Sunday, November 4, 2012

Casa II Part 10


Mangal Kunj
Dec 15th 2011
11:22 PM
Casa II
Part 10
He wore a green Old Navy tee on his sand colored cargo shorts… now…
His wife wore his coffee tee from the evening… as she slept…
He stared down at the traffic… as he waited for the Site engineer to come back with some metrics he had asked for…
He turned around and looked at the bed… her saree hung from one end…. Billowed in the breeze wafting through the open doorway….
It was after 11 PM
He could still feel that lusciously smooth skin on him….
As he waited, his eyes fell on a silver wind chime hanging from the truss…
Her Aada had gifted it to her… after his visit for Sonali’s nursing college admission
He hadnt told her about the phone call during the day…
She would want to go…. Over the weekend….
She would look at him with those big acusing eyes and expect for him to go as well, she wouldn’t say it…. She never did… but would expect…
He absolutely could not… go to Ahmedabad
There was no happy medium in their relationship........
He bullied her into his side or her silences drew him to hers...
But everything else was........... in one word.... GLORIOUS........
After the reconciliation in November, they hadnt been apart more than a day... more... like 20 hours...... 22 hours....... max......
This was a doozy... 4 days....... without touching each other...... being in the same city..............
If she hadn't shown up at 9:15 he would have gone to meet Rishi........
Now the disco ball was safe.. he wouldnt crunch it in the sheer physical frustration he was in...

Rishi Batra expected him @ the Towers at midnite… a few friends were getting together at the disco…. “70s” Rishi had texted “Bell bottoms?”
 “Sure” he had texted back with a sarcy face…
“Take your nap, well go @ midnite” he had told her….
“Nahi” she had refused… moaning on his neck…
She had skipped dinner…. Shower… and now she would… the party
The site guy returned with the metrics, he argued… at times raising his voice, looked at the bed… she turned… he shut the door… finished his conversation… and let himself into the room…
“Senior Architect” he muttered to himself… she had worked bloody hard for it… working 14 hour days during Casa di Sogni
And during the separation………
“I said one day Khanak (you went to Pai's for three)” he had argued…. Flinging his tee…
“Umm”
“You called Dadi?” furious…
“I hadnt seen Madhura in so long…..”
They had wrestled….
“How was the engagement?”(bored) (breathless successful in tackling her)
“You saw..” smugly sarcastic, since he didn’t go……..
“All over again now?” (I called you at work to tell you, since you didn’t pick up the phone the day of the engagement I texted you)he asked shocked… looking down at her accusing eyes…. Slid her bangles off her wrist……….. as she rolled her hands into fists…
He did…eventually
“You know about the geologist debacle”(frustrated)
“I don’t know about YOU” sliding from under him… until he found her in a second………
“How about now?” he asked smothering her
They complained in soft groans……….
She finally acquiesced……………………
Dadi: dinner beta?
Shaan:You are awake?
Dadi: Haan (matter of fact)
Shaan: Has Akshay taken off for the movie?
Dadi: Hmmm..
Shaan:Quit hanging out with my wife Dadi
Dadi laughed out loud….
She served for him… meat, potatoes… and HL brought rotis…
He chowed down hungrily
Dadi: Usne khaaya nahi…
Shaan: Shes asleep now… (color crawling his face)
Dadi: She is very happy (softly)
Shaan: She has worked her butt off! (angry)
Dadi smacks him with her spoon…
Dadi: Did she tell you…
Shaan: I found out… (grinned impishly)






10 comments:

  1. Awww.... Its sooo good to c u writtng casa part 2...
    Missed dis shanak alottt...
    Loved d updateee...

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  2. Haaye Aditee this is superb pure bliss <3<3
    Love the parts it's beautiful.. <3<3
    Our Casa magical and addictive as always!!
    Can't sleep without reading it...
    Shantanu found out about her promotions..
    They can't stay without eachother their separation taught him a lesson he will not let her go anywhere Possessive Shantanu...
    Love them both always!!
    Thanks for the lovely parts <3<3
    Loads of Love <3<3
    PS: Please update in IF miss those golden days with our friends

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  3. AWWW ADORABLE LOVELY!!!
    he has party at midnite but before that he has to make out with his wife
    he cannot stay without her even for a day 4 days must be like 4 years to him
    he will not go to ahmedabad but i want khanak to argue with him to go and he full angry young man hahaha awww that will be a treat :)
    OMG he is always a besharam 'quit hanging out with my wife dadi'
    and dadi is so cool she just laughed at it i love u dadi
    now he is going to the party wondering wapas kab ayega and kaam pe kab jayega hmm :)

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  4. Thank you Aditee...
    He seems so angry that he she got promotion after working her 'ass' off. DITTO! It applies same for him as well, but he's worse.
    He seems so smitten by her even nearly 2 years of marriage, I love how he is still cant or is not willing to let her go...but I love the fact, you'd didn't put them in like a relationship where they started to accomdate or even comprise for the satisfaction of each other.
    Being feisty and aggressive makes them much more interesting...
    I still want to know how the hell did he find out about the promotion probably Ram.
    AND
    Loved his line 'quit hanging out with my wife'! He totally cannot even tolerate that his Dadi gets more attention from Khanak. Lol! 
    His one liners of possessiveness and aggression makes me more flattered...than any other make out.
    I want to know...what's up for this couple as I cannot wait what you have up for them...
    Update soon :)

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  5. Shaan-Dadi convo is always amazing!! loved it..

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  6. All part are superb as always it was :)
    Mindblowing updates look like bring back old memories again.........
    Keep it up aditee !! :)

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  7. Fabulous!!! It was romantic!!! As everyone already mentioned casa ShaNak are "magical" and "endearing" :) So Khanak will be going to her house..good as she must..Is Shaan gonna wear bell bottom??? really??? ROFL :) what a scene that would be!!! Khanak can tease him too.. ROFL ;) Dadi and her favorite grandson conversation is as lovely as always..looking forward and thanks for writing :)

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  8. Aditee i had a wide grinning reading this update
    awesome update
    love the way shaan said to dadi "Quit hanging out with my wife Dadi"omgeeeeee!!!!!!!!what brat he is ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!
    waiting eagerly to know how he knew khanak;s promotion news
    update soon

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  9. Mr. and Mrs. Gujral are something else..........heated, passionate romance!!
    loved the part where you written about them not having any "happy medium" in their relationship and how they draw each other to their sides....that was superb!! and still they crave for each other and just can't stay apart........love this couple to the core!!

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