Monday, May 13, 2013

Part 125


February 17th
Panchsheel
She dressed in a black and copper broomstick/ wrung out cotton skirt…. And a black spaghetti clingy blouse…. Ritu had a “solution for everything” she gave her a glove like bag to wear on her left hand while showering, so she could keep her mehndi intact….
She smiled… allowing herself to be happy about Shaan’s arrival…. “Prad bothers him” “I am HAPPY”
She thought to herself….
She had come a long way from the distant remote person… she still did not express herself fully in front of him… but secretly rejoiced at his every attempt to reach out and claim her……….
She let the hot spiky water jets rain on her face….
He was looking for his phone charger…
“Where is your charger?” he asked without looking up…
“With my phone” she said…
He turned around to look and whistled… softly
“Where are we off to?”
“Wherever” she said not looking at him….
He walked over and saw her hair drip all over her shoulder and back…
“You are WET AND HALF NAKED” he bit out…
She shrugged carelessly as she walked past him trying to find a hair clip to secure her hair…………
He pulled on her strap…. Sliding her skinny blouse down…….
“Why are you in such a tearing hurry for?” his tone was higher……..
Ritu calling out”Mrs Gujral aap ready ho?”
“Haan” she responded looking at her husband… he let go of the strap….
Ritu walked in “Wooooooooooooooooowwww” “Are you guys going out or something”
“Something” Shaan agreed…
“Agar “something” hai to main I can let myself out” she chuckled pretending to walk out…
“In his imagination Ritz” Khanak offered calmly
Following her friend…
She turned around and looked at him
His face was inscrutable…. She wondered what was going through…. “Casa probably!” she thought……
Her husband’s involvement in it his Dad’s seemed murkier….
Shaan tried his best not to divulge too many details to Kritik… over dinner…
Kritik wasn’t prying… but Shaan seemed defensive… atleast to Khanak…
A multi crore project of a competing builder was just stayed…. A friend… who was more like family found himself without a job…things were happening… and happening fast……… her husband was the “Design VP” in the books….
But appeared to be over invested in the cause for some strange reason….
“You shouldn’t worry about it beta” her Dad had said about Ram…
“He is like an older brother to me” she had pleaded
“He is not fired… he will find something.. he should become Rahat’s in-house Design head” her father offered… like it was his own company
She stared at him startled…
A phone call pulled him away…
Ritu:Hey Mystery…. Pass the salad please”
K:Hmmm”
Prad: Kanak whats bothering you?”
“YOU!” said her husband bluntly

4 comments:

  1. Nice.... Khanak happy coz shantanu jealous... LOL

    something....hayeee...

    issues still bothring both...

    Prad ...wrong place... LOL :p

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  2. Beautiful aditee:)
    I loved it a lot when u said that she had come a long way with him, but still did not express fully in front of him:D that was too good:))
    He's in the mood of doing "something" but she's still reeling under the shock of stay..
    I guess rahat n Sunil are way too close..or is it in reality that Sunil owns it or something?! No idea!
    The last word, YOU took the cherry:D
    And yea the shower part was steamy..:p
    Thank you so much for updating aditee..continue soon:)))

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  3. woowwww it was going to be smoking hot but rituuuuu sometimes i dont like ritu being a kabab me haddi all the time but sometimes haddi banna jaruri hota hain hahhahaa this time right tha i dont want khanak to let go this easily bcoz this time its not about her family or some small thing ye bahut badi baat hain its very big dont know how they will sort this out but it should be a fair competition
    first time i dont understand dad sunil was never like this before this shows how sunil is like a business man business ke liye he did such wrong thing :(
    shan's answer to prad was bang on but i love prad uske jaisa funny and romantic ladka toh har ladki chahegi :) he is sweet
    wow aditee u updated this 3 times lol
    update next soon :)

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  4. Aditee.. 3 times.. 1 update.. good going :)

    loved the update.. i never expected Sunil to behave like this offering Ram a position in Ajmera.. too bad..

    as usual, Shaan was blunt & transparent towards Prad.. hope he is transparent to Khanak too..

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