Part 33
Niyojan Nagar
10 PM ish
Niyojan Nagar
10 PM ish
Bai was very happy when she returned from the temple and
Aada told her Khanak had actually spoken with him, and he had “allowed” her to
stay.
Bua wondered how she would be able to take so much time
off, her husband… a bum… had recently quit a job Aada had recommended for him,
Bua was not bright enough to pursue college after high school, she waited to be
married… and they found Fa…
Found…. Because, he was
a permanent fixture in their lower middle class social curcuit…. Handsome,
a good talker but good for nothing…. Aada had wanted Dadi to wait… for a couple
years… so he could save more money and get her married to a better guy…
Bua was “in love”…. With a bum….
In the marriage of over 20 years… he must
have held over 20 jobs…
So Aada’s income sustained..his own family, his Mom and
his sister’s……. Bua wanted to have 4 kids, but miscarried a couple times and it
did not happen….
Bai would say “Destiny” “If they had all been girls, aada
would have been brought to his knees in poverty”
Sonali was pampered… and coddled and protected…
Bua’s entitlement atitude grew as Khanak grew…
Having inherited her Aada’s nature… the complete calmness
and sombre atitude… they did not hear a whimper from the child from when she
was little… mature before her age…her “masti” days were infrequent……….
The widowhood did not help either…
But before that…the family did not expect her to fallin “love”.Bua
incidentally was the one that protested the most………
Sooraj was from a higher caste… and so she assumed Khanak
“wont fit in”
God had different plans also……….
Aada wondered many times, what brought them together…
Khanak did not need to rebel… there was not a rule she disliked while growing
up… there were no rules needed… for her
He was surprised when she brought Sooraj home one
vacation…. Along with Ritu…
The home phone rang…
Aada jumped… pushing his thoughts away… and answered…
It was Khanak’s Dadi saas… she wanted to know why Khanak wouldn’t
answer her cell phone…
Aada smiled…
Dadi: Ghar par hai?
A:Jee!
D: Main baat kar sakti hoon?
A:Abhi bulaata hoon
D:Mere potey ko yaad karti hai ya nahi?
A:Kiya ney aaj shaam ko baat cheet…Deekra khoob saras
chhe (very good boy) (hapy)
Dadi is pleased she smiles “Thanks”
A: Usko bola tu Bai ke paas 3 hafta reh lena
Dadi is shocked….
A: Abhi bulaata hoon Khanak ko
He hollers in Gujarati…
Khanak comes running… Sonali and her were splashing water
on each other while doing dishes in the aangan……..
She is dripping wet
Khanak:Hhhhh… hello
Dadi: How are you?
Khanak: Dadi… (smiles)
Dadi: You sound happy! (annoyed)
Khanak: Sonali and I were having a water fight………..
Dadi is not happy…
Khanak:Dadi?
Dadi: are you staying for 3 weeks? (direct)
Khanak’s insides lurch and careen to the ground…
K: Ummm
Dadi: Shaan ne bola?
(surprised)
K: He is mean (soft, angry, upset)
Dadi is quiet………
K:Aap theek hain (calm)
D:Hmmm
D:Are you having a good time..
K: Bai and Aada are very happy to see me
D:Tabhi 3 hafte rukne ka plan hai?
K:Umm..
D: Naye saal mein tum ghar nahi rahogi?
K:Wo
D:Pradyun aa raha hai for the next couple weeks…….he called wanting to talk with you, tum phone to uthaati nahi, usne tumhe cell phone par bhi kiya kayi baar...
Dadi had NO inkling of how her grandson felt about that guy...
The heated possessive gaze of her husband... scorched her.........
Dadi had NO inkling of how her grandson felt about that guy...
The heated possessive gaze of her husband... scorched her.........
K:Achha…? Has his hair grown back? (smiling)
Prad had shaved his head as yet another prank........
Prad had shaved his head as yet another prank........
D:Come see for your self……
Amogh coos , Dadi is holding him…
K: I miss Amogh SO MUCH Dadi…
D:I am finding him a new girlfreind… someone from Mumbai
Khanak smiles…
D:You are supposed to call me everyday… deal?
K:Jee! (sad)
A huge SUV races honking noisily on the street… it was
not a Toureg…… but yet…
Garth Brooks’s song came to her mind…
The other day I saw a car like you used to drive
I got a funny feeling down deep inside
And for the briefest moment I felt a smile begin
Yes I do think about you every now and then
I got a funny feeling down deep inside
And for the briefest moment I felt a smile begin
Yes I do think about you every now and then
wooooow hope its shaan and ge stays for a few days, and they can bond more loool
ReplyDeletexx
I also hopes it Shaan :) would be just like in season one except its not her birthday this time
ReplyDeleteSorry haven't been able to comment on other updates
Take care :)
Aada is so naive.. he doesnt know Shanak's way of dealing things.. so happily feeling proud..
ReplyDeletelooks like Prad's entry has forced the brat to come to AMD.. is it?? I hope it is Shaan and he takes her home right now..
Hi Aditee :-)
ReplyDeleteAwesome parts.. Loved it all <3<3
Is it Shantanu i so feel its him.. Khanak too knows he will come.. I am so excited i know u will bring him to her in a perfect time i was waiting after the call i thought they will meet soon... I want them to stay here for few days then go to Mumbai :-)
Thanks for the lovely parts :-)
Love u always!! <3<3<3<3
OMG she is really going to stay for 3 weeks its so sad and bad hope kuch chamatkar ho jaye aur shan aajaye khanak ko lene
ReplyDeleteloved the update :)
Superb!!! Awww!!! Dadi is so upset knowing that Khanak will be staying there for 3 weeks..:(
ReplyDeleteYippee!!! Pradyun is back!!! cool!!! It will be so fun to see Shaan,Khanak and Pradyun in one frame..LOL:D The scene will be quite intense bringing the best in all..Especially Shaan possessiveness and Khanak joining Pradyun in his flirt infuriating Shaan to the core..:)
Dont think its Shaan in that SUV!!! but nothing can be predicted!!!
Looking forward and thanks for writing..:)
wow hope she goes back within a week, this doesn't seem like a good time since she just got the promotion
ReplyDeleteAnd glad you included the FB of Suraj..:) On Bua..LOL:D typical relative of standing against other person love alone..what will she do if Sonali loves someone in the future??? does she ve any clue that her daughter ve crush on Shaan?!?
ReplyDeleteMujhe pata nahi kitni baar kehna padega..but Ady, I absolutely hate this bua! -_-
ReplyDeleteAada has always been the protector of the family..and now His daughter..but they'd never get treated like they should be! And sad, the world is filled with thankless souls!
I've always loved your Khanak! Cant ever admire her enough! She is tough, ambitious, and knows exactly what she wants! A woman who always respected her every relation, and loved and cared for them unconditionally!
Dadi! Sighhhh! I LOVE her! Every time, its her..who bring them together! :D
PRAD! :D Did I ever mention I have secret crush on Prad! ;) :P Dont hit me ppl, but I often felt bad for him! And his and Sonali's characters are TOTALLY incomparable! Sonali is irritating..while, this guy brings some positive vibe in the story! And always end up bringing the couple closer! :D
So whats her plan?? Would 'Jealousy' be her weapon this time! ;) Ghoosshh..! This is AWESOME! :D Would be great fun! Cant wait to have Prad back! :D
Update JALDIIIIIIIIIII!
You love Prad too :D
DeleteHe reminds me of the the university guys...full of those Prad's are surrounded around my world. lol!
Though in real-life don't pay them much heed...but there is something so delightful about this one maybe due to the fact he brings alot in surface for the couple...he a cute dork and a good one :D
Hi-5! :D
DeleteHaha! Even I find him too adorable!
I love having him around..! Shaan is always super attentive then! ;)
Oh just deleted the post in the previous one as wrote the same on here :D lol!
DeleteWell, you can be his 'Khanak' if you want :P
FOR NOW! I want to see the green-eyed monster in Shantanu, although I like to see Khanak's side too...maybe Mahi can come to play again for a while. lol!
And I've replied there already! :P
DeleteNahi..nahi..! I'll be his Khanak later on! Abhi ke liye, He has freedom to run behind Khanak! :P Lol!
Oh yeah! Mahi! :D
OMG! Would be great fun! :D
B/w all the mess, just their eyes communicating! Sighhh!
I know...I doubt Khanak likes Mahi either...considering she was her husbands EX!
DeleteI don't want it to be typical...maybe all the friends having dinner and she gets irked in the way he is comfortable with her, like he does with Prad :D
Ayeee!I love them, all hot and bothered! :D
DeleteYou're making me dream! Adyyy, DO THAT! PLEASSEEE!
^^We having too many demands these days :P
DeleteAfter Ritu it was Prad and now Mahiiii! lol!
Aditee...can you play this later but in obviously Casa unstated style :D :D
loved both the updates aditee:D
ReplyDeleteone week extended to three!! LOL!!:P
as we all know, they know how to push each other buttons constantly;)
SUV!! i don't think so its him, but still fingers crossed!!
Waiting for the next one aditee eagerly!!:D
@ Rups- after reading 32, i remembered your line about operator..
i think aada is being the operator now:p
i think Shaan will call aada and tell him to send her back!!lol!!:P
Thank you Aditeeee :D
ReplyDeleteThe amount of emotional baggage she holds is due to her upbringing...it had molded the way she is...she cannot help it even if she tries not to help her family, it's just there and regardless of people being cold blooded, she will still continue to compassionate towards them...her consideration and giving demeanor is very inspiring...
PRAD!!! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!
I love this guy...this fella needs to find his 'Khanak' now...I can't wait!! I love how he is thread unknowingly in Shantanu and Khanak's lifes...brings all those subtle emotions out between the both...Can't wait to how you play him again :D
Aur is she really staying for the 3, Kuch karo Aditeeee?!! It's too long lol! Or I bet before that Shaan will come and kill her :P
The song left an bitter-sweet feeling...never actually heard it before...I searched it and it is beautiful!
Jaldi jaldi updateeee :)
And I really dont want him to find 'His Khanak' now! Not this soon! :O Height of selfishness..but yeah! :P
DeleteI love it, how Prad tries to flirt with Khanak! He is just too adorable!
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DeleteI would LOVE to! :P But then, I'd be highly confused whom to chose among all Gujral brats..as I'm in love with them all! :P so currently, I dont wanna put myself in a mental confusion! :P Lol! So, LATER! ;) :P
DeleteYup! Its all getting more exciting! :D Gawd, I cant wait to witness a jealous, Mad Shaan! ;) :D
LOL! I like Amogh the most :P well, after Shantanu ofcourse!
DeleteI knoww! Me too...I hope Khanak comes back before the new year actually she should take the Prad in her stride and take the advantage...Shantanu is sulking abit TOO much now!
THAT is what! How in heaven can I be with Prad, when Shaan would disturb my conscience every now and then! :O :P Lol!
DeleteYes..yes! She MUST! :( This is getting nowhere now!
Even she is not ready to budge! 1 week chodke 3 week kardiya! Uff!
I'm sure Aditee has something unpredictable in plan...like always :D :D
DeleteThat's the whole joy of reading this FF...so unassuming!
Indeed! :D So unique, so beauty filled!
Deleteaditee...all the updates r awesome....i liked their phone coversation...when she says 3 weeks...uhhh....theses two r adorables...i love this shanak a lot....u r an awesome writter...
ReplyDeletecasa the great...
lovely updates Aditee! finally they talked and "the war has intensified"!! hope the entry of Pradyun helps to get over this impasse!! Pradyun has always been successful in getting a reaction from Shaan!!
ReplyDeleteAll parts r superb as always 25-33 !!!
ReplyDeleteI was so busy 4 dat can't comment earlier
So she is staying her mother place 4 next 3 weeks :0 Shaan was huge angry on her n she just didt care like always
Anyways looking 4ward 4 next part
Update soon..........