Saturday, May 10, 2014

"Empathy"


Madhavi sipped her green concoction.... and stared out the Arabian Sea... "Maybe she did the right thing Sunil"
"Shaan ko nahi chahiye bacha...but she desperately wants one she is a smart girl... she stepped back assessed the situation and did what was right for both"

 "She is immature.."
"I dont think so" Madhavi argued....
HL brought Sunil's pre-lunch snack... something horribly healthy... "Ek flat tire Ale HL" Sunil commanded
"Now?" she asked

 "Its past 11 Madhavi and my fave girl returns" he smiled...
"He should have just let her be" "Usko force karke hame kya milega?" "You know the Parmars"
"Ankit Parmar is a jerk" Sunil said bluntly like his son...
Madhavi huffed and sighed... "Hmppfff" she grunted...
"He is way too focussed on his career.. ab paisa laga hai Ulwe mein, hes getting a influential role. Ghar par rehta nahi abhi 30 ka hua hai..."she ranted in chaste Punjabi

 HL returned with his frosted mug... the morning breeze caused the jasmine vines to sway on the white pergolas extending out from the balcony... in signature style.... Sunil could very well afford a swanky bungalow in Pali Hill or Juhu, but he liked high rise living it was less hassle with the Tax guys also
The penthouse was over 25,000 sq ft in all, bigger than any bungalow.... he had bought 4 apartments, torn the wall down and exponentially multiplied the living space... the average apartment in Mangal Kunj was between 12-15000 sq ft...

 U will say that long after he crosses 30" Sunil mocked his wife

 "Arey woh bhi chhoti hai, Khushboo had hers closer to 30, so she has at least 15 fertile years whats the rush"
"I feel for the bechaari" Madhavi used the classic word associated with under privileged to express artificial empathy

 The rush is, tera laadla usko time deta nahi... aaj VP, kal CEO, tennis... scuba diving... squash...he is aggressive and driven... uske mutthi mein aata nahi" Sunil spoke in Punjabi

 "Woti di mutthi vich?" mocked Madz

 "You know what I mean Sunil scolded her

 "Cmon Sunil... she doesnt step down until Noon on weekends.. uski shakal se lagta hai isne usko chain se soney nahi diya hoga" Madz mocked her husband... "I mean she knows she got him good"
"thats a very cruel thing to say Madhavi... usne kabhi tere laadle ke aaage peeche dance nahi kiya," he did a trot with his fingers. "He went after her"

 Hmpppfff" grunted Madhavi... I am going to take this call" she said theatrically waving her phone, glad it buzzed

 Sunil shrugged and stared... grinning ear to ear as she left the balcony..
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13 comments:

  1. adventure_gurlMay 10, 2014 at 10:51 PM

    loved the update Aditee, looking forward to homecoming

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  2. RationalistMay 10, 2014 at 11:17 PM

    Totally loved....
    Now time for Deepavali....homecoming of Ram and Sita...
    Not until noon...lol...scuba squash and everything. ..hmmm interesting

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  3. UnknownMay 11, 2014 at 2:38 AM

    hehehehehe! mads trying to insult khanak but love sunil he seems happy with the news and he will always have a answer to his arrogant wife looks like mads might start scheming and use dis chance : x
    thanks so so much aditee! it was a brilliant weekend surpise for me

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  4. jalisMay 11, 2014 at 4:00 AM

    sunil always support khanak
    honestly i dont care who is with khanak or madhavi insulting khanak
    worry toh ye hai that shan adn khanak's relationship is on a toll right now
    how cn shan say or do such a thing atleast seeing her condition kuch toh soch ke bolna chahiye :P

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  5. UnknownMay 11, 2014 at 4:23 AM

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  6. UnknownMay 11, 2014 at 5:06 AM

    sunil is a very compassionate person.....loved how he routes this couple :-)

    Question how did they all find out she is pregnant? :-)

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  7. Shalini_SMay 11, 2014 at 6:28 AM

    omg... 2 updates on a Saturday.. missed it Aditee..

    loved it.. hope there is a FB about how he knew and the family knew..
    Madz still bitching about Khanak.. waiting to c how she is going to behave..
    Shaan and his arrogance.. Khanak has a tought time managing mom & son..

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  8. pooMay 11, 2014 at 7:34 AM

    Loved it!!! ♥ Shaan absolutely adores Khanak..But I do find Khanak to be immature and stylish in this..What happened when she entered home? No one said a word against Dadi in this matter?

    Just like that she is forgiven for her childish act? Except Shaan of course..

    Looking forward and thank you for updating a superb update!!! ♥

    P.S: Pleasantly surprised to see two updates on weekends..Wish you update every day..:)

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  9. chandu8881May 11, 2014 at 7:46 AM

    My my..updates ki baarish:D
    Thank you so much aditee!! <3
    Madhvi so much doesn't want to see the girl:p
    Sunil kinda understands her..but still he's upset with her..
    U do know what I want..;):p
    Waiting to see her entry into Gujral's for the third time:p
    Loved their convo..it just tells about the relationship about Shaan khanak's relationship..Sunil argues for khanak and madhvi for Shaan :p
    Continue soon aditee!! :)

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  10. UnknownMay 11, 2014 at 8:05 AM

    Thanks so much Aditee!

    Loved the previous and this one! I see the game begins now!

    Really want to read about Shaantanu feelings and view...I am predicting he is angry but he will or cannot let Khanak go

    I am like the idea of on going war at HOME! Wonder how'll they avoid each other expecially when their sexual chemistry is always high!

    I'm glad Sunil was able to shut Madhavi up!

    Her full on snobbish attitude annoyed me. I dont want a third person creating a difference if there is one, its because of THEM only!

    Waiting for the next...Update soon

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  11. vineeta2108May 11, 2014 at 11:40 AM

    Thanks a lot for writing Aditee.........absolutely loved reading the back to back updates!! 'not with my child inside you' was fabulous and iam with Shaan...........his deal with his wife is an interesting one.........can't wait to see how they live together after Khanak's pregnancy and their fight over her disappearance !! it was lovely reading Sunil's view on the couple but Madhavi irritates me!! eagerly looking forward!!

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  12. KrithikaMay 12, 2014 at 6:05 AM

    Aditee i want to know Shantanu's true feelings he is angry but i want know what's on his mind & heart he spoke about custody and wanting an agreement i want the flashbacks
    Loved Sunil & Madhavi's convo :-)
    Waiting for next part!
    Thanks love u <3 <3

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  13. sudhagudaMay 15, 2014 at 5:28 AM

    Loved Sunil and Madhavi convo and how it shows the relationship of Shantanu and Khanak
    Loved how Sunil supports Khanak and understands her even though he was upset with her act.
    Madhavi insulting Khanak but Sunil always had his way to shut up his wife
    Wanted to know what happened when she entered into home

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