Thursday, May 22, 2014

Prescription Seduction


RITU arrived unannounced at 10ish that nite.... Khanak sounded excited and thrilled when she spoke about her pregnant state, when the topic slid to her husband..... not so much...
"You cannot live like this forever Ritu said...
"Do you realize you have said that to me over a dozen times in the past three years... since... mera matlab" Khanak began to speak about Sooraj's sudden death

"THAT was different you fool, then Gujral found you"
"Sometimes I think what we share is only lust"
"Hallelujah... Praise the Lord" Ritu broke out into a noisy loud laugh
"You are a nut" Khanak stopped her

"YOU THINK, you have a lusty relationship... YA THINK?" her friend demanded
"Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" you are too loud"
"Raaaz toone baat hi aisi kahi... I mean, I could tell from the way he looked at you in Trishna's engagement'
"I should have had sex and dumped him" Khanak said boldly
"Then he would have come back for me, and more and more, and then would  have a last name of Gujral, and then" "Oh wait! Isnt that what happened now?" Ritu pretended to be confused

"Hee haw, too funny" Khanak hated being mocked at
"Oh! Wait the only difference is you saved it all for the big nite" Ritu laughed uncontrollably
"NOT the big nite dufus, 10 days after the big nite in Boston"
"Oh! Hooooooooooooooo, sure American consummation" "So did u guys do it the whole nite"
"SHUT UP" Khanak shrieked
"OMG You did didnt you"Ritu pretended to act shocked
"For tormenting him for 4 months he said" Khanak said all breathless... husky.
The girls didnt say a word afterwards for a few minutes, just stood under the jasmine wrapped pergola and stared out at the Arabian Sea....
"He never forgets anything..." Khanak said softly...
"Dont you think he should let me go instead of being an unwilling Dad?" Khanak asked her... sombre..
"Would you rather he lie and pretend like movie Dads? Ritu asked her
"No" said a defiant Khanak
"On top.. you just abandon the marriage and him and take off" Ritu continued...
"I dont like pity" Khanak said in a trembly voice
"Youve said THAT to me a million times" Ritu said unhappily
"Thats what I will get now... duty and pity" Khanak said firmly
"Do you know something more and are holding it back?" Ritu asked worried...
"This is the happiest time of MY life Ritz... I dont care if its not his" Khanak said softly...
"Toone sorry bola, bhaagne ke liye?"
Nope... I am hoping seduction will work..." Khanak said softly
Ritu turned around to stare at her friend...if anyone ever thought the friends did not share a honest relationship... this one statement alone struck and crushed that myth


13 comments:

  1. interesting.. she thinks seduction will work??

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  2. Loved it!!! ♥ Ritu came to see Khanak & support her!!! Awesome!!!

    Oh..Lust is there..Equal with the love..Tho they never utter the words..Just show..♥

    Ah..Remember how Shaan asked they should go to Goa for a fling in Trishna's marriage..He would ve never left her even if it took place..

    Of course he never forgets anything especially things related to her..

    She is happy as she got her wish..Poor Shaan..He feels isolated..

    No sorry only seduction..;) Cool..

    Btw she tried it in the past too when the collecting agency called him..But failed..Will it work now??? Or will he resist her???

    Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update!!!♥ ♥ ♥

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  3. wow ritu came for her friend :)
    ritu ka samajdari khanak me kyun nahi aayi ab tak :P
    ofcourse its the time to be happy then how shan cant be happy :P
    awww memories sighhh its coincedence bcoz i m reading casa frm start and juz done with boston updates hayeeee woh din :)
    OH WOW khanak is gonna seduce her husband hmmmm no sorry but seduction tat means she feels littleeee bit guilty for abandoning him like tat
    lets c if shan can resist her ;)

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  4. awwww thank god ritu is here she is so correct and only person khanak listens too lovely conversation between the two friends lol! :)))
    hayyyeee ritu reminding khanak of the before marriage days is cute lol! and torment for 4 months and she still believes it lust :x
    sahi kaha ritu nee she just cant leave wen he does not want a baby n why is khanak always thinking she will get pity it will be his love for her that makes him do anything for her :))
    thanks so much aditee lets see how she says sorry while seducting i like a sorry too from her shaan deserves that much atleast :P

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  5. ritu is khanaks mirror.......like a true friend shows her some reality and truths......lets see if the seducting comes handy.........sweet gesture of ritu coming over forever will envy a friendship like them :-)

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  6. Ritu is amazing wish I had a friend like her, well maybe I do lol, Khanak can be real with her and that is rare to find a friend you can be yourself with, lovely update!

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  7. Loved it! Super happy Ritu is here!
    The best friends convo is Bindaas! Love them :-) Ritu asked like me about sorry Khanak thinks seduction would work it will along with sorry i want her to say sorry and see his reaction and how he accepts! They r beyond lust its love i want them talking!
    Excited for next!
    Thanks love u <3 <3

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  8. Ritu is a darling! I love her to bits…I love how she is neutral on both parts!

    Ritu is right. What choice does Shantanu have! He is true to her and I don’t even think Khanak would have appreciated if he pretended to be happy…

    Does Khanak SERIOUSLY think she will get duty and pity? At of all those months and including the 1st separation…he was her continuous thought and STILL is…She is aware herself how protective he is about her AND I wont call that pity even if he does the same AFTER the baby.

    I will like a SORRY for once, someone please tell Khanak OF HOW he was when she was away, so she can feel more guilty :P

    Ha! The pink! Waiting to see how she breaks this myth too :P

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  9. Hawwww seduction will work...thats a bold statement nevertheless. ..lets see what she does...want to have a good confrontation or making up session for the couple....hot passionate and revengeful....:D

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  10. Aditee loved the update

    Ritu came to see Khanak
    Loved Ritu and Khanak convo and like best friend Ritu show her some real truths

    Loved the convo of Ritu and Khanak about Khanak's before marriage and Boston. Ofcourse Shantanu never forgets anything especially related to Khanak.

    Khanak thinks its Lust between them. Why can't she see love that Shantanu show to her even though they both never said that word to each other

    Ritu is right that Shantanu didn't pretend that he is happy and I too agree with Ritu that Khanak should say sorry for abandoning him

    Khanak want to seduce Shantanu that means she feels guilty for running away from him

    Waiting for next

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  11. loved it Aditee......both friends at their uninhibited best........only Ritu can tell Khanak the right and wrong things of a situation!! and lets hope seduction works!!

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  12. Can we get a weekend update?

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