The Doc and Khanak headed upstairs, Khanak saying something softly... barely audible to her... he could notice the lil bump like swelling on her lower belly.... he walked to the bar to fix himself a drink, his Dad wanted an update on the day's happenings, Akshay and him had returned a day ago from Sao Paolo...he wanted to share something about what they planned next for their commodities biz...
The women talked about Madhavi's appearance in the magazine...
Dadi watched Khanak walk up the stairs...
She walked over to Shaan
D:All good at work? (softly)
S: Not one day actually... (smiling derisively)
D: Your job is very stressful... (thinking aloud)
S:Which job isint?
D:Maybe you should consider...
S:Commodities is not my thing Dadi...
Sunil: Ma, why the sudden worry over his career choice...
D:Hes 28... LOOK at him...
Sunil:I thought you always wanted him to be focussed, get rid of his rebellious ways, stop dating... and settle down... looks like he is doing exactly that now (chuckled)
Shaan instinctively looked up... at the now empty stairs...
D:Khanak needs him...
S:She decided that she doesnt! (bluntly)
Sunil is startled... "Shaan... she is back"
Shaan:You guys need to let me handle this one? Please?
Dadi backed off... worried...
D:I understand she is ziddi...
Shaan:That almost sounds cute Dadi... (mocking)
Sunil:Ma... (signalled her)
Shaan walked over to the balcony...
Sunil:Ma... let go..
Daadi:I worry for them..
Sunil: Isko bacha nahi chahiye... woh ekdum chali gayi.. usko apne baat pe ade rehna hai..
Dadi: U know sunil... they both have terribly strong egos... its not good for any marriage..
Sunil grunted... slowly acknowledging..
Sunil:Its not her fault she got pregnant.. it must have been an ... accident (Sunil swallowed the last word)
D:The happiest of her life
Sunil: Yeh to kisi ki sunta nahi...u are right in a way... Akshay is not a crazed workaholic... like this guy...
Sunil and Dadi stared at Akshay and Boo playing with their lil guy...
They both sighed...
Dadi: Woh bacha to kabhi chhodegi nahi
Sunil:Yeh usko nahi chhodega..
Dadi:Happiness is so elusive...
Upstairs...25 or so mins later
Dr Mittal: You just need to sleep a lot and rest..
K: Umm... so many women work...
Dr Mittal: I dont know of one Gujral woman that did (smiling) while she was expecting
K:But Doc... I.. (I am not a Gujral bahu literally... I come from an economically disadvantaged family... I have to support them no matter what... in a fit of fury my husband paid off my loans... he is the last person on earth I want to be indebted to... he is a reluctant father.. he might actually sue me for abandoning him) I love to work (she said not expressing ONE of the truths..
Dr Mittal:I DO TOO.. I have three and have worked through all of mine
K smiled...
Dr Mittal:Are you a Gujarati?
K nodded shyly...
Her husband walked in..Khanak jumped out of her skin stretching her mirrorwork chiffon skirt all over her toes...
Dr Mittal: You have a shy one here Shaan..
Shaan looked at her bent head...as the Doctor spoke about everything........... calmly... knowledgably
Dr Mittal: She is doing great... if you can come in tomorrow we can do the ultrasound...
K:I should be able to (confident, uncaring if HE could go or not)
He nodded... meeting her eyes...
His were inscrutable...
Dr Mittal: Did you have any Qs?
He leaned on the bed post... arms across his chest.. "None that I can think of" carelessly... watching a mole on her left breast...
Dr Mittal:I told her she can eat guilt free... sleep with no worry..
The husband and wife looked at each other..
Dr Mittal: Oh BTW... she asked me.. if it was OK to be intimate
Shaan watched color flood to his wife's face, the red matched her skirt...
Dr Mittal: Its perfectly OK... in fact we encourage it....
Khanak mind screamed "STOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP You were NOT supposed to tell him that... I didnt want him to know I asked that"
She looked at her husband like "The Doc MADE THAT ONE UP I did not ask a word... U MUST BE SMOKING POT IF YOU THINK I will ever let you touch me again"
Dr Mittal's onslaught did not end... she continued .................."Infact when the second trimester begins, she may want to be intimate more frequently.".
"Bummer!" said Shaan shrugging.........softly, smugly throatily... mocking...sucking his breath at the visual of her moistening her lips attempting to arrest her own arousal...to the Doc's ears it sounded as if he was granted a punishment....
And so began the lil mating/arousal tit for tat game they will play
Wow!!! Loved it!!! ♥ Shaan noticed Khanak's little bump..Awww..:) Wish he feels his baby..It will give some indication to her tht he loves their child..
ReplyDeleteMadz rocking appearing in magazine and all..Dadi want Shaan to change is profession..No ways..He loves it way to much those challenges in his job..
Khanak definitely needs him..;) Tho she choose their baby over him..Her priority is not him..Poor guy..Competing over his child..
Shaan forced her to come back..She didnt come on her own..:/ Btw how he found her? Big mystery!!!
Agree he needs to handle this..Dadi & Sunil needs to back off..They always support Khanak..
ShaNak ve the biggest ego..Tht is the main problem between them..
So true..Khanak wont leave her child & Shaan her..
So Khanak is still keen on working..Doctor advised her to rest tho..She livid over him paying her debts..
Wish he goes for ultrasound with her..
Khanak asked tht to doc..Poor girl doc said it to him..lolzzz
Will he resist her??? ;) She must be glowing & love more beautiful than before..:)))
Looking forward and thank you for writing a fantastic update!!! ♥ ♥ ♥
i think shaan is correct let him handle it dis time n someone will have to bow down with their ego how long bth will fight even khanak still feels indebted to him wen he is okay with the baby maybe she wont then :)))
ReplyDeleteyour so fantastic aditee loved how dadi and sunil can see he cannot let her go even if they wanted different things in life shaan is more upset abt she neva thought abt him :((
i think he might go to the doc appointment with her but would not show he cares hope he does and khanak asked the doc abt 'intimacy' lol!!!!!
and she got caught loved her reaction to it and now it be a game to see if bth can resist each other i think khanak will be the 1st one lol!
thanks so much for a brilliant update aditee :D
a headstrong couple leading to a mating game.....who will win...........i would like khanak to step forward otherwise he is always ending their fights..............the handling issue seems serious..........i want to know what he is thinking do to.........a mindblowing update aditi keep it up :-)
ReplyDeleteawwwwwwwww after so many days finally ek thodaaaa sa romantic update
ReplyDeletelast part of intimate ne toh made me blush SHE asked that i thought shan will ask lolzz
OMG his eyes scans her like a scanner machine does ;)
mole and all eekksks its too much :D
thanks for a longgggggggg update aditee LOVE LOVE LOVE IT :D
but i hv a Q docs here can answer me
wat doc said about intimatation i didnt understand :P how it OK and how can lower belly be seen so soon 5 months me dikhta hai na ? :P
'Bummer' was great...........loved the doctor.........we want the details of the game Aditee!!
ReplyDeleteYou writing is so fluid and addictive….Loved it!
ReplyDeleteDadi and Sunil do something with THEIR egos!
Dadi’s one line is true! Happiness is elusive…cant seem to define whether they are happy with one another or whether these clashes between them will go on forever…Like Khanak I am hoping against hope…one day they able to LIVE and accept each other with the flaws!
Ending part was like droolworthy! I totally can gush over his swagger! The checkout and the challenge both bring towards each other…. He knows what is going on her mind and he is going to such a tease!
I hope that’s not his idea of revenge…I want some more dramatic :P
Thank you Aditee! Will be waiting :)
oops.. Dr. Mittal spoiled it for her... loved it.. Dadi was correct as always...
ReplyDeleteaww, gotta love Dadi, and Dr, Mittal may have worked throughout her pregnancies, but Khanak has had Shantanu and her insecurities to deal with so it seems harder for her
ReplyDeleteAaye hayeeee so.lovely. ....
ReplyDeleteThe mating should start now what say...The doc did a gr8 job....Khanak blushing was the best ..wondered what Shaan thought of it..... pls start the lil game asap...Khanaks life gets a new dimension..
Aditee splendid update
ReplyDeleteLoved how Shantanu noticed her little baby bump
Dadi wanted Shantanu to change is profession!!! No way he loves his work
Loved Dadi and Sunil Convo and they are right there may be egos between them, different thoughts but Shantanu never let Khanak go from him.
Shantanu is right let him handle this and Dadi and Sunil should back off because he didn't not able swallow Khanak choose baby over him
Khanak wants to work as she wanted to repay Shantanu for paying her loans but I don't think he will let her work
Doctor said to Shantanu to come to hospital for ultrasound scan ....... Hope he will go with Khanak
Khanak asked doctor about intimacy!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved the part Shantanu checking out Khanak and blushing Khanak.
Waiting to see how both resist each other in mating tit for tat game
Loved it Aditee superb part Bummer Dadi & Sunil Dad worry so much for them they know these two well I can understand he is angry she left him!
ReplyDeleteThey both need to spend time with each other like a vacation or so as his boss suggested it would be great!
I have a question he is angry she left him if she asks sorry will he melt and accept her apology?
Second part haayee so hot blushing part the doc said it to him and he watching his wife was damn perfect!
Khanak asked about being intimate i bet they can't stay away from each other their little mating tit for tat game is going to be hot sexy and mindblowing!
Eagerly waiting for next!
Thanks a lot love u loads <3 <3