Monday
February 27th 2012
The plane was late as usual, it landed well after 9.
She woke with a start, collected her ipod, pad and phone…
she was groggy, she wore a mustard kurta, and a green kalamkari salwar… the
kurta had an almost plunging neckline, the dupatta was the softest of silk,
chiffon in green with block printed peacocks all over…. The bindi was in place…
she did not wear any mangal sootra or sindor….
Her Dad was waiting outside…. He grabbed her overnite bag… “Are
you staying?” he asked in Gujarati…
“No I have to go tonite”
“Why is the bag heavy?”
“I brought stuff for you and Bai” she said trying to sound
cheery
“Dheeraj is a good boy just like” her Dad stopped in shock…
“Like Sooraj?” she asked aloud… staring up at her Aada’s
face.
She texted Dadi… no one else… there was no one home…
“Bai is making oondhiyo for you”
“Yay” she said, with fake enthusiasm…
“Dheeraj said he will come to get you”
“I “ she stopped
She realized she was not allowed inside that house…
“I will meet him at the bus stop”
“Your Dadi called, she wants me to hire a cab”
“ No” she said firmly, seating herself behind her Dad on the
scooter…
“Lets eat breakfast and talk about it”he said
“You should go to work Aada” she said shrilly, as he honked
to avoid traffic.
“I will go with you beta”
There was a moment’s silence
“ Shan beta should have come with you” he said
He hasn’t seen my face ever since I told him I have to do
this” she thought… upset, in despair….
“He is strong and authoritative” her Dad continued… weaving
his way thru the maze…
“and uncaring” she said aloud…
Aww khanak landed in gujarat....
ReplyDeletePoor girl she is craving for shaan....but he is not even facing her...
Hope everything resolves soon between shanak....
Cant wait for shanak confront....
Gosh! She said it aloud that shaan is uncaring, now aada will be all worked up..
ReplyDeleteI have this strong feeling that, shaan won't be coming..atleast to make my pretension wrong, make shaan land in Ahmedabad:p
Loved the update, when you described her clothes, I was sure that this night has got lots of stuff like in the morning:p
Hope atleast he text her..where is the guy? Aditee!!
Im missing him..
Continue soon:))
this fight will go on it seeems lagta hai shaan wont come as well :((
ReplyDeleteshaan needs to knw how much khanak misses him and affects her if his behaviour is like dis
loving this twist so muchhhh its like a battle of wills :D :D thank u so muchhh :D
Awww.... Khanak reachd thr... N shan still din meet her.... Its been more thn 3days....
ReplyDeleteHw upset he is....
Wann see him soon...
Waiting fr shanak....
sometimes i wonder.........dadi nahi hoti toh kya hota...........she is an essential bridge between them!! loving the twist immensely Aditee and i wish Shaan comes to fetch her just to let everyone know that she is his and that he loves her......of course in his own style!! each and every update was superb!!
ReplyDeleteomg.. did she just complain abt Shaan to her dad.. will her dad call him and talk?? waiting...
ReplyDeleteoh khanak reached thank god she is returning on the same day otherwise idiot rehne ki zidd karti
ReplyDeletelol!!! sometimes woh kehti hain jo nahi kehna chahiye hhahaa
loved it plzzzz give something about shan a longgg one and update soon :)
Awww..She landed in Ahemedabad!!! She looked more dejected of Shaan than nervous of facing past..Nice!!!
ReplyDeleteWhere did Shaan disappeared??? Khanak's Aada too wanted Shaan with her!!!
Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update!!! :)
wow what an update wonder what will happen now
ReplyDeleteAditee...update!!!!!!!!!!:(
ReplyDeletePlease update soon Aditee!!!
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