19th Dec 2011
Tuesday’
9:02 pm
She had made strawberry souffle’ HIS fave dessert…… not
on request… just like that……… she had returned from work @ 5ish……
She opened the frig to look at it…… it was pink creamy
and inviting…
HL: Aapki bhindi, saadi hai, thodi mirch daal doon?
K: Mmm…mm…
HL: Shaan Baba ne BBQ chicken bola… main who(service)
balcony mein grill check karke aata hoon, uske baad aapka souffle bahar nikal
doon?
K: Hmmm
She turns away shutting the frig…….
Takes a small bowl and serves herself some juicy well
cooked bhindi… its steaming hot… it singes her tongue…… she squealed in pain… Clamping
a palm over her lips ………..she turns to the frig to grab water and notices the
man from her thoughts had morphed into
flesh and blood and was looking at her from the dining table area…
They stood still… her tongue continuing to burn…
IF her eyes expressed gratitude at the concern that
brought him near the kitchen…and IF he noticed it............... He did not show it…..
He turned and walked away…
She set the bowl of bhindi on the counter and did not go
back to it………..
~~
Dadi: I thought bhindi was your fave beta…
K looks at Dadi and smiles
D: Thx for the smile… ab kha lo…
Shaan chews on his chicken… sitting an inch away from her…
they both are civil to each other and pleasant to Dadi…..
D:She made your fave dessert this evening
K looks at Dadi like saying “Thanks for letting him know
that, Dadi” in agony…… “whose side are you on? Mine or HIS”
Shaan is texting with his left hand…
Dadi: I thought there was a rule @ home about cell phones
at dinner table?
S: Was there? (preoccupied, staring at his display)
D: Tchhh
S:Dadi I work in construction!
D: Even the labor gets to go home @ 7…
S: I came home at 7..
D smiled derisively “Funny”
HL brings the chilled souffle…..
D: Kisko doon pehle?
S: Not me!
K: I will have some Dadi…
D: Shaan:
S: Nachiket turned 33, so we had 3 cheese cakes and 3
chocolate @ work… I cannot look at another dessert…. (theatrical)
D:You hate cheesecake!
S:I know, I had only
two slices…
K is visibly bummed……..
She quietly eats hers though…..
D:Tum dono!!!
K: Jee? (startled, looked up at dadi)
D:I am on the verge of……….. (stops)
K: I can have more (if you are done pampering that brat
of a grandson)
D: Sure hun!
K eats another bowl full…. It drizzles down her lower lip…
she fumbles to find her napkin……… wealthy people eat with real cloth napkin………….
Dadi finds her a new funnel shaped one……..
He leans back to let Dadi reach for her……
S: I have to take a call at 10…
D: I don’t approve
S:Thanks!
Dadi smacks him soundly……
K realizes he wont come to bed………
~~
11:16 PM
Tuesday nite
Dec 19th 2011
She stacks two giant pillows on her side…. And buries her
head……….. stares at the balcony door……… “its locked” ……….. “I hope”
She had left all the lights on in the room…….. she
wondered if he was working in the study……….. “talking construction at midnite” “Serves
him right”
She can hear foot steps……. Soft…….. she wants to turn to
see if he is walking towards the bed………
But she doesn’t have to…………
The bed depresses on her side………… she turns……… he meets
her eyes…… and leans back…… unmindful…….. he has his Mac book in his hand……….. makes her FURIOUS………..
She turns… on to her back……….. a soft “Hmmppfff” escapes her lips………
He works… unmindful………….
She inserts her index finger between his Swatch strap and
wrist and yanks…….
The laptop slides……
“Tchh” she says…. Holding his watch and wrist………
She lets go gently…….
She has no idea where the power save key is…… she lets
her fingers search on his lkey board………….his jaw drops as He stares at the long slender fingers… carress
the key board……. The diamond in her ring finger sparkles…
“I “ she says….
……and she presses
a random key…..
“You must be out
of your mind!” he manages hoarsely staring at her in anger mixed with arousal……
“I cant.. sleep” she admits…….. her hand on his…………..
He quickly hits the Escape key……with his other hand…....
reversing the damage……
Slides off the bed… walks out of the room hitting out the
lights with a tight “this should help (you sleep)”!!!
Beautiful. No word or another.
ReplyDeleteHe didn’t give her any heed...even she made the effort to make his favourite dessert; it reminded me of the day when both kissed in Druv’s wedding and her gloss reminded him of the dessert. Sigh!!!
I bet she is pursuing him more on the attempt of persuading him, so she can go to her parents! Lol! She is very smart especially when she wants something her way...
Shantanuuuu...Sigh. He is the most ADORABLE when he is moping...even Dadi was exhausted in seeing both them ignoring one another like kids!
They are kids themselves! I cannot picture them having one especially on this juncture.
Her attempts of pacifying him was endearing...really! It reminds me of the day in Boston after she admits she cannot live without him and they go to eat later, she’s throwing a tantrum and he is fondling around her...but its role reversal now.
And before he let himself go he walked out....I can imagine her blown off :P
Blue and pink lines as always leaving a mark...challenging. Sigh!
Her character has revolved immensely from the ice maiden to more compassion person...Now sleep invades her, coming from a person who never compromises...life does really revolve.
I guess she has to do more than just this now...especially if she wants to go to her parents and let’s see how long he can hold back...
P.S. Can she like pacify him for more longer? last season it was more of Shantanu offering end of war.
Update sooonnnn please :)
Yeh dhonon kabhi nahi sudharenge...
ReplyDeleteReally he walked seeing her trying to shut off the laptop.... :O :O
When will these two talk.....
Awaiting to know Shaan's actions when he comes to know her planning to visit Aada n Bai...
PS: AdiI have said this many a times n I'm saying it again could u please change d settings where v need to verify before posting comments... That would be making things easier when v login via phone....
Please consider this request...
Oh! Lovely Update Aditee! :D
ReplyDeleteShe made HIS fav desert! :D Ofcourse.., 'Just like that' ;)
So he DID come to her! :D
I want her to approach him this time! Its always been him! It hurts to watch him avoid her, but its high time she should understand holding people away from you, and denying yourself love, that doesn't make you strong. if anything, it makes you weaker. *Sigh*
Gawd! He had come to her, thinking she is ASLEEP! OR did Dadi sent him!? But I loved that part! I feel equally sad for both! He wanting to unfold her! But she would not let him! PERIOD! When he walked away, he made me think of a phrase.. "Angry, and tremendously in love with her, and half sorry, I turned away" *Sigh*
There is something SO awesome about watching two people get more and more crazy about each other! :D
"What lips my lips have kissed, and where, and why,
I have forgotten, and what arms have lain
Under my head till morning, but the rain
Is full of ghosts tonight, that tap and sigh
Upon the glass and listen for reply,
And in my heart there stirs a quiet pain
For unremembered lads that not again
Will turn to me at midnight with a cry.
Thus in the winter stands the lonely tree,
Nor knows what birds have vanished one by one,
Yet knows its boughs more silent than before:
I cannot say what loves have come and gone,
I only know that summer sang in me
A little while, that in me sings no more."
Sighhhhhh!!!!
Is that poem by Edna Vincent?!!
DeleteI've studied him during my college dayyyys...It was a perfect pick for this couple :)
P.S loved your analysis...I think it's high time she starts to make amends,it always him :)
Yes! One of the most soulful Poet! :D
DeleteTrue! They reminded me of these lines! And actually there are much more of her writings, which suits them much! :D If this continues, I shall post more! And I WANT it to continue! ;)
Heyy!
DeleteBeing honest...havent read much of her poems. Ive read her autobiography....
Read some there and here during the read
Do post them...I'm sure Aditee will love it and so will I.
Sure! I shall post more! :D
DeleteIts a delight to read her poems! :')
B/w.. Happy Diwali! :D
I agree that its high time khanak realises that she needs to be the first one to approch not shaan... x
ReplyDeleteshe has to talk soon... she can be independent in solving them but it fells good to have a person to talk too.. hope she reaches out to Shaan..
ReplyDeleteWow!!! Awesome!!! Khanak made Shaan's favorite souffle and he didn't even taste it..:( how rude!!! LOL..He is more angry than ever.. He wants to know everything from her regarding her financial debts..but avoiding her too much when she is not!!!
ReplyDeleteShaan is now more stubborn than her!!! lights certainly didn't disturb her..;) Khanak just needs to say "Shantanu" and he'll just melt in it!!! LOL:D
Looking forward and thanks for writing..:)
Wishing you a very Happy Deepavali!!!
sorry for being late aditee..
ReplyDeleteim too tied up...you answered my questions in the most beautiful way, but still mujhe samaj mein nahi aa raha, that why that Vinod, had called Shaan, instead of Khanak?? she had left her phone at the house???
OHHH...abb dono baat bhi nahi kar rahe hain:(
He paid her bills, tit for tat:D ha ha ha!!
Ritu's call, loved their convo:)
Strawberry souffle:D i still remember his dialogue "You taste like Strawberry souffle, which i had for the desert" sigh!!!
He's ignoring her to the fullest:(
im sure, now he's walked out, Khanak will cry??
And top to that,she's going to her hometown, and he doesn't know that...
Now what will happen?? Update soon:)
Waiting for the next one eagerly:D
Happy Diwali from my side too:D
the way you resolve their fight is very unique! each and every time it has been different, right from when she refused to have an affair with him to their reconciliation!! i start thinking about them and i am lost in their world!!
ReplyDeleteloved the update, each and every word, abhi toh ruthe ruthe piya!! bhindi, souflle, bedroom, nothing worked!! waiting for the next one!!
:) poor girl made fav dessert for him and he didnt even touch it
ReplyDeleteshe couldnt sleep aww that was so tempting man how could shan resist it
loving this hide and seek like they always play
update soon :)))
lovely update Aditee loved it :)
ReplyDeletethey ddin't talk poor girl made his favorite dessert but he refused
omgeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! it was hilarious she pressed his lappy keyboard as light was disturbing her sleep heheheh
awaiitng for their conv
update soon
if you ask me aditee
ReplyDeletethis was yet another bombastic update like Casa of the earlier times
and the dialouges my god especially these:
K saying He paid my installments
Ritu saying mujhse mang leti and khanak:I have the money..lol
and the one related to gawking hotties
dialogues are for sure the strongest point of CASA
lovely update
liked the old feel of CASA in a new mood!
Shaan is once again at fault
ReplyDeletebut as you say characters are meant to be lively not righteous
so I guess its ok
but dont you think its a little bit more on the poor girl
but then this is what she has chosen for herself
loved it, hope Shantanu realizes when she goes off to Maakya again lol
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