Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Part 28


Niojan Nagar
Dec 22nd  Sat
Noonish
Khanak  was working in her room, Bai, Bua and Dadi were cooking Smriti, Fa’s cousins’s daughter and Malini Behn her Mom were both taking a nap in Bai Aada’s room, the boys were creating a riot… Khanak had no control over them, they were not like Mehul and Mitali or Sonali….
The voltage frequently fluctated… she had no intenet connection… she wondered about … ho… Bombay… she wondered if HL brought her yellow lehanga intact… he would… she trusted him more than her hubby when it came to worrying for her clothes… she wanted to trim the shrubs in her balcony… in the balcony of her husband’s room that is……..
She checked her phone……….. no calls…… Ritu was upset with her…….
“Main jaoon?” she would ask
“Nahi” he would say bluntly…..
Khanak sighed… agonized…
She dialled Dadi’s number……..
Dadi picked up on 2nd ring like her grandson…
D: Is this the girl from Gujarat?
K:Hmmm (smiled)
D:The one that’s too adamant
K:Nahi… (lies)
D: You didn’t call me last nite…
K: Ummm (you are not happy with me)
D:That I am not!
K: Dadi…
D:Hmmm.. come back on Monday beta
K: I called to ask if HL brought my yellow lehanga
D sighs…
D: Oh! The one from whats his name?
K: Jee!
D:I am not sure (Dadi smiles slowly)
K:Wahan HL hai?
D:Ummm… I don’t see him…
K:Oh!
D: It should be back
K: I can call him…
D:His phone is not working… (Dadi winks)
K:Oh!
D:I saw him take a bunch of clothes upstairs, not sure if it was urs or ur Bhabhi’s
K wants to know…
D:Shaayad Shaan tha ghar par tab, why don’t you call him?
Dadi smiles to herself… satisfied… as she hangs up…


14 comments:

  1. Dadi is the cutest cupid ever, Kash har dadi aisi hoti phir we won’t have to fret over finding the ‘perfect match’! :P :P
    Will she call or will she not?!
    Khanak call karooooooo!!
    No-one is going to get anywhere if you don’t! You’ll be back in the house by hook or crook :P
    The anticipation is killing...feeling the eagerness of both of them hearing each other’s voices after which seems ages...
    Can’t wait...expectantly he won’t just shut her out...rile her or just bring out the green monster but say SOMETHING warna I’m 100% sure she will extend her stay...he knows that too :D

    Oh thank youuuu (:
    Waiting Aditee...Ek aur update please please (later if you are not BUSY)!

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    1. I'm sure he wont cut the phone Sonam! ;) Or they're kind of unpredictable..so I BADLY hope! :P He would not help her speak though! :P He'll ACT annoyed may be! ;)

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    2. I know! Obviously they won't be 'talking'
      I'm pretty sure he'll drop a hint of the party and leave her fuming :P like in the mehndi?! Do you remember about his bachelor party?! He did the same thing :D

      Kuch bhi kaho! Par call tho karooo!! Lol!!

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    3. Ayeee! How in heaven can I ever forget that? *Sigh*
      I've kind of lived every emotion through them! They make me smile,laugh,cry,blush, and sigh! And so, I say..Casa possess a life like no other!

      But sad, I never got a chance to gush about those scenes! I'm glad I found you! ;) :D

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  2. i m dying to c them to speak over with each other more than them :(
    when they will talk man
    dadi is very clever is umar me bhi unka dimag ghode ki tarah bhagta hai LOL!!!
    love her
    but itna chota update kya ek aur mil raha hai

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  3. awesome! Best Dadi ever! keep it up Aditee!

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  4. Khanak, call him, please!! kuch toh baat ho dono ke beech!!

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  5. awesome Aditee
    khanak call him yaar even he's not calling
    abh kya hoga

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  6. Ayeee...! How I love this Dadi!

    She is the cutest and best cupid ever! :D Unhi ke bharose hum yaha beithe hain! :P Kisses to her! <3

    God! SHE has to call him! Karegi kya??
    OMG! This restlessness is killing Aditee..Jaldi update karo..pleasseeeee!

    Aaj raat hi ek aur?? Please??

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  7. hahaha..Daadi is just awesome..
    This time no body is happy with Khanak leaving to maike without informing her hubby..

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  8. daadi is awsome.. love her...
    yh nobody is happy with khanak leaving without informing shaan loool
    know lets see what shaan say and what happens.. x

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  9. lovely updates
    loved the conv between shaan and dadi and sunil part was fun
    madz seems to be unfazed by any act of her DIL
    oh my khanak's bua is so irritating
    poor soul must be depressed her aada is very disappointed
    i wonder wen her dadi will cum to know how she'll react
    hmm finally a call to dadi
    thought dadi is a sweetheart and awesome but em quite sad that she is upset with khanak
    she has to return by mon any how coz of the internet connection
    em waiting eagerly for shanak moments... a call or fb plz aditee
    loved it
    continue soon

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  10. good.. she called Dadi.. and Dadi gave her the perfect answers.. hope she calls her hubby now..

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  11. Loved it!!! Dadi is awesome!!! Guiding Khanak to her hubby..LOL:D Hope Khanak will call Shaan in the middle of his dancing..And he is so gonna act and fib that he is enjoying a lot without her..infuriating her!!! Looking forward and thanks for writing..:)

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