"Beta" Dadi croaked to Khanak
"Hmm" she said, as he stared down...
"Its a good thing... hes there to bring you home" Dadi said refusing to accept defeat...
'Dadi par main" she began
Her husband hearing every word spoken by both...
"Dadi" she began
"Shhhhhhhhhhh he must be very angry now... please Khanak" Dadi interrupted her
"Usko phone do" Dadi said...
He heard that and put it back on his ear...
"Beta... I know you must be angry... but please beta... go easy on her"
"Ofcourse Dadi... he sid scnning his wife's face... minutely... her head was bent.. her gaze on his belt buckle
He felt his buckle with his left hand as if her gaze touched him...
Those clean long manly fingers.... with a touch of hair on the back hand...
Khanak didnt think she could be aroused in this state but she was.... intensely so....
Everything about him... his talk his look... his anger... there was a certain sexuality to it...she had met handsome men... but none like him... she had fought with a few people in life... none quite like the war she seemed to have with him....
"I am not sure Dadi... will call you"
"You promise me you wont be mad at her" Dadi demanded
"I dont make promises" he hung up...
"I dont need your pity" she provoked him...
"Oh thats not what I had in mind at all Khanak Gujral" he said bluntly...
They stood inches apart...
"If you dont want to bea Dad... you dont have to be.." she wouldnt stop...
"Here is the deal Khanak... we go back home... I dare you to say anything about our relationship to the family"
She began to speak...
"Shhhh" I am not done yet" he said "You go from saying a word a day to not taking a breath?" he mocked...
"I talk when its necessary... I will not be forced to do anything" he yelled...
"Ofcourse not... we wont call it force, if you hate the word"
"I can"
"Try it" he said (I can leave again?)
"You dont want the baby... why are you doing this?" she pleaded
"Hes mine too... we will share custody" he spit out
It took a second for that to sink in to her...
"CUSTODY? In your dreams" she yelled...
"And outside of it" he spat back...
They did not touch...
"I dont think" she began...
"I dont care for your opinion Khanak... we go home now. and you dont say a word about our agreement, UNTIL the baby is born... you will not make ANY attempt to flee"
"And why would I listen to you?"
"Because you owe me now" he said softly
Her jaw dropped... he appeared cool and sedate... like he was reading a newspaper......
OMG!!! Is Shaan contemplating a divorce??? :O Hope he is just teasing Khanak..And they gonna acts as a couple..:O Such an unexpected turn of events..Shaan is seriously so furious and livid..Poor guy..Otherwise wont say such things..
ReplyDeleteWell..Nothing can separate ShaNak..They will always end up together..And Shaan wont let her go away now..
Looking forward and thank you for writing a superb update!!! :)
Custody?? what's happening?? he wants a divorce is it?? this is a shocker...
ReplyDeleteohhhh myyy!! he is playing a bigger game than expected :O :O
ReplyDeleteagreement and custody!!!! Is he gone insane? maybe he is doing it to keep her home :(((
it took me awhile to sink everything in lol!
next chaldi likh naa me waiting to what he is thinking lol!
can never ever understand shan :P
ReplyDeletewhy he is doing this ?
if he is doing this for her to never leave again then a simple i want this baby will do
ofcourse he wont abort their child if she is pregnant then he has to accept
i m confused about if he loves his baby or not :P
Shocking is not the word to describe this update right now........I m contemplating on why he'll bound her by such agreement.....for her not to run away.......or keep her attached to him........waiting to read more......khanak has put herself in a awful position.....
ReplyDeleteMy jaw seriously dropped! Is he playing? Custody? Goodness!!
ReplyDeleteI understand he's mad..but..
Khanak would be feeling terrible..
Atleast he's thinking about the baby :p
Great update aditee! Thank you so much:)
Continue soon:)
What!! How!!
ReplyDeleteHe is taking her home and will give her what she wants AFTER the baby!
I am thinking the whole point of this charade is to prove HER wrong about her whole pity and you dont want the baby justification!
Blue! Finally, she indeed owns him!
I hope he is easy on her! It must devastating for Khanak to be in this situation :(
I need some glimpse of what is going through this guys head!
Update soon!!
wow what an update
ReplyDeleteIts an amazing update. Aditee u r creating a master piece. But this update is going to give me a sleepless night. What is going in shaan's mind? Eagerly waiting for next. Update soon..
ReplyDeleteSo his game has started ! I want to know what he is thinking & his POV..
ReplyDeleteSo in his anger he said about custody i don't want Khanak to go with him and follow his agreement why? Just bcos she doesn't have a job and why does he want to hide this agreement or relationship from family!
I don't want Khanak giving up to him she is strong no divorce or custody track let him calm down from his anger!
High voltage part!
Excited for next
Thanks love u loads <3 <3
such an interesting turn of events...I must say Aditee. ..the one to bring Khanak back on track I daresay. .
ReplyDeleteHe wouldn't be wanting a separation of any sort..
But atleast he cares for the baby....
Though I m a Khanak supporter I feel she should also start thinking about the positives of Shaan..like in the Mehul episode. ..
OMG OMG OMG
ReplyDeleteWhat a twist in a tale! Is he doing it to make her stay close ?
I really need to know 1) Flashback in to EMotions and thoughts of shaan gujaral during those three weeks.....we got to know his escape to goa, anger, frustration but please give us a sneak peak into his heart, mind.
ITS SUPER AMAZING TO SEE SHAAN IN DRIVING MODE....ITS HIS TURN NOW. Superb writing aditee.
Update soo na aditee pls...
ReplyDeleteWow what an update Aditee .............its excellent
ReplyDeleteSo Shantanu's game has started
Loved the Blue line
Shantanu is mad now but why Shantanu is talking about baby custody? May be he is doing all this because he wanted to keep Khanak close to him or he don't want her to try to run away again or he wanted to prove her wrong about her whole pity thing or you don't want a baby thing?
Wanted to read Shantanu's POV