Dec 28th
K:What did you do? (croaked)
He stood there unfazed….
She grabbed a rag she had on the side, the paint
was making its way to her jeans…..
She heard footsteps… uttering a “OMG!” she looked
up at him in panic…
“The door is closed he supplied unfazed…
Still not helping her…. Furious, she would come
back but yet not speak a word, she was blistering too…. He had rejected her
advances TWICE, and had been sulking for weeks….
Her hands are soaked, now…. She gets up hurriedly…
sprints to the bathroom, leaving a red paint trail…
Shuts, bolts the door, showers, rinses off as
much paint as she can…. Wears her toweling robe, steps out, changes into grey
lounge pants with a silvery pattern, and a spaghetti blouse in grey…, it has a
another blouse with sleeves intended to be worn on top… she forces her wet arms
into it… ties her dripping wet hair… wears more kohl…
he is messing with his camera equipment by the
balcony, trying to capture “that one shot” of sun’s ray’s hitting her roses….
The mess by the balcony is still intact….
She jumps over her paint trail, he turns around
and checks her out thoroughly… a draft of cool breeze sends chills down her
spine… her hair soaks her blouses…
She acts like he doesn’t exist.. there is a knock
on the door….
He doesn’t turn, expects her to get it….
She doesn’t, walks back into her closet… still
furious….
Ray: Bhabheee… WHERE were you?
K: In the shower….
Ray:I asked Bhayya, he said he didn’t know… he is
smart arsed… (whispers giggling)
K:THAT he is…
R: Lets go downstairs, pleeez
K:Sure!
K is not unpacking, she wont until he admits he
was nasty…
She didn’t have any place else to go, but yet….
R:Are you unpacking?
K:No! (firm)
She sees her husband appear with his camera, aims
it at Ray, she pretties herself for the pic…
R:Bhayya: How about this one…
He grins…
K attemps to leave, he doesn’t budge from the
doorway… just shoots his cousin in various poses….
R:One with Bhabheee
He looks at her
K: Not really! (bluntly)
R:Pleeeez
K Mmmm…mmm
K almost shoves him out of the way…. Her wet hair
dampens his tee in the process…
R: There is paint everywhere! (shocked, paying
attention now)
K: Your Bhayya caused it…
R:Bhabhi… can we go watch a movie….
S: Hey Ray, where is that lens Mum said she
bought?
R looks confused… “Don’t know, bro” (giggles)
K wants to leave, but knows, he might be gone, he
wishes she wont take up R’s idea for the movie…
K: Movie sounds great…
R:You are the best!
Hugs her
K: Only YOU realize that (giggling conspiratorily)
S mutters “Of course!”
The women leave him and walk away… as he shoots
their departing form… capturing droplets of water draining from his wife’s
locks…
loved it cant wait for them to actually sit down and talk.. x
ReplyDeleteoh wow this cold war is interesting man can v get another one plzzzz early
ReplyDeleteOh boy, They're spitting fire through their eyes..but still cant resist each other! :P How cute is that!
ReplyDeleteNow he again want HER to take the next step! Thats BAD! Coz I highly doubt the possibility! Considering the fact that she tried to reach out twice, yet He wont budge! This is FUN! :D
His photography! :D Something I've always admired! Just like how her painting complements her silence..His photography also complements his nature! And there is this classiness in everything he does! His each act, word..makes me fall for him all over again!
I love it how He is fun, and always sweet with his cousins! Prad is certainly an exclusion, with whom he is always mean! And its KIND OF justified! :P lol!
Yup! Movie sounds great! :D BUT, not for Shantanu! :P Paagal, he wont speak..but want her around! Sometimes its like, just her presence around..is satisfying! :)
The whole thing's taking me back to those old fun filled wedding days! :D LOVING it aditee!
Cotinue VERY soon!
Thank youuu Aditeee :)
ReplyDeleteRaaaaaaynaa...She has the worse timing ever!
I don’t know where to analyse from
They are to die for when fighting each other out. Sigh!!
There is something very incredible engaging pull towards them.
Pehle tho Shantanu’s arrogance and smugness is drool-worthy! I like how he riles her up purposefully...he knows she is fighting her bottled feeling which are ready to explode :D
Ahaa! Khanak tho even better :D
I like how she has her private battle with the suitcase...trying to prove him a point :) lol!
He has to apologise though for being abit TOO mean, I don’t expect a sorry! Something that makes up for his missed calls.
P.S. The little mundane gestures you provide are beautiful...like him taking pictures of her art or even hair droplets, it’s poetry... his obsessions towards her...sometimes I feel no-one is as par as him, even your Khanak :D
Updateeeeeeeee sooooonnnn!
loving this Aditee!! Khanak should torture him!!
ReplyDeleteahh loved it thanks for updating!
ReplyDeleteBoth 39 n 40 parts r awesome :)
ReplyDeleteSo they finally met lolzz in that such way
Waiting 4 next part..........
wow.. these 2 should seriously consider moving out of this house.. too many distractions... they never get a chance to make up though they fight a lot.. lol..
ReplyDeleteGosh!! i thought she would through another color at him:p
ReplyDeleteShe shoved him out of the way..hahaha...
Its some what fun, watching two people fight:p
i'll be grinning, whenever my parents fight, u know the healthy ones filled with lots of teasing, even they'll start to laugh at the end:D
waiting for next one eagerly:)))))
Awesome!!! Still the fight is going on!!! when'll they call truce??? Ray is not gonna leave her bhabi even for a minute alone..ROFL:D
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thanks for writing..:)