Thursday, March 13, 2014

Tricks..

You do realize its next to impossible to trick your husband? Dadi asked baffled...
"Dadi... par unko" she began...
"He obsesses over you and everything about you"she supplied....
Khanak squirmed...

"He ASKED to be loaned out to DLF in Delhi when you left him...." Dadi said worried....
"He doesnt want kids" she argued...
"He was saying that because you were not pregnant" Dadi responded
"He doesnt like Amogh" Khanak countered...
"But have you seen the way he cares for him?" Dadi wondered...
"Maine unko yahi baat poochi" "He said its a responsibility that he doesnt care to take on, its OK on occasion"

Dadi appeared frantic...
"We have to go home today" she offered...
"But Dadi I am not doing this to defy him" Khanak said sombrely

Dadi looked at her... the girl had no hopes, no aspirations... she just trundled along... when she invited Nivedita and the team for lunch to thank them for visiting Shaan during his fractured arm...
"Mera koi nahi hai Mumbai mein" she had said...
NOW....
She was running away from the man that enveloped, and constituted her world.... running away with something..........

Khanak wondered the same strangely....
The last thing she would have ever thought about was hiding Shantanu Gujral's baby... when she had bumped into him at the elevator she would have laughed unil her insides hurt... if someone were to have told her "U will be married to him someday and would run away when u are pregnant with his child"

I mean going to BED WITH SHANTANU GUJRAL.... BEING HIS WIFE? HAVING HIS CHILD?
She would have dismissed the person suggesting the person was high on some banned substance.
"Pradeep is picking up Bhabhi and the tyke she texted me" her screen glowed
Kaun hai" Dadi asked...
"Shaan" she said softly...
"Pradeep ko bhej diya maine"
"Main baat karoon?"

NAHIIII" Khanak jumped... "He will want to know WHY u are here with me at 3 in the afternoon

She sipped some water... made a face
"Did she give you something for nausea?"
"Nahi" Khanak answered in distress

Dadi sighed... wondered, worried... her brain stopped working...

Khanak was dreaming about the man...
"You PROMISED" she had texted him one afternoon upon receiving a HUGE bouqet of flowers at work and a box of Belgian chocolates...
"I did" he had responded

They had argued the night before  in bed......for an hour almost... she had wrangled a promise out of him that they wouldnt gift each other anymore... "I cant keep up" she had wailed....
His gifts were expensive and BIG
She was running out of ideas and money

The next day he sent her flowers and chocolate in defiance



11 comments:

  1. Loved it!!! ♥ Shaan will find out easily that Khanak is carrying if he is with her..Dadi is right..Once he knows she is pregnant he'll adore her..Its not like he will disown her or take extreme steps..

    Dadi and Khanak thinking abt the past..Awww..ShaNak first meeting..♥ Her life turned 360 degree with Shaan..♥

    Awww..He send her flowers..Khanak come on you are brilliant..Innovate some good things..Baby will be the best present now..:)

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!! ♥

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  2. Loved both the updates Secrets and Tricks :-) Flashback are always my fav Golden sweet memories always fresh in my mind how they met first!
    He will find out soon they can't trick him!!
    Waiting for chembur night update its exactly a month after Chembur she is pregnant!
    Thanks love u loads <3 <3

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  3. sighhhh uff the memories r hitting me too lol! she is gonna leave so will feel more upset :( but i like this track its really good
    omg he is so cute lol! now she doesnt want presents from him as well aur kya nahi chaiya she has his baby thats the biggest :P
    dadi is correct he will go mad n angry if she willleave so how will she n me loving ur titles lol! they are so apt for the updates n lets see if she trick him n leave :P

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  4. uffo.. suspense is killing.. waiting for the man himself now..

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  5. wow what an update, just loved it, waiting for Shantanu to come in the picture

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  6. i wanted to know shan's reaction when he get the good news

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  7. you are excellent! loved dadis critical view on them......waiting for the run away mom part! i wonder how she will do all this......brave!

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  8. I hope dadi emotionally blackmails her to stay. She cant take this happiness from dadi, shan and sunil. Only if madhvi trouble her she can leave. but shan.....No...i cant see him in trouble this time.
    i can still imagine look in his eyes when before renconcilation when he asked khanak "tumhe kya chahiye ? " and khanak replied " muje bachha chahiye"
    he was thrilled to feel that she wants his baby.

    i want to see shaan' emotions....once she pulls this stunt.

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  9. Aditee superb update
    Dadi is right he is obsessed with everything of her and they can't trick him and Dadi also right once he knows she is pregnant, he will take care of her :)

    Loved how Dadi and Khanak thinking about past and loved how Khanak thought about their first meet

    Arnav sent her flowers and chocolates even when she refused and now she can give best gift, their child and wanted to see Shantanu's emotions knowing Khanak is pregnant.

    Waiting for next update

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  10. cant wait to see khanak face shantaanu....

    U have bring two completely opposite persons together and knit The Most beautiful love story.......which i am so obsessed with.

    I want to them to make love, fight, seperate, seek each other......see and feel all emotions....for years and years to come.

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  11. such a fabulous part Aditee........loved it so much........the flashback parts are always awesome.........can't wait to know how this baby is giong to affect my favourite couple!!

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