Thursday, May 16, 2013

Part 126


February 17th
Around midnite…
Khanak’s cards were hidden under a scarf as her left hand was unusable, Pradyun offered to help her with the Poker hands….she declined….
Ritu was winning, she had 3 stacks of Rs.1000 chips…. Since Kritik insisted they play with real money Khanak was screwed…. She was down Rs.3400 already L
There was a couple guys and a dating couple also,so the stakes were bigger….
Shaan was not paying much attention to the game, his thoughts wandered between his phone and Prad’s eyes… Pradyun sat across from Khanak on the dhurrie….
Shaan sat by her criss cross his knee pressing down on hers……… “Tchh” she would protest… as he would reach to refill his SOR….
He would just look at her and turn away…
R:Apna phone band karo Gujral
Guy1:His wife is by him who is texting him?
Khanak: Oh! I am just the mistress…
Guy2 (startled) Umm… oh!...Oh!
Kritik laughed
Shaan gulped… demanding a “show”…. And he won…
R:Or……. Just text on your phone…. Scumbag! (sulking at Shaan for wiping her out this game)
Khanak emptied her bowl of chocolate mousse, turning the cup upside down and waiting for the last drop to trickle on to her tongue…….
R:Aur laaoon?
K:Ummm…mmm (sighs)
Pradyun’s sat almost untouched…. He didn’t dare offer her his…. Khanak stared at her husband’s half finished bowl…
S:Its yours! (softly)
K:Nahi! (looking at him)
R:Tum dono apni romance ko hold par dalogey?
Kritik:Saawan is the dealer now?
Ritu: Nahi MYSTERY!
K:Ughhh… I don’t know much…
Ritu:Haan bhai strip poker se thoda alag hai
The dating couple laughed…. The guy “Practice, practice practice!”
Khanak sneered at the guy…
Shaan chuckled
Pradyun shifted uncomfortably
Kritik: That’s our cue hun! To go away on a boat and play all day
Ritu: PLAY ALL DAY?
Khanak:I… I am going to go brush my teeth (jumping out of her skin, her face crimson)
R:Mystery!
The couple looked up at her “You cant be shy” the girl commented
R:She IS… she will run… arey who BAAT nahi karti… I mean discussing s--- life?
She WONT… with strangers? She will die…
Shaan looked at his wife’s departing form…
A small smiled formed in the corner of his lips
Kritik:Chal main dealer!
Shaan’s phone rang… he stood up and walked into the room he shared with his wife and shut the door
Something told Ritu she wont see her friend until morning….





8 comments:

  1. wow loved it
    oohhh love the hot conv between all the guys hahaaahhaa
    ahhh i also agree with ritu i think khanak and shan will not return to the game lol!!!!
    update soon :)

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  2. Awwwww I wonder whats honna hapeen in the room ;-);-);-);-);-)

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  3. Loved it..:) They are playing poker..OMG!!! That too with money..Wonder what Khanak's Aada would say seeing her like this!!!

    Shaan so jealous and thinking about Pradyun..Lol..:D

    ShaNak finally will get some space..Will they fight???

    Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..:)

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  4. amazing!! loved it aditee :)))
    lagta hai shaan was going to screw prad in the ground lol!!! He does really hate his cousin :D :D
    'mistress'!!! lol!! khanak is quiet whatever she says is either in depth or entertaining!! lol!!
    eshhhh!! the poker game moved into a different 'talk' lol!! khanak reaction was adorable :))
    awwwwwwie!! little eye talks and nahis' are very cute and aurrr shaans smile wile khanak is leaving :D
    loved it aditeeeee :)))

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  5. Thank you so much for updating aditee:-D
    Loved the poker game..yes! Shaan won:-D
    Ahem! Hope what ritu is thinking becomes true!LOL!
    Ofcourse she can have his share..
    Is prad staying the night at ritu's??
    Update the next part soon aditee..ur time of stopping kills me:-P:-)

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  6. it was an awesome update!! Shaan's focus is on the right places!! loved the conversation!! want to know what happened behind the shut door......just what did they talk about generally.....Aditee!!

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  7. u cannot discuss this with strangers.. thats bad manners.. hahaha..

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  8. Lovely update... Shan won... Wow!

    Khanak' s reply... Mistress !! LOL...

    Mindblowing convo at poker....lol

    poor prad.... Shana showing hz power.....

    Shanak in room...hayeee....

    Update soon...

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