Monday, May 13, 2013

Part 125


February 17th
Panchsheel
She dressed in a black and copper broomstick/ wrung out cotton skirt…. And a black spaghetti clingy blouse…. Ritu had a “solution for everything” she gave her a glove like bag to wear on her left hand while showering, so she could keep her mehndi intact….
She smiled… allowing herself to be happy about Shaan’s arrival…. “Prad bothers him” “I am HAPPY”
She thought to herself….
She had come a long way from the distant remote person… she still did not express herself fully in front of him… but secretly rejoiced at his every attempt to reach out and claim her……….
She let the hot spiky water jets rain on her face….
He was looking for his phone charger…
“Where is your charger?” he asked without looking up…
“With my phone” she said…
He turned around to look and whistled… softly
“Where are we off to?”
“Wherever” she said not looking at him….
He walked over and saw her hair drip all over her shoulder and back…
“You are WET AND HALF NAKED” he bit out…
She shrugged carelessly as she walked past him trying to find a hair clip to secure her hair…………
He pulled on her strap…. Sliding her skinny blouse down…….
“Why are you in such a tearing hurry for?” his tone was higher……..
Ritu calling out”Mrs Gujral aap ready ho?”
“Haan” she responded looking at her husband… he let go of the strap….
Ritu walked in “Wooooooooooooooooowwww” “Are you guys going out or something”
“Something” Shaan agreed…
“Agar “something” hai to main I can let myself out” she chuckled pretending to walk out…
“In his imagination Ritz” Khanak offered calmly
Following her friend…
She turned around and looked at him
His face was inscrutable…. She wondered what was going through…. “Casa probably!” she thought……
Her husband’s involvement in it his Dad’s seemed murkier….
Shaan tried his best not to divulge too many details to Kritik… over dinner…
Kritik wasn’t prying… but Shaan seemed defensive… atleast to Khanak…
A multi crore project of a competing builder was just stayed…. A friend… who was more like family found himself without a job…things were happening… and happening fast……… her husband was the “Design VP” in the books….
But appeared to be over invested in the cause for some strange reason….
“You shouldn’t worry about it beta” her Dad had said about Ram…
“He is like an older brother to me” she had pleaded
“He is not fired… he will find something.. he should become Rahat’s in-house Design head” her father offered… like it was his own company
She stared at him startled…
A phone call pulled him away…
Ritu:Hey Mystery…. Pass the salad please”
K:Hmmm”
Prad: Kanak whats bothering you?”
“YOU!” said her husband bluntly

6 comments:

  1. Loved it..:) Khanak is ecstatic as Shaan is with her!!! :D Wooow!!! She dressed like that!!! Cool!!!

    Awww..Ram is out of job..Khanak feeling bad for him..Obviously she has too..He is a very good boss and as she said like a brother to her!!!

    Shaan's reply to Pradyun is always so apt and perfect!!!

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)

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  2. aditee you have posted dis part triple times lol!!!
    shaan is scared of khanak wet charm! :P lol!
    agreed shes come a long way and has became more childlike :)))
    casa mein kya hai ki everyone is securing it like some treasure :))
    mujhe lagta hia there is more to this casa business lets see :D
    hahahahahaha!! prad must be cursing the day he became shaans cousin :D

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  3. Same part again ? I comntd on othr pg ...lol

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  4. loved it Aditee......Shaan aur Khanak .dono saath mein hain and they love that but there is tension between them and its Casa......the rest has to be brilliant!! every bit of the update was amazing!!

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  5. Hey aditee..where are you? missing the daily updates :(

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