Feb 18th
11:02 am
Ritu’s maid was going in and out of the kitchen, Ritu was
standing in the balcony, deep in conversation with her Mum…. Her puppy yanked
the curtain repetitively…. It was a gorgeous Feb morning, foggy, cool, sun
peeking out in places….
Khanak steps out in her pink striped lounge pants and a
orange v neck full sleeve tee…. “Thanda hai darwaza band kar”
“Kar liya brush” putting the call on hold…
“Hmm”
“I meant KAL RAAT WAALA” Ritu burst out laughing “Ma aapko
ek second mein karti hoon haan? Khanak ko pareshaan kar loon jara?”
Khanak started sifting through the news papers… unmindful…. Smiling…
“MAINE invite nahi kiya usko… TUMNE kiya”
“Haan theek hai but invite IS LIYE nahi kiya ki tum log raat
ke 12 baje poker chhodkar apne kaam par lag jaao”
Khanak ignored that….
“I could hear you plead” “BTW” Ritu walked away…
“Tu Gujral ko Shantanu kehti hai?” giggled
SHUT UP! Khanak was sheepish
“Were we loud?””OMG!”
“Arey naahi” “I went into the study to print out the poker
hands from the web, uski deewar tumhare kamre se common hai na”
“Ritz please”
“Arey MAINE kya kiya?”
“I want chai”
“Uske baad…”
“SHUT UP” Khanak hissed as the men entered the house
Pradyun checked her out… she looked satiated…. Her face
flush with color… “Its cold” she answered to him….
“Really?” he asked irritated.. he had a clue… what she was
trying to hide… scars from their night of passion………..
Her hair flew all over her face…. She pushed it back…. Looking
for a scuncie… Prad watched carefully as her husband seated himself by her…
sweaty and unshaven……… “You need to shower” she ordered softly….
He rubbed his jaw on her shoulder……. The stubble poking
through her fabric….. “Tchh”
Pradyun”A game of golf later?” shrill
Shaan ignored the guy stealing his wife’s paper……
Kritik: I bought it man!
Shaan:Good for you!
Khanak realized it must be some stock tip….
Ritu:Gujral tum logey chai?
S:WITH my bacon and eggs
K:NOT bacon…
His hand snaked and grabbed her left… “Looks good”
“All gone from here” she pointed to a spot that was orangey…
R:Gujral apni wife ko bolo meri help karey…
K:I am tired
Kritik: There! Love! You just heard your friend… Gujral is
responsible for her state… make HIM work…
Khanak immediately jumped up “I was kidding” she lied…
walking away
Turned around and looked at her husband…
He looked back at her…
“I miss Ritu” she moaned
“Does that mean, you want to move here or stay longer?”
“Both “ she admitted pushing his seeking face…
“Negative” he had answered biting her soft skin below her
collar bone………
“Shantanu”
“Move your hand”
“Nahi”
They had wrestled….
They fought over Dadi
“You want her to defend you even if you are wrong” he said
smothering her
“She is mine” she hissed
“What about?” he had pressed his arousal….
“Shantanu”
“They can all hear us Shantanu” ‘Sab bahar hain”
“Nobody cares! It’s a Saturday nite, I didn’t fly out to play
POKER!” his teeth causing havoc on her belly….
“Nobody except the tool”he said savagely sliding her
broomstick skirt off her waist…pleasure merged with anticipation merged with
ecstasy…
eekkss what a hot update loved it awesome
ReplyDeleteso ritu and i was right LOL!!! :D
i miss this love u shanak it was very hot :)
why prad is acting like strange suddenly pehle toh he was not jealous like this but now it seems its getting stronger day by day this is not a good sign
krit bhi naughty banne laga hain lol!!!! very good krit :P
update soon !!!!
Loved it..:) Ritu wants to tease Khanak so she cut her mom's call..How can she miss any chance of teasing her..Rofl..:D
ReplyDeleteAwww..She answered to Pradyun by the way he looked at her..She reads him too and so does he..Really don't know what to say about him!!! Pradyun is in head over heels in love/attracted to Khanak!!! Will he ever able to forget her and move on???
ShaNak fought first and made up later..;) Shaan always straight in answering..lol..:D The romance part is sizzling hot!!! <3
Looking forward and thanks for writing a fabulous update..:)
P.S: Really wish Casa gets published as book one day!!! :)
Gosh! I don't have any words for this update! *blush*
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot aditee:D
Prad is jealous now! LOL!
Finally..the inevitable happened on the night;)
Krit is also like ritu! Khanak is totally embarrassed!
The talk between them was heart thrilling:D
Loved it a lot:)))
Waiting to know, whether the couple gets back to Mumbai together or not:p:)
ishhh!! what a update!! tooo hot! :))
ReplyDeleteuff yeh prad bhi he need to be over khanak and he should know its useless as he cleary can see what a fiery relationship they have :P
i luv ritu-kritik so adorable they are and good friends! even ritu knows khanaks endearment for shaan :P
ab next kya hone laga hai with shanak reali cant wait :D
i agree with poo casa is a classic and deserves to be on a better platform you writing is too good :D
Hotttttt update.....
ReplyDeleteKhanak hiding love bites...ishhhh....
Prad is serious !!! LOL....
Ritu heard too much :p
d passion n intensity...hayee...
Update soon...
it was a super hot update Aditee!!loved it!! Ritu has to tease her friend......she is a darling!! poor Pradyun......i feel sorry for him.....hope he gets out of his infatuation soon!!
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ReplyDeleteHeyyy Aditee!
ReplyDeleteI am sorry! Work/Uni is keeping me on my toes!
But it was a different pleasure to read couple of updates at once
I'll try to catch up whenever possible...anyways, I'm loving the Dilli endeavor!
I DONT want it to end either! I JUST love Ritu! Am telling you, you must write a love story next on HER and probably Krit as well BOTH seem a witty couple :)
I was to point out the same about Khanaks growth as a person! But you outdid it in your update...she's really come a LONG way and remembering some of her nuances of the time she was a widow, its incredible to see her still the same but is embracing this life to the fullest
Can Prad let go of her now? I know his a factor to strike Shaantanus' possessiveness! But sometimes I feel he'll needs to hit the nail and move on
LOVED the 'Shantanu' and the silent communication between them...you just can imagine this couple vividly!
Waiting to see whats next with this couple....hopefully more of fights :P
P.S. Miss your blue and pinks! Its been long :)
omg.. Ritu heard it.. hahaha.. Khanak would have been mighty embrassed.. loved the after effects.. btw, i think its time Pradyun moves one...
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