Friday, November 30, 2012

Part 41


Mangal Kunj
Dec 28th
Saturday
Noonish
dADI: Who is planning on going to the movie, who will be here for lunch?
Ray:Me!! Me!! Me!! Movie… I mean (giggle)
Dadi looks at Pradyun “Depends on whos going Au…I mean Dadi”
Dadi smacks him…
Prad:She packs quite a punch (to Khanak)
K:I don’t mess with her…
D:Aur TUM, nahayi kyon?
K is speechless… “Umm”
R:Theres paint all over her room Dadi, I think she rolled in it…
Dadi clears her throat…
K:I am going Dadi…
P:Me 2
K: We are going to a chick flick
P: So?
D hollers for HL
Madz and Nandu Maasi are leaving, Sunil and Akshay Bhayya plan to go to work…
K:Dadi do you want to go too?
D:Kedi movie?
K looks confused…
R:That’s Punjabi for which one…
K:Oh!
K:Don TWOOOOOOOO
Dadi: Nahi beta!
K:Please Dadi…
They hear music being played upstairs in Shaan’s room…
D:Usko poocha tumne?
K pretends to look at the movie page on the newspaper…
R:Bhayya is taking pics…
D:Where? (confused)
R:In the room…. (giggles)
HL appears
D:In logon ke liye kuch banao ya lekar aao… Khanak thand mein barf ho rahi hai, AC kam karo…
HL smiles…
D:Suno beta, lekar aa jao, Towers se, Asian?
Ray squeals…
K makes a face
P is somber
D:Teeno ke teen nakhre…
Shantanu Gujral leaves the music on and walks downstairs…. Casually… his eyes lock with his wife’s… at the dining table, as he descends the steps….
He has his camera with him…
D:Should I ask him to get tickets too?
R shrugs
D taps K gently “Earth calling! Earth calling!”
P uses the opportunity “Pradyun is the despot, Pradyun is the despot” whispers in her ear
K giggles “More reason not to return then…
D:Khanakkk!
K:Jee?
D:Inox at Nariman Point?
K:Hmmm…
P:Can I drive again…. Pleeeeeeeez
K’s face pales…
Shaan’s ears cock up…
D is talking to HL…
Ray is on the ipad…
Maria brings Amogh, changed now… into some designer baby wear…
Amogh leaps into her arms…
Her husband seats himself right across from her… texting now…
D:Shaan, Tum jaaoge kya?
S:Where?
P:No Dadeeee… he  was a je I mean… (rubbing his stubbly head)
Dadi looks at Pradyun shocked…
S waits for the word to be uttered so he can receive Dadi’s wrath
D:You two are worse than when u were teenagers…
P sulks
She is defensive but looks back at him like “Why do you care”
P: As long as I get to drive, I will go anywhere… (looks at Khanak)
Ray: Bhabhee lets send him to the Andamans…
K nods biting her lower lip
D:Was Pradeep downstairs when you came from the airport?
S is startled first… furious next…
P:I think so… (“I have no clue where the drivers hang out” look on his face)
S:HE drove? (incredulous)
D:Tum to the nahi, Akshay and Dad were meeting the auditor in the study upstairs… Pradeep lauta nahi tha Madhavi ke friend ke appointment se…… (casual, preoccupied)
K focuses completely on the baby… showing him how to count….
D:Oh! Anyway… they are all going to watch Don 2…
S looks at his wife like “Really? THIS one”
P: I know..  I know… we will hear something about how his highness hates Hindeeee movies…
D laughs…
S:Sure! (looking straight into his wife’s eyes) but.. I will drive.
Pradyun is visibly disappointed, Ray jumps up and hugs him, S has a “Lets play this game your way then” look on his face as he connects with his wife





13 comments:

  1. OMG he is going to drive yayyyyy kya woh movie bhi dekhega ya sirf driver banega i hope he stays
    i dont know about romantic but it will be so much of fun to watch them messing with each other in theatre LOL!!!

    hey tumne toh ek din me 2-3 updates back-to-back dene toh chod hi diye can v get another one plzzzzz

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  2. This is thrilling...I love Casa. Period :D
    Sighhhhhh!! I want this Shantanu. Period :P
    I dream every gaze, lock and expression of his...I could imagine him simply walking down the stairs, but his eyes fixated on the one person he is infatuated by...

    Both are using reverse tactics to get back at each other :)
    Did she choose the hindi movie by purpose so he won’t come? I had the matching expression as Shantanu I hate the Don franchise! Urgh.
    His literally hovering around her, I wonder if this guy has any ‘work’ lol! Bechara...when he has the ability to spend time with his wife they’re having a sparring match and upar se family.

    Prad <3 Kya hoga iska? He needs to find someone ASAP!
    You’re such a cute flirt...He provokes the emotions and behaviour of Shantanu which makes him more enticing...though his naturally appealing BUT Prad brings out the insecurity...it’s like he cannot hold the fact Khanak is relaxed with him.

    This can unintentionally be his punishment number one...have to suffer watching a HINDI movie with the family :P
    I can’t wait for the next update...mujhe dekhna hai kya hoga in the movie theatre! Khanaks challenge to ignore and his attempts to irritate her further.

    P.S. I love the sense of humour! I wanted to point it out before...you drop one or two casual lines and they are sharp! Even Prad ‘ Pradyun is the despot’ had me in splits...I can identify him saying that...such a adorable fool!

    Jaldi se updateeeee....sooooon! Please :D

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    1. Lovely Analysis Sonam! :D

      About our need for a 'Shantanu', Sighhh! I wonder if there is anyone as perfect and classy as him! Imagining the guy itself takes my breath away each time!

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    2. Thank youuu :D
      Hope youre good :)

      Well, Aditee has created a masterpiece milne se bhi nahi kio milne wala...i feel for my mum, i'm going to end up comparing every guy to him :P

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  3. oh..ho.. Shaan and Hindi movie... waiting.. these 2 can never stop fighting..

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  4. Thats cool..Shaan..

    PS: I'm requesting this again n again but u dont listen..Still I ask again coz I wish to comment reading updates.. Please remove the verification code for comments in ur settings so that it would be easier.. That is the reason I dont comment for all the updates now-a-days.. If u r not doing that now I wont trouble u again..

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    1. Heyyy you :)

      I hope Aditee can help, but google blogs have verification codes to control spam as far as i know :) only the private blogs dont have that as the blogger has its set readers.

      Hopefully Aditee will be able to help :)

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    2. It has that option and I myself have requested few other bloggers n they were able to do that..

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  5. Uff! AWESOME update Aditee!

    Prad! Lol! What is this guy upto? I mean, he is least bothered by the fact that the girl the MARRIED! :P He is completely entranced, smitten and mesmerized by her! :P

    I LOVE the 'jealous' Shantanu! He is jealous of every minute She spends with him, every expression She sends his way..and every thought! He is literally wanting to rip him to pieces and purge her from her mind and from anywhere near her! :P lol! The guy's possessive..and believes..she belong ONLY to him! <3 *Sighhh*

    Oh! I SO wanted him to know that Prad drove her back home! :D THAT added fuel to fire! ;) But I wonder, why Don-2! -_- Movie ko flop hona hi hain kya Aditee? :P

    Ab kya hoga? Are they going to have an 'indirect' verbally sparring? Ahh..I'm loving it! :D

    Continue sooooon! :D

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  6. now, this is getting very interesting!! it will be fun to watch the game!!

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  7. this is getting interesting looool xxx

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  8. very interesting I agree, loved the update!

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  9. Awesome!!! Finally Shaan got to know that Pradyun drove Khanak from airport..ROFL:D Wow!!! all are going for a movie including Shaan!!! Remember how he dozed of watching Ranbir Kappor film last time with Khanak..Will he watch the it now???
    Looking forward and thanks for writing..:)

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