Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Savior of all things in trouble

He was impassive she was unhappy... at being discovered.... she knew he didnt want to be a Dad... his family was now involved....

Dadi: Ek news doon tumhe?
K:Hmmm
Dadi: Kal Bai Aada aa rahe hain...
Khanak dropped her spoon with a clatter...
K:KYON? she asked...
Dadi laughed out loud....
Madhavi rolled her eyes "For you Betaaaa. We have a busy weekend you guys, no fights, no nothing" she took a dig at them.
Shaan was on the phone...
K:Dadi I just keep feeling nauseaus (her voice was hoarse)
Dadi hugged her "Its going to be a aone naughty child" she said smugly

Madhavi: Like MY younger one...
Dadi: He set records... uska hai ab... to hoyega hi... (smiling)
Khanak turned red....

Shaan: Dadi, That French Door has a crack... I thought Dad had his assistant call a handyman..
Dadi: Not sure puttar...
Shaan:I am going up to check...
Khanak thought "thats my cue NOT to follow you"
He turned around and looked at her almost as if he read her mind....

She was dizzy and sleepy... she would kill to go back to her bed... she sighed and lay back...

Nobody talked about her disappearance... maybe it was common in high society families.... but she wondered HOW he found her

K:Dadi aapne kaha Shaan ko?
Dadi looked startled "I have NO idea" she whispered... "I dropped my chai when he called me" 
"Bus Ritu ko maloom tha aur aapko" Khanak muttered
D:Ab laut aayi na, bus koi gal nahi putaar she said smiling..
K: He  (stopping)
D:You know he is mad...
K didnt respond... if legal separation and custody was in the cards, she would fight it until she died...
"How DARE he claim a child, he doesnt even WANT"

M:You should go upstairs beta
A screeching "Deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" jolted her
Sonali walked... ran... sprinted... "Deee yeh kya ho gaya?" she asked laced with half surprise half shock...
Madhavi laughed at the girl's feeble attempt of humor

Dadi:Bus beta... dont crush her...
K:Yeh kab aayi? Tum kab aayi?
S:Main gayi hi nahi, mujhe 11 din ki chutthi hai... Wed, nahi Thursday ko jaaoongi
K's muddled brain ached "Oh no, another 5 days with this brat?" it wailed...
S: Kya feel ho raha hai aapko?
K wanted to say "I wanted to be incognito... I didnt want you here, I didnt want my husband to be the savior of all things in trouble"
Upstairs Shaan was setting up to take a conference call... Dad's assistant texted him "Home emptied things on its way to Hill"
His lower lip twitched in a derisive smile as his wife's favorite peach roses bobbed in the breeze outside..

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12 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 13, 2014 at 7:50 AM

    hehehehe! she was the hero for her family and problems nw he is :)))
    he is gonna use this chance to show who is the boss lol!
    awww want khanak to go to her room and bth maybe have a chance to talk :))
    amazing update aditee apt title :P

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  2. chandu8881May 13, 2014 at 8:15 AM

    Only thing..I know I have already repeated this..but..why sonali??? :p
    And her line..what does she mean by kya hogaya? I seriously felt like laughing..she seriously needs to grow up! :p
    Now her parents also know..good :)
    Only person who is unhappy is khanak..
    Ha! The evil smile on his face at the end..that killed it! :D
    The whole family will be here..and these won't get their time to talk..
    Loved dadi still more..:)
    Thanks aditee and continue soon:)

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  3. Shalini_SMay 13, 2014 at 8:21 AM

    over and above, Sonali is here.. seriously.. can somebody let these 2 live peacefully without no interruptions..

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  4. RationalistMay 13, 2014 at 8:22 AM

    Lovely update once again....
    His planning is well known ..
    Want to see what he does eagerly. ...
    Sourya

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  5. UnknownMay 13, 2014 at 8:37 AM

    sonu is a joke......seriously. .......shaan seems he would use this situation in his use.......happy everyone knows......thanks :-)

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  6. jalisMay 13, 2014 at 9:00 AM

    sonali is staying in hill for past sooooo many days :P
    waiting for next
    better they talk shanti se i hope :P

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  7. vineeta2108May 13, 2014 at 9:49 AM

    the update was lovely except the Sonali part.........isko tolerate karna impossible hai, really..........now this girl will be interfering all the time..........Khanak's parents are also coming.........waiting for the next one Aditee!!

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  8. UnknownMay 13, 2014 at 9:54 AM

    I still cannot come to term Sonali is Khanaks cousin! She is ridiculous!

    Was the title intentional? He is gonna be the saviour and this is not going to go well with Khanak!

    Hmmm! Not a clue of what he is thinking about this whole situation! Want to know...

    Thanks Aditee

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  9. pooMay 13, 2014 at 9:55 PM

    Loved it!!! ♥ Shaan still giving her a silent treatment to Khanak..:/

    Khanak's Aada and Bai coming to see her..Nice..:)

    How Shaan found where was Khanak hiding??? o.O

    Of all Sonali is here..Hope she stops flirting with Shaan..

    Wanna know Shaan's reaction..When he came to know tht he gonna be a dad..:)

    Looking forward and thank you for writing a lovely update!!! ♥

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  10. adventure_gurlMay 13, 2014 at 11:42 PM

    interesting update, the brat Sonali needs to go away

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  11. KrithikaMay 14, 2014 at 5:57 AM

    Lovely part so everyone knows about her pregnancy Khanak's parents r coming Sonali is using Gujral mansion he let her come when she isn't home pack her off Aditee send her soon!
    I feel for Khanak i want to know Shantanu's feelings & thoughts
    Waiting for next part :-)
    Thank u love u loads <3 <3

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  12. sudhagudaMay 15, 2014 at 5:53 AM

    Aditee awesome update

    Every one knows Khanak is pregnant
    Khanak's Bhai and Adaa are coming and Sonali also there at their house
    I want to read Shantanu's POV. How he found hiding Khanak, His reaction finding Khanak is pregnant and his thoughts

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