Casa 18
Mangal Kunj
8:18 AM
Dec 20th
The shower was tiled… with 8 sprays jetting from all
directions… thankfully the initial press of a button had only released the
overhead one…
She hid in his chest… he held her tight… her body
trembled… as she felt the chills…
Since he wasn’t quite prepared for the icy cool spray… he
twisted a knob… adusting the flow and heat ………..spraying warm water on both… he
could feel her relax…. “Let go of me!” she pleaded in his chest… his grip
tightened……as if they were talking to
each other and he just said “nahi” f irmly…. She lifted her head to look up at
him…. ..
… in full view
under the gentle spray… her clothes soaked to her skin…”This must be the
definition of torture” his brain mocked him…………She gently scooped the remainder
of foam from his shoulders……….. in her hand … and let it slip through her
fingers………as his fingers involuntarily trekked………. Under her blouse…….. over
her ribs….his thumb ahead of its siblings……….seeking……. She loosened her arms …
letting him scale the height until it encountered the trim of her lingerie
underneath ………..… she could hear herself and him breathe…. Audibly……….
….. She stood on her toes and gently leaned forward.seeking
his lips…he watched like he was frozen….”I” she began…feeling his twin crease…
with soft finger tips..
Just as her lips were about to make contact with his
crease…… he shut the shower off….. she
turned startled…
He extricated himself and stepped out………, opened the wide
glass covered shelf that contained towels of every imaginable color rolled up
and placed sideways… picked a couple and left it on the bath vanity. For her…. Grabbed
a couple himself… and stripped out of his soaking wet one… rubbed his head
vigorously… as she stepped out ignoring the towels he handed to her… grabbed a
couple by herself… and walked out of the bathroom soaking and dripping wet……….
She changed into blue jeans and a white shirt……her skin
carried the scent of shave foam….
She stepped out of her closet and saw his retreating back…
as he left the room… in blue jeans in a white shirt……..
She took her soaked clothes to the “laundry area” and
hung them….
Dadi: I thought… (confused) as she hung her towel)
K:Who Dadi… (fidgeting)
D cleared her throat..”dry your hair beta”
K:Hmm…
D: HL said you had a meeting at 9
K: I….
D:Koi baat nahi.. phone kar do…
They both walked downstairs…
“I was trying to flirt with my husband.. and he
completely rejected me Dadi” her heart wailed… as a lump formed in her throat…
D: Madhavi ur Khushboo were planning a girls nite out,
they said they called you, but tumne as usual phone nahi uthaya (laughs)
K: Its in my bag… I think…
D:Good (softly mocking)
K:Nobody calls me Dadi..
D: you should go out
with us… it will be fun…
K: Maine Ritu ko yahan aane ko kaha hai….
D: She could go with also
K:Dadi…
D scooping food generously on to her plate…
D: you are so busy…. This will give you some time to have
fun… maine Shaan ko keh diya… he rolled his eyes when I said “Girls nite out”
he doesn’t trust you to go with us…
K:Ummm..
D: He will be fine without you one evening…
K thinks “He HAS BEEN… FOR TWO NITES”
She squirmed when she was reminded of the rejection a few
minutes ago..
K looks for her phone… locates it in her bag, calls Ram…
lets him know she is running late…
D: Was Shaan really upset about the loan issue?
K:Nahi… (firm and soft)… Umm… nahi…
D:Good.. aaj khaya bhi nahi… chala gaya…
The phone rings, its Madz, Dadi answers…
Khanak
sips her chai lost in thought……..
Caller: Friday ko hai 4 baje… Jet… ya 7 baje Go Air…
aapko kaun si doon
K: Ummm
Caller: Waise 7 baje waali Rs.4500 mehangi hai..
K: 4 baje waali…
WOW!!! Its freaking hotttttt!!! OMG!!! Shaan walked out again!!! He is totally determined and has a lot of self-control..LOL:D and he absolutely aces in these two!!! Poor Khanak..:-( she is trying so hard to say that she forgot to pay coz of him..but he giving her no chance to explain..Khanak too in defiance booked ticket..infuriating him further..:D will he let her??? :-) its so intriguing!!!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thanks for the awesome writing..:-)
Good god!
ReplyDeleteThis is the same guy who couldn’t even resist 4 days without her and now when she is with him...he has unbelievably restraint!
I’m sure consciously his cursing himself for losing those chances :P
He is deeply hurt...But give her chance now! Bechaari has never made this much shot of flirting...she in a state of shock herself though LOVING this side of hers...emerging whole new forms of their relationships.
Yikes! Probably, Khanak might spend the Thursday with the family women! So...Is there a chance of Shantanu knowing about her visit? Plus she’s booked it for the afternoon! I bet its part of being rebellious now... it will add fuel to the fire!
AND RITU!! Yayyyy!! More chances to entice Shantanu! Khanak will surely use every chance to seek revenge for blowing her off :D :D Waitinggggggg!
Honestly! Really enjoying Casa 2, it’s emerging and revolving the characters...every story needs a growth AND your writing is definitely that!
Ek aur update mil sakta hai...whenever you are free. Pleaseeeee!
His creaseeee!
DeleteWhile reading it how did I miss it...the other day I was thinking...Aditee abhi thak hasn't even mentioned the crease and how Khanak always loved it! BAS his hair left now :D
What a good looking man he is! Well in my imagination :P
OMG its so freaking hot man how can shan walked out like this ? i m surprised by this act poor khanak she is trying her best
ReplyDeleteso khanak has booked tickets to go good
waiting when shan will know about this and what will be his reaction
waiting eagerly :)
omg poooor khanak shan ealked out on her like that,loooool,
ReplyDeletekhanak is gonnna go but I hope shaan goes with her cause atleast she will be happy nd he can spend aome time with her..
xxx
omgeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! its was very hawttttt!!!!!!! shanak in shower where else can it be hot rather then is shower ;)
ReplyDeleteshaan walked out and khanak was shocked
she is trying her best but didn't work out n he left her
she is booking a flight with out informing him aabh kya
hoga, they are not even talking to each other at least khanak tried but shaan is still angry
will dadi inform him
will he stop her or will go with her
i don't think he will go but Mr Gujral is unpredictable
waiting for next n for their romance too with khanak saying Nahi!!!! ;)
update soon Aditee
loved the update :)
Loving this tale a lot Aditee. read the last few parts in one go. So Shan is giving her cold shoulders as well as silent treatment becaus eof that loan fiasco. Glad to see Ritu again in this tale. Enjoyed her talks with Khanak as well as Shan. Mrs Gijral is not going to change, is she? Khanak was trying to seduce her hubby and he just walked out??!!!! So she is ready to go over the weekend, wouldn't it make him more angrier than he is now. Waiting for more. Hopefully the war is going to be ceased soon between the two with a mindblowing pink & blue lines. Thanks a lot.
ReplyDeletewhy doesnt she complete her sentences?? atleast to Shaan.. that shuld help.. rite?? uff.. these 2..
ReplyDeleteohhh!! once again he walked out...
ReplyDeletedid not expect this:(
she's leaving, but she hasn't told him yet:(
Waiting for next one:)
update soon...
forgot to add...
DeleteGirl's night out:D seems interesting;)
bechaari Khanak, nothing's working!! what's going on in his mind? awesome update, Aditee!! loving the way it's progressing!! before leaving for Ahmedabad she should atleast let him know the reason why she forgot the installment!!
ReplyDeletetotally shocked that he walked out like that! So she is running, question is how will he react this time or will he pretend not to care?
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