)))
    aww the clue wasnt two obvious lol! i like how shaan is aware mads is not too close to khanak n doesnt like her he is not home but aware of everything!!
    khanak's style is soooo unique love she is so different to everyone n thats what makes him so obsessed with her :))
    i liking there cute flirting going on me wondering if khanak will able to make a choice now wen she is home as it will be harder :((
    thanks so much aditee for such a brilliant and wonderful update like always :D

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  3. hayeeee these two will make us crazy ;)
    luv pink and blue lines
    awww they r flirting like this in front of dadi and mads ? can understand shan but khanak :P
    awww she is juz sooo happy forgets about every stress in this world when she is with shan how can she leave him is a BIG QUESTION to me ? :P
    i hope ye kabhi na ho :)
    update soon

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  4. thanks aditi........splendid update.....i love these characters....especially the guy in this story he is too passionately into his wife which most girls wish......i wish the clues will be appreciated by shaan soon....keep us pined with the blue and pinks it was a very nice interplay between these two characters ;-)

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  5. I am being repetitive! But no one writes like you!

    Love her phone password! Its so rare…it their own way!
    They are too too delightful! Sigh.

    I loved his audacity over her and her sharp flirting! Its so nice to see her happy and carefree…She must have amazingly a elegant dressing sense…and how he is always stirred by it too…its their classic signature!

    Oh! Dadi’s clue went unnoticed! Dadi wont able to keep this secret for long…she seems to caring and exciting by it! I hope she tells HIM after she disappears…sounding cruel! But it will be more interesting…

    Thanks Aditee!

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  6. Madz should get a life.. always there to mock Khanank.. good one.. waiting for Khanak to deliver her punch to Shaan..

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  7. Aditee excellent update
    Dadi is sweet. She lied to Shantanu for Khanak and Shantanu cares for her and he is right what he said about pradeep.

    I think Khanak has very classic dressing style and Shantanu always smitten by her dressing :)

    Madhavi never leaves chance to mock Khanak and Dadi always supports Khanak

    Shaan wanted her phone and her password ..... Aaawww its so sweet...... loved how Khanak never forgets special days belongs to them ................ what will be Shantanu's reaction when he figure out the date :)

    Both are flirting in front of Dadi and Madhavi but Khanak was angry on Shantanu when dadi joked on their private life and she forgos everything when she is with him :)

    Shantanu missed clue when Dadi asked for Khanak's food.

    Your blue and pink lines always make us happy

    Waiting for next update

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  8. such a wonderful part Aditee..........absolutely loved the Shanak part, Shantanu makes her so happy........i wish Shaan comes to know about the pregnancy very soon!! let them be together for some more time!!

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  9. Loved the update have read it thrice already its always awesome to read about them the password combination is just bliss and beautiful can never forget their first kiss <3 <3
    Her phone is so hot like her and he is trying to handle the hotness lol his phone is dead and he dropped on her belly this is so sexy they make me blush ;-)
    Thanks Aditee for superb update waiting for next!
    Love u loads <3 <3

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