Friday, May 16, 2014

Turbulence

He acted like he didnt look at her, just kept talking, she shut the door to the bedroom behind her, the suite door was still open...
She walked over to her closet, everything was in its place... there were more bags of clothes, gifts from Dadi, MIL and others... there was no craving for anything material. She had it all.... in this home...
She had more than she could ever want... the only thing she ever wanted, she couldnt have...

She quietly changed into a spaghetti top and pajamas in apink rainbow like pattern... and went over to the crisply made bed... just when she was about to slide in, she saw the balcony and smiled... her flowers were in full bloom... she walked over...


"I will do anything for this baby"

"Hope you will not mind if I do the same for what I believe in"

"I KNOW you dont want to be a parent Shaan" she said shrilly

"We AGREED on it... when you found yourself pregnant you just took off"

"WHO even told you?" she asked irritated

"What if you hide, you think you can never be found?" he smirked...

"U just want to appear noble to your family, you dont have any time for me now, you will have none for us tomm"


"Keep pushing the envelope Khanak, just when someone's ready to call the cops, get on your motorcycle and flee" he had bit out in her apartment...
"Dont you get it?" she asked snarkily.. tapping her temple like he was an idiot... "I am ABSOLVING you of the responsibility of fatherhood, go on to becoming the shining star in Corporate India" she dismissed

"YOU are absolving me?" he sneered...

"I will make sure you never have to feel obliged to care for him" she told him categorically.. "See him or care for him"

"You do that Khanak Gujral I will sue your sorry ass, and ensure I get full custody" he had barked....


12 comments:

  1. Loved it!!! ♥ Khanak has so many material things which she is least interested in..

    Shaan is so livid..She is getting all wrong..Btw even we wanna know how he came to know all..

    Custody talk is getting serious..:( He needs to spend lots of time with her & show he really care for their child..

    Missing ShaNak romance & teasing,nok-jhok..:(

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update!!! ♥

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  2. shaan sahi hai khanak just cannot say she is freeing him :((
    he would do it if he wants to even if he neva wanted to have a child it doesn't mean he wnt care :((
    he needs to spend some time with khanak she is also correct that he neva has time fornher n wen the baby is here what will happen :((
    ufff loving the updates aditee one thing is sure he would also do anything for the baby too :))
    khanak needs to chill for sometime lol!
    thanks aditee :D

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  3. i think this is getting streched unnecessarily
    now they r face to face why shan make things clear he is juz not taking care of her does he cares and loves his baby or not ? :P
    or he is taking revenge will torture her mentally for some days and let it out his feelings ?
    confused about shan's feelings :P
    update soon

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  4. omg.. they always talk in anger.. hope they sit and talk quietly..

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  5. one needs to be sane now........khanak is being harsh.....he did not want a child did not mean he would have cared out of 'pity'........the blue reflects he would not let anything go attached to him.....thanks aditi :-)

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  6. OK..they have to raise their voice like this..:p
    May be he is ready for the baby..why can't khanak think that may be he is..
    Ok even I don't want her to accept in a blink of an eye..he never has time for her..will he change? I don't expect a complete metamorphosis..but just a little may be..
    I have to know this..how do they even know it's a boy:p
    Will he even show some compassionate after seeing her go through her morning sickness:p
    Awesome update aditee!! Ofcourse the blue line shakes me..im just so scared of the word custody..
    Atleast she smiled a bit seeing her flowers..
    Thank you so much aditee :)
    Continue soon :)

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  7. As much as I love to knock some sense into Khanak! She is being overly stubborn this time!

    I agree she does NOT need his help and HE did not want a child. But it does not mean, he will be obliged towards her/him. She loves to distain him and come to conclusions. I hope this one also proves her wrong.

    I have to AGREE with him. He was right, the moment she thinks his unfair she will be on the runner! am not expecting him to be expressly caring or compassionate...BUT what is done is done! And for every reason HE seems to go by this attitude too!

    Thanks SO MUCH Aditee! Loving the war of words between them!


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  8. and the war between the couple continues........from the time when Khanak had transferred money to Shaan's account just after marraige till today when they are having a baby..........they have disagreed on most issues but they share a very strong bond..........hope things get sorted soon.......have enjoyed this journey immensely.......and looking forward very eagerly!!

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  9. The custody thing is way of him showing that if she makes him suffer he will not let her go easily. ...
    He needs her and she needs to recognize the fact and appreciate their relationship. ..
    Lovely update
    Sourya

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  10. Aditee loved the update

    Loved the Blue line and it shows how Shantanu would not let anything go attached to him:)

    Khanak is being harsh and stubborn and thinking he doesn't care for baby said she is freeing him from baby's responsibility

    Shantnu's anger is justified. If he never wanted baby it doesn't mean he won't care for the baby

    They both are talking in anger and custody talks are getting serious

    Waiting to know how Shantanu found Khanak whereabouts

    Looking forward next update

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  11. Read this part earlier sorry for commenting late
    Both had a big fight!
    I don't want them fighting for custody
    Both should calm down and give it time for accept the change
    Thanks for update
    Love u <3

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