8:07 AM
Dec 20th Wednesday.
Mangal Kunj
She opened and shut the million bathroom drawers looking
for the kind of claw clip that would match her outfit…. A chiffon skirt in pink
and lavender… the blouse was puffed sleeve in pink… her hair dripped on her
blouse… the airconditiong was too strong…. Freezing her entire back in the
process…
She walked back into her closet… Radio Mirchi reminded
her of the time. She HAD to be at work at 9.
Dadi wouldn’t let her leave withouting pressing down two
tons of breakfast in her stomach…
Her dabba would be ready tho…. NO MATTER what…… the
Thermos would be packed with whatever
she requested the night before. She sympathized with Hari Lal and would often
make “light choices” or even wake up a lil early. But would be sent right back
to bed.
HL’s toothy smile would reassure her her demand wasn’t too
overboard…
She found a sparkly lavendar in her closet’s chest of
drawers…….. she wore it as she packed her laptop case and her purse… took them
downstairs… flipped through the various newspapers lying on the table by the
dining area…… for 15 or so minutes…..
Went back to search for the clip she had in mind…….
her wardrobe, her
accessories and her jewelry had EXPLODED since May 2010…… when she returned
home from honeymoon, she had found everything in their original boxes or
packing… stacked in her closet…..
She kept track of it all religiously…… many he had taken……………she
lost track of which ones… too many to count……….. just like how she forgot her
loan instalment………..
He had blown her off last nite…….. she looked at her
wrist………where he had held her hand… to remove it from his key board………
She had slept on the center of the bed….. in defiance……..
She took off the lavender sparkly one… and the search
continued…..
She walked into the bathroom….. deep in thought as always…
found the man.. with a towel around his waist.......... the shower looked steamed up and he looked “hot”…… she bit her
lower lip to hide the smile that was induced by that cheap innuendo/pun……….
He watched her as she searched… his hair draining water
down his back…
She quietly shut a drawer…… and grabbed his shave foam
with trembling hands…”you are not doing this right!” she declared softly…. If her
voice shook…… it shook………the devil inside her had just taken her shot of steroid.........
He turned around in shock… not expecting a lesson on “how
to shave”.
She held the can straight and sprayed…….. all over his
chest and neck and shoulder…………… as he watched………… she emptied it all…….. and stood daring
him to make a move…… egging on a staring match.......
Without saying a WORD.........he picked her up…… punched the shower on took her
with him inside….. as she shrieked……… and screeched… in her loudest voice…….as the foam washed away.. some of it sponged off by his towel....... the remainder...........in rivulets down his legs...... and over her skirt
Aditee,
ReplyDeleteRead all the missed parts, loved them. Reminded me of the time right after they got married. Can't wait to read more.
Thank you and hope you had a lovely Deepawali!
ReplyDeleteGosh!
This phase of their relationship is exquisite...
You left it without a blue or pink line...aur woh bhi in a tempting situation!
Her sense of style is distinctive, always found her clothing/jewellery graceful...actually it’s one of the classiest couple: D
Simply loved mundane touch about harilal...I don’t reside in India, but whenever I go back home. It’s a mutual situation for me...I despise the fact someone does my work or even cooks for me. Maybe due to the fact it has been so long living in the UK and doing your own chores.
Khanak is like Shantanu in the previous season, more liberated and mischievous. Loving this side of hers...
She knows how to entice him...I’m pretty sure it’s more on the part of coaxing him of letting her go her parents.
Shantanu *sigh* no words for this classy man!
He doesn’t need to speak, actions always speak louder
P.S. You might be thinking like this girl always has something or another request...I wanted to ask, not now maybe later in the stage. I know this couple don’t talk ‘talk’ much. But it was a longing wish, IF like like they can have a normal convo about work or anything while watching TV and then argue over something unimportant annoying except the PHONE .
Update SOON and a PINK/BLUE. Please :D
eekkksss....very wrong time of stopping aditee:(
ReplyDeleteloved the whole thing, she searching for the clip and the thoughts running in her mind...
eagerly waiting for the next update:)
jaldi post kar na please....
P.S. i read SOL from first:P i was missing R&R:(
why did u stop it here man :( tch sirf itna hi kafi tha to catch my breathe ayeeeee aage kya hoga
ReplyDeleteplzzz plzzlpzlzzzz update soon :)
Khanak is cute and Mr. Shaan Gujral is smitten by her!! what next, Aditee......update soon!!
ReplyDeleteI am again in a flashback mode, this time remembering all the bathroom sequences......such an addictive couple they are!!
wooooooow loved it... I misss the old shanak, the one that love each otner like crazy loooool
ReplyDeletewannnna seee them back loool
xxx
Khanak is an adamant child now.. wanting a reaction from him, she even forgot her work.. very good update.. LOL..
ReplyDeleteLoved it!!! Khanak is particular in her accessories though she usually wear a very few..:) OMG!!! Did Khanak did that!!! LOL:D will Shaan blow her off now??? na..;)
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thanks for writing..:)
HI
ReplyDeleteis it one update a day or it pours like old CASA days ?
lol awesome brings back memories of their early marriage days, just loved this update!
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