Thursday, May 9, 2013

Part 124


9:44 PM Panchsheel
Saturday
Khanak had mehandi on her left hand… uptil her ELBOW!... Ritu lugged all her bags :-P
“Kal tu khaana bana rahi hai, and you are giving me a head massage and foot masaage. Hmppppfhh” she complained
“Head massage to main de chuki hoon whining about my problems” Khanak giggled
Ritu banged the door… “Kholo yaar”
Khanak leaned on the wall and laughed away
Ritu smiled at her…. Her friend looked tired but gorgeous…. In a mustard khadi kurta and an orange kalamkari salwar… her hair tied up high… no bindi, no sindoor, no jewelry, only kohl….
Kritik: Sheesh!
Pradyun:Whats going on…
Khanak walked in giggling…
He sat there staring at the two women…
“Aap”? “You are here?”
She turned around and looked at Ritu
“YOU did this didn’t you”
“Maine nahi bulaya, aapke WHO KHUD chalkar aaye”
“Mumbai se?” angry
“Mera matlab udkar” “Gujral I need some help here”
Kritik ran up and grabbed her bags…
Shaan waited for his wife to go sit by him, in khakhi cargo shorts and a striped collarless tee…..
He was drinking his SOR
“Only one hand?”
“One ARM” she corrected him…. Scoping her opponent out
“There goes our poker party kanak” Prad chimed
Shaan ignored the twerp…
“We can still play” she said………. Softly……….. looking at her husband

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10 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 9, 2013 at 8:11 AM

    yaayayyy! finally he came :D
    khanak is cutieeee!!!! uska reaction to shaaaaaan!! lol!!!
    khanak must be looking beautiful or way u describe makes them look so in my imagination :)))
    prad bug off!! aye poker game looks FUN :)))

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  2. chandu8881May 9, 2013 at 8:25 AM

    wonderful! He's here! :D
    Very happy to see him:)))
    Ritu is just the best:D
    im just flying now...Thank you aditee:D
    wanting to know what happens to the mehandi?!:p
    what is prad doing? at this hour?? Shaan has given the correct title..'The twerp'!
    Waiting for more...please next one a very very very long one..:)

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  3. vineeta2108May 9, 2013 at 8:47 AM

    Hey Aditee, that was Dhamakedar.........loving the setup......its going to be exciting and interesting and fun.........please update soon Aditee!!

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  4. Aasma...May 9, 2013 at 8:47 AM

    Woooow I knew it he was gonna com w hooooop whoop
    Next update plz plz plz LOOOOOONG
    Loool
    Xxx

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  5. pooMay 9, 2013 at 9:00 AM

    Eeeks..:D Shaan is here..Awesome!!! How coolly he is sitting and having his SOR..Must have missed his wife Khanak terribly..;)

    Pradyun must ve frowned seeing Shaan..Rofl..:D

    Its gonna be more fun now!!!

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update!!!

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  6. jalisMay 9, 2013 at 9:20 AM

    yayyyyyy shan is here shan is here
    eekkksss cant wait for the next ek aur update dedo plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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  7. RamzzMay 9, 2013 at 9:50 AM

    Yay!!!!!!!!! Aa gayaaaaaaaaaaaaa....

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  8. Shalini_SMay 9, 2013 at 6:10 PM

    looks like someone is very interested... good..

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  9. adventure_gurlMay 9, 2013 at 10:15 PM

    awesome update so awesome just gotta love his style!

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  10. monika aaryaMay 11, 2013 at 5:16 AM

    Just now completed whole journy of CASA including season 1 & 2...
    Compltly speechless....
    Loved ur writing.... N loving d tale....
    Ll b regular frm now on...

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