Friday, May 3, 2013

Part 120


K: (in the balcony now) Shantanu?
S: I love that question mark at the end….NOT…(who did you think it is)
K: You can never be really mad at me! (giggle)
S:Stop flirting Khanak! (mad)
K:I am hungry… I just got here…
S:Ofcourse plane food was not acc to your specs?
K is silent….
R: Tum dono ko phone ki zaroorat to hai nahi… you can just place your palm on your ear and pretend to talk… sab unkahi… (dreamy)
K:Silly…
S:Who?
K: Main….(jaaoon?)
R: Arey wah us se permission leti hai
K thinks “If I don’t I have to pay for it later” as her insides careened…
R grabs her phone… “Gujral yeh AB BHEE aayi yaar, please give us time”
S:You sound like you are (lovers)
R:Hee haw… I am straight and the straightest of all… check with Krit
S: Krit? (mocking)
R: You can make me mad all you want… but I have your prized possession… bwahhahhhahhh (evil laughter)
S: Can I talk to her atleast..?
R:NOOO!
Krit: Hey hun, snack or dinner? Prakash wants to know…
R:Dinner, dinner, dinner!
S: Enjoy…
R:Baat karogey?
S: Nah… I think I have better things to do…
S chuckled
R mock fumed and whispered in her friend’s ear, handing the phone and returning inside…
S: back tonite?
“Ha” chuckled Khanak… “Abhi pahunchi main” (serious)
“ You’ve seens her now”
“Shantanu”
“We didn’t finish what we started at the swing”
Ritu:Pradyun hai, baat karegi? (yelling from inside)
K:Oh! Really?
S:Is Pradyun there? (livid)
K:Ummm… I… no…
R walks back into the patio…. “Abhi ruko” (into her home phone)
K: Kal… mera matlab subah call karoon?
S:If you are not too busy… (taunting)
K:I will call you before we leave… for shopping…
S doesn’t respond…
K: Aapke liye kya laooon Dilli se? (chirpy, happy)
S: Nothing for me… just buy him (Pradyun)some arsenic !
K: Jee! (agreeable, reveling in the feeling of making him jealous)
Grabbing the phone from Ritu, as her husband disconnected bluntly…
Click.







7 comments:

  1. inki phone conversations are killing!!!!!!
    ritu is right both dont need to talk all the eyes and silences, make outs do it anyways :P :P
    these two are too tooo cute always loved their phone conversations :)) :))
    hahahahahaha!! prad is so dead! why do i think he will come to dilli just to becoz of prad!
    idhar nahi ruk sakti ab poora weekend intezaaaar, ek chota se update if you get time :D

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  2. loveddddddddddddddd the phone conv
    i m waiting to know how many days khanak is planning to stay they havent solved the esteem project case yet lets c where it goes :)

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  3. Gosh!! He's hopping mad!!:D
    Loved their convo aditee:)
    And pradyun is on the other..that just added the correct spice..:p
    The swing thing means..the make out part or the truce??:p
    Shopping! It reminded me of theirs Delhi hatt shopping:D sigh!!
    Thanks aditee!:)
    Continue soon...:)))

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  4. Wow!!! Loved it..:) Awww..Shaan wants Khanak back immediately..If he misses her so much, why can't he go to Delhi???

    Shaan is possessive for Khanak even with Ritu!!! lol..:D

    What a surprise Pradyun called making Shaan livid and jealous!!!

    Really wish Shaan come and join her!!!

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome di..:)

    P.S: Please update on weekends too Aditee!!!

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  5. Eeeee!! They are being too nice these days or just adorable :D
    Ritu is RIGHT! They have that 'one in a million attraction'...no need to communicate verbally

    Just the mention of Prad ignites Shaan...I wonder after that 'click' from the phone, he will make it to Dilli!

    These two are insane! They are loggerheads 24x7 when together and the minute they are apart the longing is there!

    Thanks Aditee...this weekend trip sounds exciting already!

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  6. whether u take permission or not, u need to pay heavily when u return Khanak... nice update..

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  7. loved it Aditee.......eager to know how Shaan reacts knowing about Prad!!

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