Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Part 122


Part 122
The girls stood in the kitchen quietly helping the maid start lunch preparations. Pradyun and Kritik had taken the car to the service center for an oil change…
K:I have asked him in every which way (pleading)
Ritu begins speaking in Hindi, quickly checks herself after Khanak signals about the maid…
R:You are still so young sweetie… ek do saal aur… u know… its not like you are 45…
K: I will still be waiting then (bitter)
R:Hey! Atleast you will be still married to the guy (giggles)
“Riiight” (disbelief)
“Don’t be childish Khanak”
“I am not”
“I haven’t seen this side of you ever! You were always mature and a seasoned life expert” Ritu commented somberly
“That’s just wool I pulled over you guys’ eyes” smiling without being amused
“Now I see this impatient, demanding, adamant teenager” Ritu guffawed
“Is that what it seems like? Khanak argued frustrated….
”Main kapde dho loon? The maid asked..
R:Haan theek, mera yellow salwar alag se bhigoya maine, please usko masheen mein mat dalna
The maid nods and smiles
K:Gosh! She is like me, she responds with a nod where she should typically speak
R:Hide the condom Mystery!
Khanak looks at her startled “Funny” shaking her head
R:Main tujhe bata rahi hoon… the guy cant keep his hands to himself when you are in bed.. so just do it
Khanak smiles… a warm glow envelops her…….
“Tell him honestly about when you see yourselves being parents”
“He KNOWS, he is a dog!” furious
“Yikes! Temper?”
“He knows… he yanks my chain constantly”
“This is EXACTLY the kinda a guy you need, nahi to you will slip into slumber… like Rip Van Winkle”
Ritu starts making more chai
“I going to go take a shower” says Khanak… washing her hands after chopping onions…
“You need to relax my friend” Ritu said calmly
“I am relaxed today” Khanak lied
“As if you didn’t have enough to worry about with your family stuff… ab yeh Casa… phir bacha”
“That’s just my life” annoyed
“Please Mystery”
“Chal shopping chalet hain”
“Pehle who log aa jaaye, lunch ho jaaye phir, tu naha, Aada ka call return kar le”
“Hmmm”
“Shaan se baat ki?”
“Nahi” firm
“You don’t even have to think about that one do you?”
“Nope!” Khanak smiled gloriously
While Ritu made plans secretly to bring him to Delhi…








11 comments:

  1. Loved khanak and ritu's convo..
    Hoping that ritu will succeed in bringing shaan to delhi..

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  2. amaaaazing update aditeeee....ritu makes casa more fun!!
    ritu is just tooo entertaininggggg!! if shaan heard the idea he would have screwed her down the ground :P lol!!
    i agree though its too early and khanak already had too much baggage around her she needs to relax and maybe than coax him for baby :))
    woww!! love rituuu! she could use prad is a plot to bring him to delhi :))
    cant wait see the couple back together :D :D

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  3. yep! even i hope that, ritu's plan should work! :D
    Lovely aditee! hmm..i don't know to support which one? i mean Khanak or ritu?! Ritu is right in telling that Khanak still has time..seeing khanak in this state, its not wrong on part of her for wanting a child..
    Ritu is funny! why doesn't Khanak call him?? she did tell him that she'll call..
    atleast a phone call for the couple?!
    waiting for next..continue soon:)))))

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  4. eekkss i love ritu i hope her plan works
    and i agree with ritu khanak has soo much stuff to take care of right now which sane girl will want a child at this phase khanak is behaving like a child seriously shan ke saath rehke dimag kam ho gaya
    i want khanak to first handle her insane family except her bai and aada which she care so much then she has casa and now new project she should seriously think about it calmly and then decide itna zidd achha nahi
    update soon :)

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  5. Ritu is hilarious, youve got to love her :D

    Khanak is childlike with Shaantanu only as he lets her be BUT this is one thing she probably have to pull her hair around even after couple of years he'll might be reluctant with this commitment!

    Waiting for Shaantanu... I wonder what is Ritu upto :)

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  6. Truly hope ritus plan works on getting Shaan over!!

    Don't think he'd be too please to see prad there though lol.

    Looking forward the coming updates :)

    Take care.

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  7. enjoyed the conversation of the two friends.......Ritu's idea about having a baby was hilarious!! hoping Ritu succeeds in her plan of bringing Shaan to Delhi......it will be great fun.......looking forward Aditee for the next part!!

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  8. gotta love Ritu she is a true gem of a friend! Her idea was hilarous! Gotta love her! Conversation was sweet and hope Shantanu surprises her like when their seperation came to end and he landed at her office

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  9. Ritu & her ideas.. always cracking... nice one.. hope Shaan comes to Dilli as a surprise..

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  10. Loved it..:) Khanak wants to have a child..She discuss everything with Ritu as she understands her well..Shaan understands but he is a selfish jerk..lol..:D Not yet ready to share his wife!!!

    Ouch!!! She didn't speak with him yet..Though she said she'll call him..

    Shopping..Cool!!!

    Hope Shaan comes to Delhi and Ritu succeed in her plan..Though wish he comes on his own..;)

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update!!!

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  11. Thats y I love Ritu..
    Come on. Bring Shaan to delhi...

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