Thursday, May 2, 2013

Part 119


Part 118
February 17th
Around midnite
Delhi

The car pulled into the bungalow’s drive way in Panchsheel Enclave.
“I am here now” she texted him at 11:20
Her phone had rang the next moment as usual.
“Are you still on the plane?”
Jee” she said softly
“Is Krit coming to get you?”
“Aur Ritu bhi”
“Ofcourse”
They held on…. As the announcements came on the plane’s PA….  she sat in her seat and stared at other people scramble to get out…
“Call me when you get to her house?”
“Abhi? Raat ko?”
Haan Khanak! Firm…
“Lekin” she stopped
“I can step away from dancing or pubbing or from the site for a minute” sarcastic
“Thanks”
“Don’t push it” gruff
“ I am at dinner with Rahat”
“I didn’t need to know that” she sulked in her mind….
“Celebrating?” she asked aloud, caustically
“Fightin over the phone is no fun Mrs Gujral, throw those punches in person”
The guy that sat by the window squirmed impatiently
“I have to go”
“Call me when you get a ride, or text me”
She didn’t respond
“Khanak”
“Jee”
They both smiled…
Ritu: Ghar aa chukka hai meri sleeping beauty
K: Itni jaldi?
R:I know, right? I mean late nite drives in Delhi are the best
K:Hmmm
K: Are the bags in the trunk?
R: Shaayad, yaha to hai nahi, ya phir Ms aloof airport mein bhool gayin
K punched her soundly
R dragged her out of the car and shoved her gently towards the door leading to the stairs
Khanak slithered over the stairs in half consciousness
R: Tera miya to sota nahi, and you are half dead at midnite?
K: Ughhhh
R: Oh! I know why… I know what will wake you
K turned around and arched her eyebrows
R giggled
R: Yahan kisi hottie ko bulwakar I can supply s--- for you
K: Sounds steamy… (hugging herself)
R texted…. Rapidly
K:Are you serious? (startled)
R smiled and laughed at her phone
R:I told him you are ready for an orgy
K: KIS KO? Ritz you are insane!
R:He wants me to send you back..
K: WHO?
R:Gujral (preoccupied)
K tried to snatch the phone back from him they chased each other… as R’s phone rang
R answered.. and mocked her friend…
K:Ya sure! I don’t have any feelings or anything! (hurt)
R hugged her tight… talking in serious Punjabi
R:Lo ji Miya naal gall karo ji
K: (in the balcony now) Shantanu?
S: I love that question mark at the end….NOT…(who did you think it is)








6 comments:

  1. 22222 goood.. Ritu & Khanak are always awesome.. loved it..

    ReplyDelete
  2. gosh!!! gosh!!! they are sooo cute!!
    inki phone conversations bohot bohot cute hai aaj kal :D :D
    I so want him to come now after Ritu teasing him abt the 'party'
    looking very forward to the weekend over delhi it is just too fun to have ritu around khanak she seems more opened and fun! lol! warna woh hamesha is only open abit to shaan only!
    thanks aditee for such a wonderful updates just love CASA :))) :)))

    ReplyDelete
  3. Ha ha ha..I loved the chasing of friends:D
    Late night rides..I wish I could do that some day! LOL!!
    Ritu is giving a live commentary to shaan:p
    Shaan is now ready to chew her up! Waiting to see what he'll do now?!
    Update soon aditee..please a lambawala..please..!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Loved it..:) Shaan cares for Khanak so much!!! He is selfish though particularly when its comes to her!!!

    Even their verbal fight is intriguing..lol..:D

    Awww..Ritu teasing her..too cute!!! Shaan checking on Khanak through Ritu..lol..:D

    Wish he comes to Delhi and surprise her..Even if its related to like work..She won't mind!!!

    The trio gonna ve lots of fun..Shaan gonna miss everything..Pradyun too will join them!!!

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update!!!

    ReplyDelete
  5. it was a lovely update Aditee.......Shaan, Khanak and Ritu........amazing trio!! Ritu always brings them closer!! looking forward for the next part!!

    ReplyDelete
  6. HOW ADORABLE!!
    Call him selfish and arrogant but when it comes to her, he is deeply caring but shows it in the most common way!
    The phone conversations with their usual endearing are creating a longing impact!
    The ‘jee’! Sigh! I love them….they just don’t need to be big on words!

    Aditeee…can he come to Dilli to just pick her up? He seems too agreeable these days…baat kya hai!
    He surely be sulking and wouldn’t have even texted her if she left off without his permission or being denied to go without him.

    I love Ritu-Khanak! They are epitome of true friendship!! Lol!
    The last line….loved the possessiveness and it won’t ever be anyone else surely :)

    ReplyDelete