Friday, June 28, 2013

Part 147


Sunil & Madhavi walked around Walkeshwar Road, heading towards the BG Kher Rd fork, Mumbai Municipality workers were briskly doing their morning task of sweeping the streets, collecting garbage and spraying sidewalks to settle in the dust… the poshest area of Mumbai was well maintained….
Madhavi: You should have arranged for whatever she went to Gujarat for…
Sunil didn’t say a word…. Continued to steer her to safety… he was a tall athletic man… his sons inherited it from him, Madhavi was skinny, slender and stylish… the three s’s Mumbai’s high society required….
Her face glowed from the various “treatments” she subjected it to frequently…. Her Chanel sunglasses, costed more than rent for some housing……
Madhavi:I worry about Shaan, Sunil…
Sunil:Not about THEM? (angry)
Madhavi: I am not sure how to answer that…
Sunil:A no would suffice…
Madhavi: He insisted he wanted to marry her
Sunil:We are back to that now?
Madhavi: It wouldn’t matter if she was…. (poor?)
Sunil: Poor?
Madhavi: She has a past… I mean…. Money doesn’t matter…
Sunil was agitated… he appreciated his wife’s concern, but it showed him that she wasn’t any closer to loving the girl now, compared to two years ago…. It was still the same for her…
Sunil:Do you feel at all for Khanak…
Madhavi: Ofcourse I do (defensive…. Lying?)
Sunil:that was too quick….
Madhavi: So we are dissecting me? Sunil?
Sunil:She is a brave girl… she needs time… Shaan will not let go
Madhavi: What about HIM? WHO will care for him?
Sunil:Why are you all so suddenly clingy and mother hen about him?
Madhavi grunted….
Sunil:He is smug and arrogant… his way or freeway…
Madhavi: So he should have accompanied her to Mansa?
Sunil was quiet…
Madhavi: You cant expect my son to be a saint
Sunil laughed out loud… shook his head and laughed out loud… “Him?”
“Oh! No!”
Madhavi: He is faithful to her!
Sunil:Yes, he doesn’t listen to her, but yes, he is faithful…
Madhavi: Kya matlab?
Sunil:She wants a child… I can tell…
Madhavi rolled her eyes…
Sunil:THIS , THIS is exactly what I mean Madhavi… the condescending attitude you display when it comes to her…. She is quiet but you take that silence as arrogance
Madhavi looked away guilty…
Sunil:She talks to him!
Madhavi:Thank God! For that! (sarcastic)
Sunil: Pata nahi usko abhi bacha nahi chahiye ya kabhi nahi… (worried)
Madhavi: Do you… do you… umm…. I mean…
Sunil and her walk quietly for 10 or so minutes…. Nod, and smile at other high society types…
Madhavi approaches the subject carefully again “You think mera matlab… there isn’t any challenge?”
Sunil is baffled”Kis baaremein”
Mad: He doesn’t want kids (sad)
Sunil laughs out loud…. Laughs for over two minutes…. “You think…” he laughs again
Madhavi smacks him
Sunil: Have you seen the look on their faces? Have you ever observed the two?
Madhavi: Nahi! (haughty)
Sunil: She is afraid to go near him… (smug)
Sunil exclaims proudly in Punjabi how robust, tough and forceful their son is… Sunil laughs again at how Madhavi could even think their son might have a problem…
Sunil: Nalayak hai aur kuch nahi… usko apne kaam ke alawa kuch sojhta nahi… kaam and then her (grunts)
Madhavi:Stop! It Sunil (giggling)
Madhavi: Maybe Mom can talk to him…
Sunil looks at his wife… amazed… “So you actually want to make a case for HER? Tum uske defense mein Dadi ko use karogi?” (proud)
Madhavi tries to avoid talking further, Sunil teases her
“I care about Shaan Sunil” Madhavi says
Sunil:She does too… as much or more than you…
Madhavi: She wouldn’t fight so much then…
Sunil: Does it look like it bothers either of them? Their wars are like their life blood… they are a strange couple… (shocked tone)






11 comments:

  1. Exactly strange, unique yet the most best couple:D
    Loved it aditee:))
    Madhvi has got same opinion abt khanak till date..hope one day she understands khanak!
    Sunil is the best FIL a girl could have!
    But, where's the couple?? I was just eager to read about them:p
    Continue soon:)))

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  2. wonderful update aditee!!
    loving to read abt different ppl opinion and worry on this couple :))
    madz just being a mother the convern for her son is valid :)))
    loved sunil though her kinda understands both his son and DIL he knws what his son lacks n DIL!
    bilkul unique couple that keep eveyr1 at toes :))
    hahahaha! i love how madz was worried abt shaan i guess she wants to have a grandchild too :P

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  3. Loved it..:) Madhavi is still the same..Cares for her son Shaan and not about Khanak..

    Khanak past make inroads everywhere even after all these years..

    Of course Khanak wants child..Even Madhavi leaning her side now..:) Cool!!!

    ShaNak fight all the time..As Sunil said it's their lifeblood!!!

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update..:)

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  4. Lovely update :)
    sunil trying to make understand that khanak too cares for shaan.....
    Still madhavi doesnt get it........
    Hope now madhavi also forces shaan to have a kid by himself :)
    awaiting next part :)

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  5. Madhvi concern abt her son only bt she had doubt on him.... LOL...

    Sunil knows shanak only too well....

    Khanak affriad to go near him... N sunil proud of hz son's obessesd personality except d workoholic behvious ofcos...

    Waiting fr shanak...who won d ni8 !!

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  6. Nice conversation between the duo...everyone can see and acknowledge the tension and chemistry between the Shaan-Khanak but just these two fail to admit it!

    I liked Mads for once...I saw her in a different light for a change! I guess she just wants her son happy whether she hasn’t come in terms and accepted Khanak!

    And on Shaan going to Mansa, agree with Mads...I didn’t expect him to go either that it just not him! He is too possessive.. I always wanted him to give her a call atleast for assurance! Although Khanak just went was in the wrong...She should think about him before everyone but neither are bowing down which is the problem!
    I want to see how long can both carry on pushing and pulling each other...There has to be a common ground soon

    Thanks alot Aditee...immensely enjoying Casa!

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  7. will madhvi ever understand khanak she is sounding like her son is in a very miserable state how he overpowers khanak she doesnt know hahhahhhaaa
    seriously plzz leave them alone for child thing man dadi toh piche pad gayi if shan takes this decision forcefully then bahut bura hoga
    sunil is very good FIL and madhvi is like MIL reh ke bhi nahi hain :(
    update soon raat ko kya hua man plzz give us shanak back hehehhehehehe

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  8. after what he did, I still cannot accept Sunil somehow.. but yes, SM convo was good..

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    1. me too cannot accept sunil but he is always on khanak's side hehehhee thats why i like him but if he loves khanak so much then why he did that he was 200% sure if khanak comes to know about it then bahut bura hoga it will effect shanak more then also he did it he still owns an explanation of that hain na?

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  9. wonderful conversation........loved reading their views about this "strange" but the most addictive couple!! the last sentence from Sunil was superb.......it said everything!!

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  10. Aditee all well??
    Update soon:))

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